Ariya FF: Pyar ki Daastan Note page16 - Page 8

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Posted: 7 years ago
#71
Amazing update
So emotional
Loved it
Cont soonish
Bye take care
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Posted: 7 years ago
#72
Nice updt
Loved it

Poor Arjun

Cont soon

Edited by Ariyatogether - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#73
Guys i am really sorry but i am battling a migraine since 2 days and will be able to give the update only next sat
i generally spend the fri night in writing the update thats the day my hubby puts my baby to sleep

Will try my best to try and post by Wed

Only bright spot is my baby took her first step yesterday
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Posted: 7 years ago
#74

Originally posted by: AnjuRish

Guys i am really sorry but i am battling a migraine since 2 days and will be able to give the update only next sat

i generally spend the fri night in writing the update thats the day my hubby puts my baby to sleep

Will try my best to try and post by Wed

Only bright spot is my baby took her first step yesterday

no prob dear we'll wait uu take care of yourself wow first step lovely
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Posted: 7 years ago
#75
Feel bad for arjun
He should move on in his life
Roshini doesn't deserve his love
Hope sam ll get to know this
Eagerly waiting for his reaction
Awesome update
Cont soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
#76
Its ok
Take care
Wow wht a nice moment for u it would hv been
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Posted: 7 years ago
#77

Chapter 7

A short chapter again. Still struggling with the migraine

"A broken heart is the worst. It's like having broken ribs. Nobody can see it, but it hurts every time you breathe."

Arjun was back to Mumbai in 2 days and did not tell about Rosh to anyone. He was still thinking on sending the papers to Rosh to finish everything off legally

===============3 Weeks later=======================

Rathore POV

Arjun mood seems to be off. I mean his detection skills are still sharp. But his anger passion seems to be dull. Should I ask him what's wrong? Sometimes I miss hanging out with him. I especially want his help in asking Ayesha out. He was the Romance king of our gang. Rosh loved him so much. I miss the chulbuli Rosh. Sometimes saakshi reminds me of her but i know Arjun totally dislikes her and has told me he will leave ETF if ever he is assigned to partner her in a serious investigation. He says he prefers Rishu or Riya. I can understand his preference for Rishu. But Riya i mean she is a hothead and they argue a lot. I see shree,Arjun, riya and Rishu have their breaks together most of the time. I mean Riya is smart and a great fit into the team work wise and i discovered she knows quite a bit of first aid

Saakshi POV

Arjun has stopped responding all together. He used to tell me off and get angry now he just acts as if I am not there. Does this mean I have a chance ??. There is annual party in 10 days arjun will surely attend since police commissioner has made it compulsory for all senior officers. I must ask ayesh for help.

Riya POV

I am feeling sad for Arjun he seems so broken. I think he needs help. Should I speak to someone???. Maybe Rishu can help. He seems to hang out with me and Rishu mostly these days though he is silent. I can't discuss with Shree also L. I feel comfortable with him now and Sam generally pairs me with Arjun mostly or Rishu.

I am feeling slight attraction to arjun sometimes. I have rarely felt this much of physical attraction for someone. I used to think maybe something is wrong with me. He always has my back in missions. We still argue on our point of views on investigation. But yes I know that he has my back

Rishu was telling me he likes someone some army doctor in his old unit. I am surprised he is sharing such intimate details with me.

He has helped me a lot by teaching me meditation and tricks to calm myself . Maybe joining ETF was the best decision. I have shree Rishu and to some extent arjun as friends

Rishu POV

When I see Arjun daily I remember Anjali the army doctor who was posted to my unit a few months before we resigned. I know I love her but I am scared since I know Anjali is so much like Riya. The softie behind the harsh exterior. I must meet her when she comes next week to Mumbai on vacation.

Riya makes me feel protective. The day before the annual party is Raksha bandhan I must ask her if she will be my sister

Aukat nahi thi zamane me jo meri keemat laga sake

Kambakth ishq me kya gire, muft me Neelam hogaye



Edited by AnjuRish - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Nice updt
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Cont soon
Thnx for pm
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Fab update dear rishu loves Anjali and Riya is like his sister Riya attracted to Arjun beautiful poetry eagerly waiting for nxt
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Chapter 8

Due to low responses planning to end in 10 chapters


Riya POV

When one of the songs from my favorite band MLTR was playing I was thinking of Shree

Life comes in many shapes
You think you know what you got
Until it changes

And life will take you high and low
You gotta learn how to walk
And then which way to go

Every choice you make
When you're lost
Every step you take
Has it's cause

After you clear your eyes
You'll see the light
Somewhere in the darkness
After the rain has gone
You'll feel the sun comes
And though it seems your sorrow never ends
Someday its gonna make sense

Tears you shed are all the same
When you laughed 'till you cried
Or broken down in pain

All the hours you have spent in the past

We have come a long way together sometimes I feel I am the reason Shree and Liza are not together. Liza had told me this once but shree is my heart I cannot cut myself off. I am thinking if I date someone maybe her insecurities may decrease. Tomorrow we are going undercover to a rave party. I am paired with Arjun. Saakshi was really mad with Sam for this. But Arjun it seems has made it clear that he will either be paired with me or Ayesh if he has to be paired with a woman. I feel Sam likes Ayesha and she too likes him so they are paired together. Ayesha told Sam that she cannot put up with Arjuns anger and arrogance. He is not that bad I feel.

Arjun POV

I am happy that I will not be paired with Ayesha or Saakshi. Most importantly Saakshi. Ayesha is ok but she is saakshis Twin and sometimes when we are paired up invariably brings the topic of saakshi up on how she likes me and stuff.

Riya sometimes I feel is so much a reflection of me. So cold and arrogant. I hope she will be able to act like a partner. I know for a fact that she dislikes being touched

I am happy I have sent the finalized divorce papers to Rosh.

Saakshi POV

Looks like I have no way but to seduce Arjun. I feel like attaining him has become my obsession. Di told me today that my attraction was unhealthy and maybe I needed therapy

================Next Day 7PM at the Party==================

Arjun POV

I am shocked to see Riya in a backless gown. I must say she is hot. Oh what happened Riya looks like she has seen a ghost on seeing that lady in Silver gown. I know she is some actress Raina something. Shree whispers that she is older sister of Riya and a very big bully. I can see that she has now composed herself after Shree went over and gave her a hug. I am so jealous of the relationship they share. So much care and most important trust. I have always seen them talk things out even when they have arguments at work

Riya POV

When I and Arjun were dancing I could see Di walking towards me I knew if she recognizes me our cover would be blown and so I started kissing Arjun. I knew she will never come near a couple that is making out. I was surprised when he kissed me back. For the first time I felt desire and something more which I can't identify. I heard Rishu signaling to me that the dealer was entering the washroom and he needed backup

We were able to nab him.

After the reports were filed I went to the record room and when I tried to open I realized I was locked in .

Rishu POV

I felt that Riya needed me. Riya was that sister I always wanted as I always felt protective about her. Arjun came to me looking for her since he had a doubt on one of our old cases. We were unable to find her.

Finally, when we found her I realized she was having a panic attack. When I was able to calm her down finally surprisingly with the help of Arjun. She went off home with Shree.

I told Arjun I saw them kissing and he needs to tread carefully. I told him Riya is a time tomb any emotional hurt will take her to a place where she cant come back. I was really surprised when Arjun told me he is developing feelings for her.

I am happy I know that he can take care of Ri


"I tell of hearts and souls and dances...
Butterflies and second chances;
Desperate ones and dreamers bound,
Seeking life from barren ground,
Who suffer on in earthly fate
The bitter pain of agony hate,
Might but they stop and here forgive
Would break the bonds to breathe and live
And find that God in goodness brings
A chance for change, the hope of wings
To rest in Him, and self to die
And so become a butterfly."
Karen Kingsbury

Precap

Big confrontation between Sam and Arjun

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