Ariya ss Jajzzba :an emotion part 9 updated 9 july - Page 8

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Posted: 7 years ago
#71
Awesome update
Love it
Eagerly waiting for next part
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Posted: 7 years ago
#72
nyc update .. I really felt bad for Aryan ... vicrant shakshi ko jante hai ??!! interesting!! thanks for pm but plz agar link nahi bhej paya to at least part number n page number batana pm me...
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Posted: 7 years ago
#73
Aww so sad everybody hv sad past
Feel bad for riya
Nice updates
Cont soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
#74
Wow its amazing ariya story...
Read all the four parts...
Too interesting yaar...
Sad for riya and all those ppl who have faced a lot
Hope ab riya aur arjun ko unki manzil jaldi mil jaaye
Aur unn saare maasoomon ko insaaf...
Cont soon
And plzzz do pm me..
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Posted: 7 years ago
#75
Thank u so muchhh all of u friends
So happy with ur response
Sorry i can't reply individually abhi abhi mobile se IF chalana sikhaa he
I will learn it so friends r u happy with story
I know story slow hai but i want to show every characters emotional side

Part 5


Shree and sakshi in market ...
Shree : oudii baba ami to gaye
Sakshi: kya hua shree
Shree : mene ik gadbad kar diya sakshi ... jab hum sab baat kar rahe the to mere ik mobile application ka update aaya thaa
Sakshi : tooo
Shree: mene usko upgrade karne k liye yes kar diyaa
Sakshi : tooo
Shree: uske bicch me Arjun sir ka call aaya tha aur mene gadbad kar di
Sakshi : matlab
Shree: matlab arjun sir ne humari saari vaate sunn li abb kya hogaa
Sakshi: abb to tu gaya shree arjun sir ne baate sunn li ye baat agar rathod sir ko pata chali to
Shree : sakshi plzzz tumi sweet girl ... tum mera naam sir se to nahi bologi naaa... sakshi laugh ... sakshii dekhh agar tune kuch bolaa naa tooo
Sakshi : tooo ... shree tu mujhe dhamaki de raha he
Shree with puppy face : plzzz maat bata naa tu meri friend he naa
Sakshi : hummm laugh okk nahi bataungi speky sen
Shree : sakshi tum iss naam se nahi bulaogi
Like this both reach guest house


Kuch time pahale (when sameer . Shree . Sakshi not in house)
Arjun : lizaa ye log aaye kya bohot time ho gaya
Lizaa : no sir me shree ko call karati hu
Arjun : tum rHane do me hi call karata hu just do ur work
Arjun in his room
Arjun shree ka number dial karta he
Arjun kuch kahr isse pahale hi usse vikrant ki baate jo usne boli riya k baare me bataya wo sab arjun sun leta hai after sometime he cut the phone

Roshni : kyaa hua ACP sahab kya socch rahe ho
Arjun : riya ne apne life me kitna kuch khooya hai naa roshni
Roshni : yahii baat to me aapko kab se samjhna naa chahati hu ... arjun hume jab dard milta he hume lagta he ki sirf hum hi dukhi hai humse jayada dard aur kisi k pass nahi hai ... lekin sachh to ye hai life me humse bhi jayada dard zindagi me logo ko milta hai ... issiliye me keh rahi hu arjun apne gum se bahar nikalo aur dusro ki bhi help karo ...
Arjun : hummm lekin roshini tum kyo chali gayi
Roshni : arjun abb tumhe mere baare me nahi dusro k dard k vaare me socchna he ... ik baat kahu ... agar tum riya ko usse dard se bahar le aaye naa to samjh lena ki me bohot khush hu ...
Arjun : kya matlab ?
Roshni : kuch nahi tum naa buddhu ho
Arjun smiles me : buddhu ik min me ( roshni disappeared )


Shree and sakshi enter in house
Sakshi : lizaa food k prp ho gayi naa
Liza : tum dono to chale gaye maje karne mujhe yahi chhod diya
Sakshi : kya hua arjun sir ne kuch kaha
Shree : me jakar arjun sir se milkar aata hu
Sakshi : humm abb jo gadbad kiya he wo sudharo

Shree cursed himself : ammi ik dum pagal
Shree entered in arjun room he is looking out through window

Shree : arjun sir wo me galti se sorry sir
Arjun : shree relax me sameer se kuch nahi kahunga
Shree happy hug arjun and
Arjun glares
Shree : sorry sir aap plz rathod sir ko maat batana nahi to me to gaya ... ho sakta he wo mujhe nikal de yaa shayad mera naam ban kar de ho sakta he mujhe job naa mile
Arjun : relax shree mene kaha naa me sameer ko nahi bataunga ki mujhe riya k baare me sab pata he ...
Shree : thank u sir


After sometime sameer entered
Everyone normally chit chat and having lunch
After some times
All team member take rest
In evening

Sam and arjun
Sameer : arjun hume uss terrorist attack k vaare me bahut kuch pata hd lekin vahut kuch pata karna he
Arjun : right sameer
Baki sab join karate he ...
Shree : sir mene sabko ik ik copy de di hai file ki vikrat ki ye data se to aisa lagta he ki
Arjun : ki attack normal terrorist attack nahi he
Shree : haa isse to lag rha he jaise riya ke husband ko jaan bujhh k target banana hi unka maksad thaa ...
Liza : riya k husband bicch me kaha se aa gaya shree
Shree realised ki usne kuch jayada hi bol diya hai
Sameer : guys me tum sabse kuch chupana nahi chahata tha ... actually me shree aur sakshi vikrant se milane gaye the ... aur sameer sab kuch bata deta hai
Sameer : sorry arjun wo vikrant ko laga ki shayad tumse ye baat karna
Arjun : its okk sameer ... abb mera maksad sirf unn logo ko saza dilwana hai ... jab mene ye mission hath me liya tha tabhi mene socch liya tha is roshni ki mout ko apni kamjori nahi takat banaunga ...( sameer and everyone smiles )...

Sameer : to hum iss case ko ETF ki according solve karenge point one unka maksad
Sakshi : point 2 ye ki sirf abhimanyu hi target tha ya koi aur

Liza : agar abhimanyu target tha to kyo
Chotu : hume naa ik vaar uss jagah par jana chahiye jaha ye attack hua tha
Shree : right aur hume naa abhimanyu ka aur kuch officers ka background bhi check karna hoga
Arjun : all of u right ... lekin sabse pahale humme unn logo ki list banani padegi jo log iss attack me maare gaye unke family friend yaa baki chije pata karna hogi

Shree : me naa vikrant sir ko mail karta hu kuch officers k baare me kuch puchna he
Arjun : abhi nahi shree ... hum pahale humara homework kar lete he fir usse bhi baat karenge waise bhi next sunday orphanage jakar milne wale hai hi
Sameer : ye baat tujhe. Kaise pata mene to abb tak ye baat nahi batayi thi
Arjun shree ki taraf dekhta he shree makes puppy face
Arjun : sameer ye baat chhodo kal se sabse pahle shree aur chotu tum unn logo k baare me pata karoge jinn logo ki death iss attack me huyi
Shree and chotu : right sir
Arjun : tum kya socch rahi ho sakshi
Sakshi : sir me socch rahi thi me jab riya se mili thi to unke husband waha conference attend karne aaye the ... fir usske baare me kuch article bhi aaya tha ho sakta he usse koi help
Sameer : right sakshi ... tum usske baare me sab dhundh k nikalo
Chalo guys just leave

Next day
Liza and sakshi trying to find out all articles and details related to case
Shree and chotu left to find about peoples jo attack se related hai

Arjun : sam me yaha ik mandir he me waha jaa raha hu
Sameer : tum aur mandir
Arjun : jab roshni yaha aai thi to usne kaha tha bohot accha hai waha sukun milta he sabko shayad mujhe bhi mil jaye
Sameer hugs arjun ... in mind tujhe sukun jarur mileaga mere dost : okk
Arjun : tu kaha jaa raha he
Sameer : mujhe yaha army officers nishant se milna he
Arjun :kyo tujhe bhi shooting sikhna he ?
Sameer : tu naa tang maat khicch ... i nishant wo nahi he jo uss din aisha ko gun chalane aane wala tha
Arjun : kya baat hai ladki ka naam badi jaldi yaad ho gaya pasand hoto baat chalau
Sameer : tu ja jakar apna kaam kar
Arjun laugh jaa raha hu . Tu bhi nikal shayad teri hur bhi mil jaaye ...
Sameer : bbye

Sameer and arjun left


Sameer apni SUV se army headquarters jata he
He meets with nishant jisko cohelo sir ne sab bataya hota he sameer k baare me
Sameer aur nishat k meeting k baad sameer wapas aata he
He went to shop jaise he wapss aa raha hota he
Ik ladki ki car se takra jata he car slow speed me hoti he sameer jo jayada kuch nahi hota
Girl : sorry sorry wo meri galati se
Sameer : tum yaha ... abb driving bhi sikhani padegi tumko
Aisha : i m sorry sir wo me ik dum se ... i m so sorry ...
Sameer : its okk ... sameer k hath me thodi chot lag jaati he
Aisha : sorry plzz chaliye mere sath me aapke hath me lag gaya he ... plzz chaliye me dressing kar deti hu
Sameer : nahi rahane do itna to chalta he ...
Aisha : dekhiye sir i m really sorry .. i m doctor .. plzz mere sath chaliye .. plzz sir i request
Sameer : okk chalo
Sameer and aisha in hospital

Aisha sameer ki dressing karati he
Aisha : sorry really sorry wo picche wo ladki thi us par dhyaan tha to aap dikhe hi nhi
Sameer : tum sacch bol rahi ho yaa jaan bujhh kar mujhe udhanr ka plan tha
Aisha : me aapko kyo marungi
Sameer : ik baat batao logo ko udhana tumhari hobby hai kya
Aisha : kya matlab
Sameer : uss din gun sikhh rahi thi ... soccha hoga ki gun se kaam nahi chala to car se hi uddha du
Aisha pout : aisa kuch nahi he aapko kisne kaha ki doctor gun chalana nahi sikhh sakate
Sameer : sikhh to sakate hai lekin kyo ?
Aisha : kyo kya apni safety k liye ... aur ye to acchi mind exercise bhi hai ... ise mind fit rehta hai
Sameer : hummm ...lekin shooting sikhne k liye concentration ki jarurat padhati he aapka concentration bohot week hai .. waise aap aapke bhai se sikhh sakti he
Aisha : huh bhai ko time hi kaha he aap sikhha sakate he
Sameer : mai kaise
Aisha : dont worry me naa aapko ghar nahi bulaungi yaha park k pass hi ik club hai waha naa bohot saare games allow hai to aap waha aa jayiye mujhe sikhaa bhi dena
Sameer : isske baare me sochunga
Aisha : plzz i know aap yaha imp kaam se aye he lekin plzz
Sameer : abhi me kuch nahi keh sakta hu ... i think i should leave now
Tabhi nurse : doctor aapko sir bula rahe he wo surgery k baare me discuss karna he
Aisha : okk me aati hu
Sameer : okk miss aisha roy thanks ... aisha smiles ... waise surgery k time par to concentration sahi jagah rehta.he naa aapka
Aisha glare : aap mujhe naa underestimate kar rahe he sir
Sameer : bbye


Sameer in SUV thinking mode on yaar mene aaj tak kisi ladki ko chidhya nahi itnni baat to kisi se nahi ki fir isse kaise ...
I think she is too much talkative girls issiliye ... sameer smiles left






So hows this part boring or good
Friends ur support is so much important
Plzzz errors honge agar kuch confusion hoto let me know
So plzzz give me ur honest feedback
Bbye

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Posted: 7 years ago
#76
Awesome update
Sab ke beech agar koi piss raha hai toh woh sirf Shree hai...
Ha..ha..ha...
Oh samsha finally talked properly I mean unka cute nok jhok
Loved it
Cont soon
Thanx for pm
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Posted: 7 years ago
#77
Nice update..
Thanks for pm
Continue soon.
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Posted: 7 years ago
#78
Nice updt
Arjun ko Ri ka past pata chal gaya
Hope wo sab terrorist ko jaldi pakad lenge
Shree hugged Arjun..lol
Sam Ayesha teasing was gud

Cont soon
Thnx fr pm
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Posted: 7 years ago
#79
so awesome dear
loved it
arjun ne sab sun liya sree ke galti ke karan
par koi nahi arjun isse khud ko mazbut banaraha hai
aur sree ka sakshi aur arjun ke saamne gidgidana was so funny
team completely cop mode pe aagayi hai
wow sasha moments are so cute
cont soon
thanks for pm
bye take care
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Posted: 7 years ago
#80
Wow
Awesome update
Love it
Cont soon

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