Ariya ss Jajzzba :an emotion part 9 updated 9 july

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NainaSM

@NainaSM

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+ 3

Posted: 7 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: Arjunpremi
Ariya ke liye ek paur maun ready. could u please add lrl group?but please dont make abhimanyu bad please.riya ko mujrim mat banana.update soon.please pm me

Abhimanyu kon

Riya ?????? Ko mujrim kyo banaungi yaar

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Tumpa12

@Tumpa12

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Posted: 7 years ago

#32

awesome start

update soon

do pm me

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Sukannaya Chakraborty

@Arjunpremi

Explorer

Posted: 7 years ago

#33

Rajeev khandelwal ke show left right left ke ek kirdar hai abhimanyu.lrl show army based.abhimanyu show ke lead rajveer(rajeev)ka dost tha jo jealous hoke ekbar galti kar diya tha.lekin lrl ff main har writter usko villain banata hai.lekin banda accha hai.jaruri nehi sab ekdum perfect selfless ho.tum ne kaha ki tumhare ff main army hai,to main suggest kiya ki left right left ke charecter ko add karo agar karoge to please abhimanyu ko bura yani villain mat banana.

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NainaSM

@NainaSM

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+ 3

Posted: 7 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: Arjunpremi
Rajeev khandelwal ke show left right left ke ek kirdar hai abhimanyu.lrl show army based.abhimanyu show ke lead rajveer(rajeev)ka dost tha jo jealous hoke ekbar galti kar diya tha.lekin lrl ff main har writter usko villain banata hai.lekin banda accha hai.jaruri nehi sab ekdum perfect selfless ho.tum ne kaha ki tumhare ff main army hai,to main suggest kiya ki left right left ke charecter ko add karo agar karoge to please abhimanyu ko bura yani villain mat banana.

Hey i know my FAVOURITE show lrl

Naina singh yudi hudda alekhh omg

Nahi nahi dont worry me isme abhimanyu ko negative nahi banaungi

Actually isme abhimanyu character to hai but wo kon hai ye baad me pata chalega

Edited by NainaSM - 7 years ago

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Shalvisharma97

@Shalvisharma97

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Posted: 7 years ago

#35

Awesome update

Continue soon

Plzz add me in ur buddy lisy and pm me also arita story

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NainaSM

@NainaSM

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 7 years ago

#36

Thank u all for ur response here another part plzz suggest tital

Wana share i m unable to thank everyone individually

Update mobile se hi karungi to error honge

Sam and Arjun ...and ETF (chotu shree liza and sakshi)

Shree : wowww yaha ka mousam kitna accha hai naa

Chotu : jab weather itna aacha hai to socch khaana kitna tasty hoga

Sakshi : chotu tum humesha khaane k baare me hi socchate ho

Lizaa : kyaa chotu kabhhi to pet ko chhod kar kuch aur soccha karo

Sam : guys tum sab bhul rahe hoto bata du hum yaha ik case k liye hai ... tafari karane yaa holidays par nahi ... all of u r officers dont forget that

All sorry sir

Shree : yaar sakshi mene to soccha tha thoda enjoy karenge

Sakshi : shree chup nahi to abhi samjhe ya samjhau bhi sunna padega

Sam to arjun ...

Sam : hume Major vikrant Roy k ghar par abhi jana chahiye yaa pahale guest house chale

Shree :sir hum na pahale guest house chalate he ye thik rahega haa

Sam gur k dekhta hai ... liza and sakshi smiles

Shree : sorry sir

Arjun : hume guest house jakar time waste nahi karna chahiye

Mai aur sameer Major se milke aate hai tab tak tum sab guest house jao

Sam : lekin rawte ye log

Shree: sir hum bhi chalate hai aapke sath

Lizaa to sakshi .. agar aaj shree chup nahi hua to rathod sir to iski band bajaa denge

Sakshi :ur right liza

Sameer again shree ko gur k dekhta hai chalo tum sab bhi

All went to vikrant roy house ...sab bahar hi khade rehte hai sam enter ... its a nice house with garden

A girl is practicing shooting but she is missing her aim

Sam to girl excuse me

Girl : aa gaye tum bhai ne to kaha thaa army man time k punctual hote he aur tum late ho

Sam . Lekin me

Girl : kyaaa lekin aab aa hi gaye hoto shoot karke bhi dikhao me bhi to dekhu tumko shoot karte aata bhi hai yaa

Sam :dekhiye miss meri

Girl : haa tumhari hi shooting dekhna hai ... pakado isse ( gun uske hath ne deti ) abb mera muh kya dekh rahe ho chalao

Sameer gun leta hai and shoot correctly on aim ... wo baki k saare points par correct nishana lagata hai

Girl : maanaa padega bhaiya ne banda to sahi chunaa he

Sameer : dekhiye miss me

Girl : aree haa pata he mujhe salary ki koi tension maat lo me acvhi salary dungi waise shooting k alwa kya karte ho tum

Arjun ye ETF mai chief hai

Girl looks confuse what ... tum nishant verma nahi ho

Arjun ji nahi ye ETF chief sameer rathod hai

Girl : oops i m sorry to tumne i mean aapne bataya kyo nahi kab se fijhul ki baate kar rahe hai

Arjun smiles haa wo inko baat karne ki adaat thodi jayada hai naa

Sam gur k dekhta hai try to say but

Arjun : mam we want to meet Major Roy could u plzz

Girl sorry sir aap log baithe me abhi bulati hu ...

Arjun smiles

Sam : kyaa yaar tu ... kotna bolati hai ladki

Arjun laugh : saale ladki k samne bolati band ... yaar kuch to bolta

Sam : bolta yaar usne kuch bolane ka mouka hi nahi diyaa

Arjun : waise she is beautiful pasand aayi ...

Sam : Arjun dekh

Arjun: kuch nahi to damm it hi bol deta

Girl suniye aap baithie bhaiya aa rahe he aap andar aayiye sab (abb tak waha ETF k log aa jate he)

Vikrant roy : good morning hand shake with sam and arjun

Plzz have sit

Vikrat roy : sorry aapko meri sister ne koi aur samjh liya ...

Sam thats okk

Vikrant : mujhe aap sab yaha kyo aaye ... ye sab pahale hi bata diya gaya hai cohelo sir se meri baat ho chuki hai ...sorry aap log kuch lenge

Chotu : haa

Arjun : no thanks

Vikrant plzzz have breakfast with us ... and very important no formalities plzzz abb sath kaam karna hai too

Tabhhi 2 girls waha aati hai ...

Girl1 : bhai breakfast is ready

Vikrant inse miliye meri sisters ... this is aashu aisha ... and ye

Sakshi: inko to me janati hu ye riya mukharji hai ... inse mili thi mai 2 saal pahale ...

Riya : excuse me ...

Aisha : riya wait

Shree : sakshi kuch bhi bolati hai ... unko bura lag gaya shayad

Sakshi: lekin shree me

Vikrant: she is right ... ye riya mukharji hi hai ... actually hum ye sab baad me discuss karate hai ... pahale aap log breakfast kar lijiye plzzz

Aisha : wo breakfast room me hi karegi

Sakshi : i m sorry mene

Vikrant: no actually she is not feeling well

Sabko ajeeb lagta hai but koi kuch nahi bolta

Arjun : aap kab se iss case par kaam kar rahe he

Vikrant last month se ... aapke liye data aur files everything is ready sorry me aap logo ko yaha rehne k liye nahi bol sakta

Sam : uski koi jaurat nahi hai waise bhi team yaha ... sirf simple investigations par aayi hai ... next time se hum aapke ghar bhi nahi milenge

Vikrant : right sameer ... next koi bhi discussion hum mail k through karenge ...ya fir yaha pass me hi ik orphanage hai waha me har sunday ko jata hu to wahi par baat hogi ...

Vikrant give papers to sameer

Everyone leave house

Arjun i think i forgot my mobile ... me lekar aata hu

He just enter ...

Riya : lijiye aapka mobile

Arjun Thank u

Riya no reply ...

Arjun feels strange

Everyone left

So this is another part ... yes aisha riya ...ETF ka part nahi hai

So howz it let me know agr boring lag raha hoto me abhi discontinue kar dungi

Sorry i m unable to send pm

Plzzz mobile is not working properly plzzz jhel lo itna to

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Ariya Kazi

@Aayat.ariya14

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#37

Wow! me first .. congratulations Ariya !!

Oye didu discontinue ki baat kiyi na to aap ko hi mein block maar dungi .. ye concept bht hi accha hai.. something new ha... so jayda socho maat .. baas aap page no story name k saath likh do wahi chalega n date v... n nyc update .. iss me na jayda other shows ka characters maat add karo coz unhe janti nahi huna so.. agar kia v to thora description de dena...

Edited by Aayat.ariya14 - 7 years ago