OMG
what a story ... ek dum mind blowing
This is one of the best stories I have read
The way you are carrying out everything and the plot... it is the best
I read it in a go and I was so engrossed that when I read part 14 ... I realized I commented on none
So now I'm writing a long comment... hope it compensates
So arjun and riya didn't marry out of love (but I'm not complaining ... cuz I wanted to see them falling in love and exploring the dynamics ) but a whole different reason...
They felt the sparks on their meeting but ignored it
Fate played it's role and brought them together
Everyone accepted it
Thank god she's an etf officer (did I tell you I loved that part)
The steamy hot kiss was awesome and the way they dealt it ( but they didn't regret it...hehe) was awesome
The party and zip scene was fabulous... aai gave right answer to sakshi now she won't be a nuisance (but I hope you find her someone too *wink - wink*
Oohh karva chauth ( vrat rkh b liya or arjun sochta reh gya)
This explains that they still have long way to go
Now going back for samsha
The confession was beautiful... you don't need hearts and flowers always... like riya said ''uska kaha hua har shabd (word) zuban se nahi balke dil se nikla ho''
The date and then sam ka team k samne embarrass krne ka plan (jo flop ho gya ...hehe)
Never underestimate our Super Cop
FABULOUS , AWESOME
Waiting eagerly for the next part
Loved the whole story
Update soon
And thanks for the pm
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