The Wait (Ariya FF) part-23 updated (page-44)

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Shreyashi Chakraborty

@shreyashi19mld

Dazzler

Posted: 6 years ago

#391

Superb mindblowing outstanding update

Love it

Want to read more

Please update soon

Eagerly waiting

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udaymanyata07

@udaymanyata07

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Posted: 6 years ago

#392

Loved the story so far..amazing work...can't wait for the next chapter

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Pratiksha

@Praky09

Beginner

Posted: 6 years ago

#393

Amazing.

Ye Arjun jb Riya ki itni care krta hai to bolta kyun nhi.

Waiting for your update..

Continue soon..

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1150176

Hibernated

Posted: 6 years ago

#394

Though I wanted to be a silent reader until my final exam, I accidentally published this post.As I wanted my first post to be special that's why this long post.Sorry for that.Now about your story.

'The Wait' is one of the stories that I like the most on this forum.Because it has the original flavor and very few can portray it in the right manner.It has cases,cute love story,choree masti,samjun intersection just like the original.Actually I imagine it as Arjun continuation, what happened if Riya would come back.Every time I read I feel I'm seeing it onscreen.Keep it up Apu.

Thank you for not rushing about Ariya love story.You are giving enough time to blossom their love story,letting them understand each other.Arjun also has to get over the grief of his wife's death.But I think Riya should not have realised her love so soon.Riya herself or Choree should made her understand that it's not merely a crush or respect but she has fallen for Arjun.It's a mere thought of mine just wanted to express it.Sorry if I hurt you.

I have one question regarding case on Major Boxi. Who killed that child? If it was given than I'm sorry for not noticing hence bothered you.

As you are giving importance to everyone's character, I hope you do justice to the Sakshi character cause she also has a crush on Arjun.

Though wanted to comment on each part but can't help it.

At last, Thank you for giving us this amazing story Muskan Apu.

P.S. Can we demand a update in a month? If not then it's okay.We can understand.But please don't discontinue it.

If I hurt you in anyway, I'm really really sorry.

Edited by KaziRume - 6 years ago