NEW! Arjun/Riya (Ariya) FF: Strings of Desire- Note p34 URGENT

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ariyabestfan

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Posted: 8 years ago

#181

awsome update..

oh..god..good that Riya is safe..

ariya getting closer by each passing moment

rathod bench Riya from the case..

but finally Arjun make rathod agree to take Riya information about case..

n Riya find some clue too..
let's see what they find now.

Riya really wanted Arjun should stay with her..the unknown attraction pulling them to each other..

I just wondered why the killer want to kill Riya..?I mean if the killer is some psycho who is killing persons having extra martial affairs then how it relates to Riya..?I mean Riya is not even married..?or the killer is taking arjun n riya's married couple drama seriously..?

oh..hope the secrete will revel soon..

plz update soon this time..will wait eagerly..

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NainaSM

@NainaSM

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Posted: 8 years ago

#182

Interesting riya is safe

Arjun had some feelings for her

Ohh god now a new discovery

Why killer want to kill riya

Riya didn't see her killer

Arjun is helping her

Continue soon

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Anaya

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Posted: 8 years ago

#183

Absolutely incredible! Just started reading and man! You are a fabulous writer.. keep it up :)

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Ishita Dalal

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Posted: 8 years ago

#184

Hey eagerly waiting for some close Ariya moments. Plz update soon... Ab aur intezaar nahi hota...😭😭😭

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RiyaA123

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Posted: 8 years ago

#185

Just awesome and flawless

Read till chap 8 in a go

When I came across the story yesterday , the topic got me and I was like ... damn you other things , I have to read this one

Spent all day reading and Voila ! What a story ... you are an amazing writer and I loved your writing

Loved it and the case and emotions were superb

Plz continue and do pm me

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RiyaA123

@RiyaA123

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Posted: 8 years ago

#186

It was amazing

I was so engrossed that I lost track of time

Blogs idea is good since it may compromise the IF standard

But it may be difficult for members to follow

Now coming to the story

Seriously you should try writing crime thrillers

You have portrayed the characters beautifully , and their emotions , the brandy scene and arjun's description of Roshni was beyond perfect

Riya's inner turmoil along with that of Arjun's was beautifully written

Your writing seems so realistic , I mean Riya is not like the damsel in distress in clichs , she fights and weaken while Arjun is not the Hero who doesn't break , which is absolutely true since every human breaks , then collect , break again and shatter but rise again while the broken pieces pricks now and then , sometimes too numb to feel and sometimes too difficult to handle owing to the stress life has to give each day

I loved the way you write

Do pm me and continue

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RiyaA123

@RiyaA123

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Posted: 8 years ago

#187

Its amazing , the grip on every chapter is awesome

But what I don't get is that if the murderer wanted to kill riya and was obsessed with arjun then why not do that... what is he or she waiting for

The person watching them in the resort , when they were kissing ... why hasn't she done anything and what was the need for a flash grenade when nothing was supposed to be done

I think it's a group set to ''cleanse'' people ... but if they are then ... why Kolkata suddenly?

Loads of questions and wait for the story to unfold

Plz plz update soon and keep up the good work

Love your writing... do pm me

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RiyaA123

@RiyaA123

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Posted: 8 years ago

#188

Wow ... a hunch huh?

Bengali sherni hai hamari Riya

Well done!!

Loved the way you potrayed the whole scene

Every one was worried , yet , no-one wanted to say it... and then the gashes and WOW

Loved it

Keep writing and pm me the links of all your ff ss and os

I send you buddy request... hope you can accept it

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RiyaA123

@RiyaA123

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Posted: 8 years ago

#189

Awesome...loved it...

Plz update soon

The mystery is about to be solved

I am in love with these characters again

Loved it

Update soon and do pm me

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ruhi1985sheetal

@ruhi1985sheetal

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Posted: 8 years ago

#190

Wow fab story nicely narrated I read all part in a go u beautifully described each emotions very well ariya's pain where they emotionally break down can't able to control their anger their relation grown slowly very difficult to describe in words but awesome story eagerly waiting for nxt dear I send you buddy req plz accept and pm me from nxt time and if u wrote any story on ariya plz provide me link dear

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