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Sana Tabassum

@sana1819786

Dazzler

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Posted: 8 years ago

#71

Originally posted by: --GOLD--
Loved it dear
Awesome update
Entry was superb 👏
Waiting for more
Thanks for the PM
Continue soon 😊

welcome for pm

glad u liked it

u shud wait for next part as my exams are going on

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Sana Tabassum

@sana1819786

Dazzler

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Posted: 8 years ago

#72

Originally posted by: rinku95
Superb
Continue soon

glad u liked it

u shud wait for next one as my exams are going on

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Sana Tabassum

@sana1819786

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#73

Originally posted by: madmadona
Wow riya entry superb
Arjun s smiling on her wah kya baat hai 8th wonder
Lovely ariya waiting for official intro as u didn't say her name yet lol
Awesome update
Cont sooon

i am glad u liked it

u shud wait for next part as my exams are going on

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Sana Tabassum

@sana1819786

Dazzler

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Posted: 8 years ago

#74

[QUOTE=etfr]Finally I read it from start..

Sorry for late comment because exams are going on..

Damn interesting prologue..

Concept was good.

Part 1

Amazing update

Nice start..

Loved it..

Arjun shout on team for their Convo on his wife. N also bcoz he hate sympathy.

Sameer felt bad for his bestie.. who lost his happiness with his wife's death.

But m little confused that Arjun's wife name abi tk mention nhi kiya hai so maybe she is Riya.. but Kya riya hi uska love or his wife.. as you mentioned

[/QUOTE=sana1819786]Kya hota hai jab khoya hua pyaar jo pyaar hum hamesha ke liye kho chuke the wo achanak ek din samne aajaye

aur hum us pyaar ko apna bhi na saakhe

Samne hote hue bhi use chu na sakhe

So Kya Riya uska khoya pyaar means uski wife hai..Don't Tell answer if it will the suspense.

Part 2

Woah itna bada Wala update..

Awesome update

Emotional yet lovely

Arjun get emotional on remembering his wife.. feels bad for Arjun..

New team member n I know it's Riya..

Team get thrilled with news of new member..

Oh.. bomb tied on team..

Arjun got tensed. But girl came and rescue everyone. If I m not wrong it's our dimple doll, Riya.

Arjun knows her n got mesmerized by her.. chotu also knew her. That's definitely Riya.

Superbly written..

Thanks alot for PM

Continue when your exams will over.

All the best for your exams

welcome for pm

thanks alot for this big comment

glad u liked it

thanks for best wishes and all the best to u too

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Sana Tabassum

@sana1819786

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#75

Glad u liked it
Will do pm surely dear

Originally posted by: Shalvisharma97
Read bith part in one go
All the part are awesome
Nice update
Plz add me to ur pm list

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Shomaila khan

@hijabEfajr

Voyager

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Posted: 8 years ago

#76

wow 1 more ariya story,
welcome to ariya land

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Shomaila khan

@hijabEfajr

Voyager

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Posted: 8 years ago

#77

part 1 super doper khadoss and emotional conti soonish, do p.m me

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Shomaila khan

@hijabEfajr

Voyager

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Posted: 8 years ago

#78

part 2
is awsm
dimple smile se kuch yaad aya
chotu ka re-action bhi bata gya k kon hai wo larki,
waiting for next update

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Shreyashi Chakraborty

@shreyashi19mld

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#79

Really very nice

Love it dear

Eagerly waiting for next

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Sana Tabassum

@sana1819786

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#80

Originally posted by: hijabEfajr
part 2
is awsm
dimple smile se kuch yaad aya
chotu ka re-action bhi bata gya k kon hai wo larki,
waiting for next update

thanks dear

hope u liked it

will cont but u shud wait dear as my exams r going on