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zubiya92

@zubiya92

Inactive

Posted: 8 years ago

#51

Awesome update

Love it

Cont soon

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Bloomie

@bloomie

Dazzler

+ 10

Posted: 8 years ago

#52

awesome concept and story

i think woh ladki riya hi hai

lol...ladkiyaan Arjun ko speechless dekh kar shock ho gayi

thank god sab time se bach gaye

waiting for next

cont soon

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Swati

@Ariya_2425

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#53

Awesome update

Riya's entry was awesome

Arjun to use dekhta hi reh jata he

Riya ki wajah se sab team members bach gaye

Lekin riya itne saal kaha thi...??

Waiting for the next update

Thanks for PM

N all the best for your exams

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cuteariya

@cuteariya

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 8 years ago

#54

Awesome update

Ouch Arjun caught choree Aisha Liza & sakshi talking abt him & his wife

Arjun doesn't believe his wife is dead

Sameer is worried abt Arjun he knows how much Arjun love his wife

Continue plz

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GOLDIEE ABROL

@Gold.Abrol

Stunner

+ 12

Posted: 8 years ago

#55

Loved it dear
Awesome update
Entry was superb 👏
Waiting for more
Thanks for the PM
Continue soon 😊

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Mdmadona

@Mdmadona

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#56

Wow riya entry superb

Arjun s smiling on her wah kya baat hai 8th wonder

Lovely ariya waiting for official intro as u didn't say her name yet lol

Awesome update

Cont sooon

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Suzie

@etfr

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#57

Finally I read it from start..

Sorry for late comment because exams are going on..

Damn interesting prologue..

Concept was good.

Part 1

Amazing update

Nice start..

Loved it..

Arjun shout on team for their Convo on his wife. N also bcoz he hate sympathy.

Sameer felt bad for his bestie.. who lost his happiness with his wife's death.

But m little confused that Arjun's wife name abi tk mention nhi kiya hai so maybe she is Riya.. but Kya riya hi uska love or his wife.. as you mentioned

Kya hota hai jab khoya hua pyaar jo pyaar hum hamesha ke liye kho chuke the wo achanak ek din samne aajaye

aur hum us pyaar ko apna bhi na saakhe

Samne hote hue bhi use chu na sakhe

So Kya Riya uska khoya pyaar means uski wife hai..Don't Tell answer if it will the suspense.

Part 2

Woah itna bada Wala update..

Awesome update

Emotional yet lovely

Arjun get emotional on remembering his wife.. feels bad for Arjun..

New team member n I know it's Riya..

Team get thrilled with news of new member..

Oh.. bomb tied on team..

Arjun got tensed. But girl came and rescue everyone. If I m not wrong it's our dimple doll, Riya.

Arjun knows her n got mesmerized by her.. chotu also knew her. That's definitely Riya.

Superbly written..

Thanks alot for PM

Continue when your exams will over.

All the best for your exams

Edited by etfr - 8 years ago

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Sana Tabassum

@sana1819786

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#58

Originally posted by: princessdivya
Awesome update
Arjun got shock seeing her there
Thanks for the PM and continue soon

you r welcome dear for pm
thanks dear

glad u liked it

but u shud wait for next one as my exams are going on

Edited by sana1819786 - 8 years ago

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Sana Tabassum

@sana1819786

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#59

Originally posted by: Ariya_1325
Awesome update
Riya Ki entry hogai
Arjun Riya ke dekh ke sab bhul gaya
Wow Riya ke comment is awesome
Aur Arjun bhi ye sune guess nahi ke but smile Ki ye dekh girls shocked hai
Superb update
N all the best for your exams
Continue soon
Thanks for the pm

welcome for pm

thanks for comment and also for best wishes

iam glad u liked it

u shud wait for next one as my exams are going on

Edited by sana1819786 - 8 years ago