# T3 JID TERE PYAR KI last part on page 52 6/8/2020

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Posted: 8 years ago

#71

Originally posted by: 007jindal
riya is pregnant...masa is good but poor her she has to become bad infront of everyone...hope arjun comesback soon

hmm masa become bad to protect ri from taunts

let see he will come or not

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Posted: 8 years ago

#72

Originally posted by: cuteariya
I just cant stop my tears while reading this chapter 😭
exactly same time I was hearing old sad hindi song that's made me even more emotional
at that moment I imagine riya's situation
poor riya & ridz left rathod mansion 💔
all were so shocked & tried to stop riya Sameer even got ready to leave with them 😭
but riya stop Sameer as she couldn't let masa lose another son 😭
oh god masa did everything just to make riya to leave them so she can live her life 😭
she knew riya cry every night in her room 🥺
masa just want to send riya away from all the mess all those blames 😭
for that she is ready to take hate from her husband & son 🥺
thank god Aisha heard masa conversation with ariya's pic
its really hard time for arjun's families 😭
OMG riys is pregnant 😲
it was really happy news but riya didn't want her shadow in rathod families so she didn't tell them 💔
oh god riya & ridz left arjun's flat & the city poor ETF couldn't find them 🥺
it was another heart breaking moment for rathod families 💔
life had been very hard for riya but she didn't lose hope 🤗
still struggling with her life but this time she has to for her & arjun baby 😭
the part where riya imagine arjun with her & ariya convo made me more emotional 😭 🥺
I just wish arjun will come back everything will be back in life again 😭
I cant see riya suffering like this its break my heart very badly 🥺
thank god ridz is there with riya in every steep of her life 🤗
continue plz

aww sorry to make u cry ,but what to do story is that emotional

btw which song you was listening which relate with her situation

sam love them n want to leave all for her but ri is also ryt at her place

hmm masa take all blame to give ri happy life

yeah whole family facing lots of problems

now ri shift to bhopal n start new life

yeah it was indeed an emotional part..

hope next will soothe your pain

will continue soon

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manasvi..

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Posted: 8 years ago

#73

Originally posted by: Shanafr
Update update update update update update update update update update update plzzz plzzz plzzz plzzz plzzz

will update soon

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manasvi..

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Posted: 8 years ago

#74

Originally posted by: mamatha2310
Plzzz plzzz plzzz plzzz plzzz
update kariyena badi besabri
se entejaar kar rahe hain
plzzz update sooonnn

apka intjar khatam karte hai next part kuch hi der mai

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meeraa..

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Posted: 8 years ago

#75

bahut accha or emotional update tha
sach mai rula diya tumne
jaldi update do yar

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manasvi..

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Posted: 8 years ago

#76

Originally posted by: meeraa..
bahut accha or emotional update tha
sach mai rula diya tumne
jaldi update do yar

thanks dear

hume khushi hai apko pasand aya

next jaldi hi denge

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manasvi..

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Posted: 8 years ago

#77

part 36

ri wakeup n look here n there but she don't find arjun anywhere .

ri - I'm sorry arjun mai apna promise tod rahi thi..maine promise kiya tha na mai tutungi na hi roungi, tumhari shona apna promise nibhayegi. wo ab se waise hi jiyegi jaise tum use dekhna chahte the ..jaise tumjeete the..sahi kaha tha tumne ab mujhe do jindgi jeeni hai..mujhe tumhare liye jeena hai..taki jab tum lauto to tumhe tumhari shona hasti khelti mile..or tumhara baby bhi..

she smile n come to her room n sleep beside ridz..

next day

riya wakeup all happily she look at arjun's smiling photo..she also smile

ri - good morning arjun and good morning baby..

she take some water from bottle n sprinkle it on ridz..

ri - good morning ridz..

she laugh at her pouted face ..ridz look at her shocked

ri - aise kya dekh rahi hai uth hume morning walk par jana hai.,

ridz also smile

ridz - bas panch min do di abhi ayi..

she happily go to washroom n ri also get ready in track suit. they come out n go to park..

ri - kitni pyari subah hai na ridz

rid - haa di aaj sach mai ek nayi subah hai. ek khubsurat subah jo meri di ki muskan le kar aayi hai.

ri - ab ye muskan yuhi rahegi ridz..

rid -.hmm to mere arjun bhaiya ka asar ho hi gaya meri khadus di par..

ri - omg ridz wo dekh tea stall mujhe chai pini hai..

ridz look at her shocked

rid - di tum or chai..

ri - mai na ye hai na arjun k baby inhe peeni hai..

she point toward belly

rid - di but its unhygienic

ri - wo mai nahi janti tum chalo..

ri move towards stall n ridz follow her,.,ri enjoy her cutting chai n they come back home..

ri prepare breakfast n lunch n ridz clean room..

rid - di tum chodo na mai cleaning karke sab prepare karti hu..

ri - ridz mai pregnant hu bimar nahi, ek to tune waise hi cleaning k liye mana kar diya..ab ye bhi band karwa rahi hai ,dekh mai keh rahi hu bhul mat badi mai hu

ridz - or dr mai..tum already itna exertion leti ho upar se ghar k kam

ri- don't worry kuch nahi hoga mujhe or baby ko..i want him to be strong like his father ..

rid - tumse kaun jeet paya hai di siway arjun bhaiya ke..

ri - haa wo to hai ..chalo jaldi bath le kar aao..me n baby waiting for you..

ridz - bas abhi ayi di..

they take breakfast .ri give her lunchbox to ridz n take her also..she come out n board a bus..asusual bus is full..

ri - sorry baby aaj bhi hume aise hi jana padega but don't humare pas solution hai..

she take bus wall support on back n put hand on belly n take out earplugs n start hearing music ..an aunty come to her

au - beti tum pregnant ho kya..

ri nod

au - are conductor dekho ye bacchi pregnant hai or kis tarah jati hai roj.ise ladies seat par bithao dekho waha gents baithe hai..

con - ohh sorry..mujhe nahi pata tha.didi aap aaiye..

ri sit on seat n thanks him

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ri - thanks aunty..

au - isme thanks ki kya baat hai. tumhe yad hai us din tumne mujhe help ki thi jab mujhe bp bad gaya tha..shaya tum bhul gayi..bahut pyari bacchi ho tum..bhagwan tumhe hasta khelta baccha de.,sada khush raho..

ri smile from that day she always get seat in bus coz conductor reserve a seat for her. she become his didi .. ri start living life as arjun want her to live,.

two month passed now she is six month pregnant

ri wake up late night...today ridz is on night shift

ri - uff ab kya karu ridz bhi nahi hai or mujhe bahut restlessness ho rahi hai...

she is sweating n take a copy n try to air herself with it ,.she close her eyes n drift into flashback

in a case arjun n riya go as boss n secretary on uc mission .arjun busy culprit in meeting n riya try to find proofs.,she get it n they arrest them ..she forget something in a small room so she go again inside room n by mistake it get close..

she knock door arjun heard after so many attempt of hers

ri - arjun arjun I'm locked here

ar - ek min wait mai iski key laata hu..

few min later

ar - shona yaha ka staff bol raha hai ye door kholne ke liye mechanic bulana padega as its a safe hum ise nahi khol sakte..

ri is breathing heavily

ri - aa.arrjunn..bahut.,choti,.ja..gah hai..dum..ghut...ra..aha,hai..

ar - shona calm down ..apni eye close karo or surroundings par dhyan mat do,let us talk tum better feel karogi..

he sit on other side of door n ri is on another side closing her eyes..

ar - accha shona waise to tum badi serious or strict bani firti ho..to kya kabhi tumne koi naughty harkat ki hai.

ri - you know what arjun mai bachpan mai bahuy naughty thi. ghar kya pure mohalle ko sir par utha kar ghumti thi. ek bar pata hai ...

n they talk n ri feel relaxed

40 min later

mechanic come n open door..arjun go inside n find riya all sweating.he bent on knee n clean his sweat by his hanky .she open her eyes n look at him who is busy in wiping her face..he make her drink water n hold her hand n take her out..

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ri - hmm to aaj bhi wahi karte hai jo us din kiya tha..aaj mai or baby papa se baat karenge..

she take his pic n look at it lovingly ,..

ri - in do mahino mai bahut kuch badal gaya hai arjun..i knowtum jante ho..roj hum hum apna daily routine discuss karte hai..ab mai ye duniya tumhari najar se dekhne lagi hu ,.is jindgi ko waise jeeti hu jaise tum chahte the..sab badal gaya arjun kuch accha to kuch bura,.i still miss our family ,.par jo nahi badla wo hai mera intjar ..laut aao arjun,..laut aao apni shona k pas

tears start brimming down from her eyes..but she clear them

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ri - sorry thodi emotional ho gayi. but really me n baby both missing you..

her baby kick..she put her hand on belly n try to bear pain..a tear drop from her eye but she is smiling

ri - dekho tumhara baby bhi tumhari tarah hai bahut expressive or naughty..

she close record ,.yes sometimes she record some voices when she talk with him abt anything imp or abt their kid

sometime later she fall in sleep peacefully ..

three month later...

riya is on maternity leave n ridz also take leave from hospital as ri delivery date is near,,

riya is cooking arjun's favorite paneer pulao..as today she is craving for it..she n ridz take lunch n she is arranging her clothes n ridz is reading a book..suddenly she start screaming

ri - a..aaa...aaah ridz

rid - di ..di kya hua tumhe

ri - bbb..ba,hut...p..ppp..pain

rid - ohh no i think time aa gaya di..

she call ambulance n got ri admitted .ri is crying n screaming

one hour later she give birth to baby boy n faint..ridz take baby in her hand from nurse hand,,,

she is so happy..tears start flowing from her eyes n she kiss baby's forehead ..

rid - arjun bhaiya dehiye apka baby,,

she hold baby n sit beside ri's bed..

few min later

ri gain conscious n ridz give baby to her to feed..she take baby n feel blessed to have their bundle of joy in her hand..she kiss him n start feeding ..

rid - congratulations di

ri - congratulations to you too ridz

rid - hmm akhir hum masi jo ban gaye hai..bahut pyara hai na di..or dr ne kaha hai baby is perfectly healthy ..

ri smile

rid - di iska naam kya socha hai aapne

ri - aransh mere arjun ka ansh..aransh.

rid - sach mai bahut pyara naam hai di..

she hug ri n put her hand lovingly on baby's head..

ridz make them sleep n she too sleep on another bed in her room..

three years later...

a small but nice house in natural location of bhopal. in one room a girl is sleeping with kid in a room. both face is coverd with sheet..

they hear some voice

ridz ansh utho...dekho jaldi uth jana mujhe tang mat karo..wake up

both wakeup quickly n look at each other..

ridz - uth jao ansh aaj masa bahut gusse mai hai..

an - ohh..macchi guccha pal q..

ridz - are bhul gaye kal tumne di ke student se ladai ki.

an - ohh ha macchi mai to bhul gaya..ab

rid - ab kya manao apni masa ko..

an - hmm

n he put his finger on cheek n fall thinking

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ridz make him bath n get him ready..both on dining table..n taking breakfast.

an - macchi , masa bahut gucche mai hai..ledy(ready) bhi nahi kiya..nachta( breakfast) bhi ni dia..

rid - hmm gussa to hai tumse bhi or mujhse bhi...

an - ohh no ye to selious bat ho gayi..

abi masa kya kal li hongi

rid - abhi di school k liye ready ho rahi hongi..

in room

riya standing infront of mirror n getting ready..she wore an orange shiffon saree with boltneck blouse..her hairs are open n curly in bottom .she is looking very pretty ..

an - ohh fil ledy hone k bad wo babasa ki photo k samne jayengi ol baat kalengi

in room

ri go to arjun's pic n smile to him

ri - dekha arjun tumne apne bete ko. bilkul tum par gaya hai...kitna tang karta hai mujhe pata bhi hai tumhe..pata bhi hai kal kya kiya usne mere ek student se sirf isiliye ladai ki school mai qki wo mujhse takra gaya or mai gir gayi..or ansh mahasay unhone kya kiya us bacche ki shoe less apas mai bandh di..kya karu mai iska or iski shaitaniyo ka..

rid - hmm or bat karne k bad

an - ale uske bad to yahi ayengi..machi good baby wala face banao..

both shut their mouth n taking breakfast silently n ri move her head in disbelief n sit on her chair n take her breakfast

ri - jyada bhole banne ki jarurat nahi pata hai mujhe acche se pata hai tum dono ki nautaki

both ansh n ridz hold their ears

an - sholly masa

rid - sholly di..maaf kar do na

ri - ridz you know na isne galti ki hai..abhi se bado bado jaisi shaitaniya karta hai..or tum ansh kya yahi sikhaya hai maine tumhe

an - sholly na masa..ab se fil nahi karunga

ri - no ansh aaj kal tumhari shaitaniya badti ja rahi hai,.kal tumne pinki aunty k garden se rose le kar aaye

an - wo misha ko lose acche lagte hai na masa uska baldy tha..,

ri - look birthday bolna abhi nahi aata or ladkiyon ko rose denge ye janab..pure baap par gaye hai,..dekho ansh keh rahi hu sudhar jao warna mai tumse baat nahi karungi..

she left from there n ansh look at ridz with sad face

an - machi sholly ansh ne masa ko sad kar diya..

ridz look at him n hold her his hand n sit on knee

rid - dekho ansh wakai mai di ne sahi kaha ..aisa nahi karte sab aapki mumma ko bura bolenge or kahenge unhone aransh ko kuch nahi sikhaya..

an - aage nahi kalunga machi..masa ko manao na

ri - ab aap hi manao apne style mai apni masa ko..,

both look at each other n nod

tbc.,

how will ansh take forgiveness from riya...

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some innocent question of ansh