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ariyabestfan

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Posted: 8 years ago

#201

Originally posted by: Darlingladdu
Wooo I am back.
Awesome feeling after long time.
Waaw i loved your this story i readed it in one go. Awesome storyline very emotional. I loved it. Please update sooon
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ariyabestfan

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Posted: 8 years ago

#202

Originally posted by: Naazrt
wow mind blowing update buddy..
liked it ..
cont soon..
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ariyabestfan

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Posted: 8 years ago

#203

Originally posted by: ramshaasrar
Sorry for late comment...
I m very busy in Ramadan...
Read all the parts in one go...
Awesome concept...Riya Arjun se itna pyar kerti hai ke uski har baat manna uska farz hai or Arjun wo sirf or sirf apne pyar ko safe rakhne ke liye itna bada dard seh raha hai ir abhi he is such a true friend...mind blowing yaar just loved it
Thanks for pm
Eagerly waiting for next update

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ariyabestfan

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Posted: 8 years ago

#204

Originally posted by: SahiraKapoor8
Very nice update
Plz cont soon
Sry for late comment

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ariyabestfan

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Posted: 8 years ago

#205

Originally posted by: Angelsonali1
Update do na plzzz

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Posted: 8 years ago

#206

Part 6:-

After engagement ceremony all back to home..

Arjun without going to laudge he goes to his home.

Arjun sitting on sofa holding photo of roshni..

Arjun:-roshni..Tum hamesha kehti thi na ke ek na ek din bhagwan he iss baat ka yakin hoga Muze Aur Mein bhi bhagwan ko manane laguga..Ye kaisa bhagwan he tumhara roshni ..Usane Muze kitna mazbur bana diya he..Itna mazbur ke Dil me dard hote hue bhi chahre pe muskan rakhni pad rahi he..

He close his eyes n tears rolled down from his eyes..

Arjun:-plz roshni apne uss bhagwan se pray Karo ke jab tak Riya ki shadi na ho Jaye tab tak Mein tut na jau..

He hold her photo close to his heart..

Here at abhi's room..

Riya come to his room..

Riya:-kya Soch the ho jeet..?

Abhi:-kuch nahi..

Riya put her head on his shoulder..N he put his hand around her back..

Riya:-mein bahot buri hi na jeet..?

Abhi just look her..

Riya:-mein bahot hi buri Aur ghatiya dost hu..He na..?

Abhi:-shut up..Kya baat Kar rahi he ..?

Riya:-sach hi toh keh rahi hu na jeet..?Mein selfish hu..Mein Arjun sir ki kamzori nahi banana chahti..Unke Aur Unke raste me bich me nahi aana chahti issliye shadi Kar rahi hu..Par tere bare me toh meine socha hi nahi..Tumhe mazbur Kar diya iss shadi ke liye he na..?Jab ki Mein khud nahi janti ke Mein iss shadi ko kaise nibha paugi..Ek wife hone ka farz nibha paugi ya nahi..Meine Tumhari zindagi Aur khushiya dav pe laga di he na jeet..

Abhi get up..N he knees down infront of her..Hold her hand..

Abhi:-ritz..Mein tumse pyar karta hu..I know u don't love me..N trust me kabhi tumko boluga bhi nahi ke tum bhi muzse pyar Karo..Anything can't change my love for u..Aur rahi shadi ki baat..Toh trust me..Mera tumhare liye pyar itna he na ke ham dono ke liye kafi he..

Riya make him sit on bed with teary eyes..

Riya:-mein bahot lucky hu..Jo tum Muze mile ho jeet..

Saying this she hug him..N started sobbing..Abhi hug back her n trying to make her calm..

Days going very speedily..It's now only 5 days remain for marriage..

(Abhi jis case ke liye Etf join kiya tha woh case bhi khatam ho Gaya he..uss minister ke khilaf proof collect karke usse custody me bhej diya Gaya he..Aur shadi ke baad abhi ki transfer Kolkata bhi Kar di gayi he..Aur Riya ne bhi Kolkata transfer ke liye apply kiya..Aur commissioner also transferred her to Kolkata..aaj Unn dono ka last day he Mumbai Etf me..)

Etf conference room:-

Abhi:-guys .aaj Hamara Etf me aakhri din he..Aur Kal se shadi ke functions bhi suru honge..toh Kyo Na aaj much celebration kare..

Chotu:-celebration..?

Abhi:-hmm..(abhi wink)meri bachlors party..

Choree n abhi smiles..Sam just sigh..while Arjun remain neutral..

Riya:-excuse me..?bachlors party..?

Abhi:-are are..sweetpie aise look mat do..meri bachlors party matlab simple hone wali he..woh Baki ke boys ki tarah nahi girls n all that..na Baba na..tuze toh pata he Mein tumhare Sivay kisi ladki ko aakh uthake nahi dekhta..

Riya:-ha..tum toh sabse innocent ladke hona ..

Abhi:-woh toh banana hi padega..ab tumhare Sivay Mein kisi Aur ko dekh Lu..toh tumhare Ye Arjun sir meri aakhe phod Denge..

Arjun:-ha..Ye toh tumne sahi kaha..

They smiles..

Abhi:-so what i m saying..just a party..only drink..(he look to rest boys..they slightly nodded)

Riya:-n what about me..?meri bachlor's party ka Kya hoga..?Mera toh yaha shree Aur chotu ke Sivay koi dost bhi nahi he..sare Kolkata me he..aur shree n chotu ki toh tum apni party me le na rahe ho..?toh Mein..

Abhi:-are toh Tu bhi hamari party join Kar sakhti he..par..meri hone wali biwi banake nahi..Balki dost banake..

Riya:-done..

Abhi:-yes..toh aaj Raat party..

Later in night..

All are at club..the perticular area of club is booked by abhi for Etf team..

The boys just keep drinking..n Riya too..Sam Har baat ki tarah limit me hi he..Aur Arjun..he is just sipping juice..

Abhi:-this is not fare yaar Arjun..ham Sab drink Kar Rahe he..Aur Tu..juice le Raha he..

Arjun:-kisika toh Hosh me rehna zaruri he na warna fir Tum logo ko ghar kyon pahochayega..

Abhi:-ha sahi bol Raha he..yaar u r so sweet man ..agar Mein ladki hota toh Muze bhi tuzse pyar Kar baithata..

Riya started laughing..

Abhi:-itna Kyo has rahi he..?

Riya:-tuze Aur Arjun sir ko Sath me imagine Kar rahi thi..

Saying this she giggle more..Arjun smiles..while other tried to control their laugh..

Abhi:-accha..aaj Teri Aur meri bachlor's party he..fir Kal se sare rituals start honge fir officially Tu meri Aur Mein tera..issliye sirf aaj ki Raat he..Muze toh kisi Aur ladki ke Sath interest nahi..n moreover yaha tere Sivay koi Aur ladki nahi...toh Mera chance Gaya..Lekin tuze chance he..

Riya:-kya..?

Abhi:-are Mein chod ke char char handsome ladke he yaha..aaj ki Raat aakhri he Inn me se kisi ke bhi Sath Tu dance Kar sakhti he..Mein nahi rokuga..Kyo ki baad me toh fir mere Sath hi dance karna padega..so last chance to dance with other man..so go..

Riya look to shree..then chotu..then rathod n then Arjun..

She slowly forward her hand to him..Arjun softly hold her hand..n both headed to dance floor..

Abhi n all looking to ariya..

Sam(ab khud ko rok nahi pata):-ye dono ek dusare se bahot pyar karte he..

Abhi(looking to ariya):-i know..

Sam:-jante ho ..fir bhi tum Riya se shadi Kar Rahe ho..?

Abhi(now look to Sam):-ha fir bhi..Kyo ki Mein Riya se pyar karta hu..Arjun ke liye apne pyar ka safe hona zaruri he..Riya ke liye usake pyar ki jeet hona zaruri he..Aur mere liye mere pyar ka khush rehna zaruri he..Aur agar Arjun usse woh khushi nahi de sakta toh Mein Usaka Sath dunga..Mein usse khushi dunga..

Sam chup ho jata he..usse ab samaz nahi aa raha kise kya kahe..

Four boys looking to ariya..

(they are doing just simple dance steps just like koi apne friend ke sath kare waise..not passionate or close one)

Gutakh dil..dil me muskhil..

Mushkil me dil..

Gustakh dil..thoda sambhal thoda buzdil..

Dard ke dar pe thehara he kyo..

Sazaye sazayeye khud ko kyon deta nayi..
Hasanae ki dhun pe rota he kyon

Sahi kya galat kya ye khuch bhi samzta nahi..

Gutakh dil..dil me muskhil..

Mushkil me dil..

He barf se sanso mein..

Aakho me dhua dhua..

Ye har pal kyon kele he

Gam ka khushi ka jua jua..

Ye umeedo bhara..ye khud si hi dara..

Sulaze dhago me uljha he kyon..

Salahe salahe ye khud hi bhi sunta nahi..

Gutakh dil..dil me muskhil..

Mushkil me dil..

Kyo bato hi bato me

Phisalti he zuban zuban..

Kisi shada theharti he

Behakti he nighah nigah..

Ye kaise kab hua..

Ye kehdo kyon hua..

Girta nahi toh sambhalta he kyon..

Zukaye zukaye magrur zukata nahi..

Gutakh dil..dil me muskhil.

Mushkil me dil..

(I know its not a romantic song but I feel ke ariya ki situation pe ye song suit karta he..)
After dance.they again continue drinks..

After some more time..

Sam n arjun look each other..they realize ke baki sabko bahot chad gayi he..

Sam:-chalo..sabko ghar drop kar dete he mein aur rawte..

Abhi(in talli tone):-ghar..??nahi yaar..riya ke parents muze aise dekehege..toh shadi se pehale hi hamara divorce kara denge..plz..do something..

Riya just giggiling in talli tone..

Sam:-ek kaam karte he rawte tum abhi aur riya komere ghar le chalo..shree chotu ko unke ghar drop karke mein aata hu..

Arjun took abhi n riya in his suv while sam took choree in his suv..

N they drives towards sams home..

Arjuns suv:-

Abhi back sit pe so gaya he..n is in deep sleep..

Riya is sitting at codriver sit..she has also drink a lot..

She slowly put her head on arjuns shoulder..arjun look her..

Arjun(with care):-tum thik ho na riya..?

Riya:-aap thik he..?

Arjun:-hmm..??

Riya:-toh mein bhi thik hu..

Arjun smiles lightly..

Riya:-aap khush he..??

Arjun(looking to her):-ek baat yaad rakhna riya..tum khush toh mein khush..

Riya smiles..

N close her eyes..

Arjun stop suv infront of sams home..

He slowly made riya sleep properly on sit..he then took abhi out of car n took him inside house giving abhi support..

Sam pehale hi pahoch chukka he..aur choree ko unke ghar drop kar chukka he..

Arjun slowly bringing abhi inside home..

Sam come forward n help him..

Sam:-abhi ko mein leke jata hu room me..tum riya ko dekho..

Arjun back to suv..he hold riya in his arms..riya get counsious thinking someone hold her..she open her eyes..but when she found arjun she get relaxed..n keep staring him..

Arjun bring her in home..put her on sofa..

Arjun:-tum yahi ruko..mein abhi aaya..

Riya just nodded..

Arjun andar jata he sam ki help karne kyo ki abhi nashe me kuch gana ga raha he..when he n sam back,they saw riya has fallen in sleep on sofa..

Sam:-ye toh yahi so gayi..

Arjun:-hmm..

Arjun is just staring to riya..

Sam:-tum yahi ruk sakhte ho..kafi raat ho gayi he..

Arjun:-thank u..

Sam raised eyebrow ke aise formally aur pyar se thanks bol raha he..kyo ki sam ko laga nahi tha ke arjun rukega..kyo ki roshni ke baad woh pehali baar sam ke ghar pe aaya he..

Arjun riya ke sofa ke samne zameen pe niche baith jata he..aur abhi bhi riya ko hi dekh raha he..

Sam:-umm..toh..woh waha 2nd room me tum so jao..

Arjun(now turn his gaze to sam):-nahi..mein yahi rukuga..fir aisa mauka mile ya na mile. Bas ab 4-5 din hi bache he fir toh riya chali jayegi..usse shayad fir dekh bhi nahi pauga..aaj ji bhar ke usse dekh sakhta hu..

Sam ko ab realize hua why he said thanks to him..

Sam ko lag raha he ke 2-4 thappad mare arjun ko aur usse kahe ke rok le riya ko..par arjun nahi manega woh ye janta he..

He sigh n just left to his room to sleep..

Whole night arjun keep looking to riya..remembering moments spend with her..

roshni is lyin in pool of blood..her eyes become lifeless..darkness spread all over n then riyas smiling face apeears..but suddenly her expression changed..the same pain in roshnis eyes now in riyas eyes..n her eyes turn lifeless at very next second..

Arjun wake up with a jerk..his gaze fell on riya who is peacefully sleeping on sofa..he sigh..wipe his sweat..n again look to riya who is sleeping..

Thtas when sam come out of his room n found arjun still staring riya..he sigh..

Sam:-rawte..its morning..mein abhi ko uthane ja raha hu..

Sam make abhi wake up..n then both abhi n arjun make riya wake up which look quite difficult task..

Abhi n riya left to riyas home then..n arjun left to his place..

Today is mehandi ceremony of Riya..She had made mehandi like any typical Bengali bride..

Choree n Sam ko toh samaz Nahi aa Raha khush ho ya dukhi ho..Arjun bas sad eyes se Sara function attend Kar Raha he..Abhi aur Riya dono sabke samne has Rahe he par Dil me Jo tufan macha hua he Woh sirf dono hi jante he..

Next day is sangeet ceremony of abhi n Riya..

Some of relatives dancing n performing on song n all others are enjoying..

Etf team is silently looking all the performances..

Abhi hold riya's hand n took her to team..

Abhi:-what is this guys..Tum Sab log aise chup chap Kyo ho..?Shree chotu..Not expecting this from u..Ritz is Ur friend na..

Shree(smile):-ofcourse.(trying to light the mood)par Mein Aur chotu dance karege toh yaha Jo ladkiya patane ke chances he Woh bhi khatam ho jayege..

Choree laugh,abhi n Riya giggles..Sam smiles..N Arjun smiles lightly seeing Riya giggling..

Abhi:-its ok..U can sing a song..

Chotu:-fir toh ladkiyo ke Sath Sath sare guest bhi bhag jayege..

They laugh again..

Sam(mockingly):-par rawte accha Gata he..He can..He na rawte..?

All now looking to Arjun..

Sam abhi bhi gussa he Arjun se ke sikandar Jo ke he hi nahi usake dar se Arjun Ye San Kar Raha he..Usse abhi bhi lagta he ke Kash Arjun he shadi rok le Aur usake zindagi me bhi khushi aaye..

Abhi:-kya Sach me Arjun..?Oh come on..Etf team se ek performance toh honi hi chahiye..

Arjun:-umm..Abhi Lekin..

Abhi:-ritz..Tum hi bolo Arjun ko..Woh Tumhari baat nahi talega..He na Arjun..?

Arjun n Riya look to each other..

Riya:-plz sir..Mere liye..

Arjun nodded softly..

Abhi:-ye hui na baat..Chalo ..Supercop kisi ke toh order follow karta he..

Abhi n Arjun smiles looking each other..Riya look away nervously..

Abhi(on stage):-ladies n gentleman..Now it's time to special performance ..From..Our very special Etf team..Give a big hand to them..

Arjun come on stage holding mike..Shree behind him with guitar..Chotu n Sam standing besides him..

Arjun:-this is ..For u Riya..

Arjun started singing..Shree playing guitar..N Sam n chotu singing along with Arjun on some lines..

(In original song it's "priya"..I m using here as "Riya")

Oh Riya..Oh Riya..Oh Riya..

Tumsa nahi koi Riya..

Tu khush Rahe ..Jaha bhi Rahe..

Ye meri Dil dua..

Oh Riya..Oh Riya..Oh Riya..

Tumsa nahi koi Riya..

(Riya smiles hearing this ..Abhi hold her hand..N both abhi n Riya started dancing ..)

(Arjun singing)

Tumko mil Gaya Sathi pyar ka..

Hamse chin Gaya daman yaar ka..(2)

Kehna bahothe Lekin ghadiya aaj he kam..

Teri Har baat..Woh pehali mulakhath..

Hamko rulayege tere baad..O..O..O.

(Arjun look away n wipe tears hiding from others..But choree n Sam realise)

Oh Riya..Oh Riya..Oh Riya..

Tumsa nahi koi Riya..

(Riya too teary n she started singing n goes to team)

Apne Dil ki baat toh kehdi sabhi me..

Mere Dil ki baat na jani Kisine..(2)

(Looking to Arjun)

Tum Kya hamare ho..Ye koi Jane na..

(Composing herself she turn to choree)

Bite hue pal..Woh hasta hua Kal ..

Kaise bhul payege ham..

(Abhi too come there n started along with Etf team)

Oh Riya..Oh Riya..Oh Riya..

Tumsa nahi koi Riya..

Tu khush Rahe jaha bhi Rahe..Ye..Mere Dil ki dua..

Oh Riya..Oh Riya..Oh Riya..Tumsa nahi koi Riya..

All claps..

Riya get emotional n started crying..

The four boys(choree n samjun)pull her for group hug ..Abhi smiles looking them..

N he too join their group..

Precap:-

Abhi n riyas marriage..

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Posted: 8 years ago

#207

muje rona arrahahai.. 😭.. aisa kyun ho raha hai unki zindagi mein.. patha nahi aage kya hoga.. may true love win bhi nahi kahsakthi kyunki teeno ka true love hai.. kya triangle bangaya yaar...