#T2 ARIYA SS JID TERE PYAR KI part 33 on page 103 15/4/2017 - Page 68

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part 33

samsha n riya is at etf n solving some case..after solving case they are doing their work..ri complete her work n looking at arjun's pic in her mobile..while other are busy in their work ..sam got some call

sam - hello etf..sameer rathod

os - sir apka phone nahi lag raha tha to etf no par lagaya..sir parth sir shaheed ho gaye...

n after that sam didn't hear anything which was told by other side.he don't know how n when his feet carry him till arjun's room..

he hug his chair n cry alot

sam -nahi arjun tu aise nahi ja sakta apne bhaisa ko chod kar..tu janta hai na tere bina kuch bhi accha nahi lagta mujhe..laut aa arjun apne bhaisa k pas..mai kya jawab dunga masa babasa ko ridz ko or riya ko..

he remember their conversation before arjun is going for mission

ar - bhaisa..

sam emotionally hug him

sam - arjun apna khyal rakhna

ar - I'll bhaisa..par aap jante hai na mission kitna critical hai..agar mujhe kuch ho jaye to aap tutenge nahi..or agar mai shaheed hota hu to meri shahadat ko ansuon se mat dhona bhaisa...

sam look at his childish brother who become mature now..he put his hand on arj's head to give him blessing

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sa - mai puri koshish karunga arjun ki sab kuch sambhal lu..or teri shahdat par garv hai mujhe par khud ko kaise sambhalu mai bata...

he cry alot n come out side find riya smiling with all..

sam - is bacchi ne abhi abhi to muskurana sikha tha q chin li isse ye hasi tune bhagwan..

he close his eyes to gain strength ..aisha look at him n ask him through eyes..

sam - team its a day off..aisha riya chalo...

samsha n riya daily come office together ..

sam mv atleast ghar pahuchne tak to inhe kuch pata na chale..

risha nod n follow sam..

in car

ai - kya hua sameer aap bahut upset lag rahe hai

ri- don't worry bhaisa arjun jaldi hi laut ayenge..

sam just nod n concentrate on driving ..

at home

trio reach home n go to their room. sam is in dilemma how to tell all abt arjun how to broke their hopes.

he numbly come to his room..aisha has changed her cloth..

ai - sameer aaj na mai soch rahi hu riya ka kuch favorite bana du qki wo bahut upset hoti hogi na..do pal ki hi sahi use.khushi to mile..kya banu kuch suggest karo na..

sam - jinke ghar matam hota hai unke ghar chulhe nahi jalte aisha

ai - kya keh rahe ho aap sameer ..hosh mai to ho..koi aisa bolta hai bhala

sam - kash mera hosh bhi mere arjun k sath chala gaya hota..

he start crying n aisha fearly come to him

ai - sameer plz bol dijiye jo mujhe lag raha hai wo jhut hai..

sam- nahi aisha mai chahu to bhi is.sach ko jhutla nahi sakta..

he hug her n cry uncomfortably .she also cry with him,.she also can't take arjun is no more..,
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ai - sameer sambhaliye khud ko hume sabko sambhalna hai...hume unhe sach batana hoga

sam - kaise aisha kaise...kya bolunga mai..

she convinced him n they come out..,all are waiting for them as aisha told servant to brng all in hall..

ma- sameer hum sabko yaha q bulaya hai beta,.or ye kya hal bana rakha hai khud ka..tabiyat thik nahihai kya..

sam don't say anything ,he just switched on tv ..a news channel is flashing new on successful mission against terrorists n also abt arjun's bravery n his martyrdom ..babasa sit on sofa helplessly n tears flowing from his eyes..masa come to sam n hold him

ma - kaisa majak hai.ye sameer ye news wale kya bata rahe hai..humare arjun ko kuch nahi ho sakta..mera beta veer hai wo aise mar nahi sakta

sam - haa masa wo veer hai isiliye to aaj hum sab surakshit hai ..par wo ja chuka hai masa..

ma - nhi...

n she hug sam n cry uncontrollably in his arms..ridz was on stairs when he on tv so she watched news from there..she site there n hug railing n cry alot...riya just shockingly sit on floor n not reacting anything ..she look like lifeless body..aisha look at her n go to her..

ai - riya

but she doesn't react..aisha shake her n try to make her cry but she didn'tgive any reaction

ai - riya plz kuch to bolo .roo riya ..tumhara arjun ja chuka hai.

ri - wo kahi nahi gaye,,wo wapas ayenge bhabhisa..

ai - wo nahi aayega ab kabhi..

but she is repeating same thing that arjun will return,,aisha get worried.for her,,but no one is in condition to console each other,


on the other hand etf got the same news they also cry for him,.

next morning

police bring arjun's belonging wrapped in tiranga as his body become ash in blast..army also come with them with their band n give him salute of bullets ..sam did his belongings last rite,,

in their big hall a portrait of his smiling face n garland on it is put on table ..sam n babasa sit in man's row n meet with all..masa is silently sit near piller putting her head on piller ..aisha n ridz is in women's row crying ..

babasa look at the ash pot of him,n remember the day when he born..their fight over his name whether it be parth or arjun.,his school's first day,.all his victories..his departurefor mission

babasa mv i am really proud of you my son,,really proud of you..

tears drom fom his eyes..
sam look at his photo n smiling face
he remember the day when he come to know he became elder brother n he take him first in his lap n their all sweet n brotherly moments..

sam mv maine promise kiya tha tujhe arjun ki teri shahdat ko apne aansuon se nahi dhounga..par kya karu inhe rokna mere bas mai nahi..tu sirf mera bhai nahi mera dost ,saathi mera humdard tha..jin haton mai tujhe khilaya aaj unhi haton se tera saman jala kar aa raha hu,kaise sambhalu khud,,laut aa apne bhaisa ko sambhalne k liye arjun..

aisha look at sam n remember his talks with arjun on phone his funny talks n their bonding ..they both love sameer but always tieup against his non romantic nature tease him alot,,his weaving him hi when he push sam to said her i love u at night ..tears rolls down from her eyes..
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masa look at the chain in her hand,.she remember she give it on his birthday with blessings to keep him safe ..but he drop it at home before going on mission ..she tightly holds it n remember his first touch his small fingers hold her..his first step his first word..his love toward her n when she scold him he dramatically monify her n she always smile over his dramas..she clutch chain n cry..,

ridz also remember her arjun bhiya , who is her jiju by relation but they are more bro-sis more than bil n sil..his caring nature his love towards her..the way he protect her..she lost it today..she remember all their moments n cry ...

n riya she is silently sitting there as only her body is present there..ladies come n hold her mangalsutra to open it but she hold her hand

ri - ye aap kya kar rahi hai..

lady - beti ab bhagwan k aage kiski chali hai..par ab ye tere kisi kaam ka nahi..jiske liye tha wo to chala gaya,.

ri - haa to mission par gaye hai wo laut aayenge,,aap chodiye ise..

la - wo nahi lautega ab beti..sambhal khud ko..

ladies forcefully take out her mangalsutra n remove sindur from her partition ..

some hours later

riya is sitting infont of dressing table in white saree.she see her mangalsutra on table..she take it in her hand.

ri - arjun dekho sabne mera mangalsutra utar diya or mera sindur bhi ponch diya..wo kehte hai tum mujhe chod kar chale gaye,pagal hai sab,.or unhe lagta hai mai pagal hu,.mai pagal nahi hu arjun i know tum lautoge apni shona k liye. or tab tumhi inhe pehnaana mujhe..tab tak ye tumhari amanat bankar mere pas rahenge..

she put it in a box..tears are flowing from her eyes..

ar - shona
kaha tha na maine tumhari ankhon mai aansu mujhe acche nahi lagte..

she look at the side but no one is there,,voice come from another side..

ar - i love your dimple smile shona

she smile at him n go to hug him but he vanish.she look at his big portrait n find him standing there

ar - kya dekh rahi ho ..mai to humesha tumhare sath hu..shareer ka kya hai riya apne dil mai jhank kar dekho mai hu riya..maiyahi hu..

she fall on bed n cry..

some days passed like this..all condition is same as before..but with time all control themselves n start their daily routine ..yes they still miss him alot n never ever can his place will be fulfilled ..but life has a specialty that it never stops for anyone ..


samsha n riya again join etf,.ridz her college ..today is chuda ceremony of aisha which got delayed by arjun's death..

aisha's family come to takeout her wadding chuda(its a punjabi ritual which have to performed after some time of marriage ..)

riya ridz n masa do all preparation ..ladies look at riya n talk

lady 1 - ye yaha kya kar rahi hai..ye to vidhwa hai
lady 2 - hmm is suhag ki rasam mai ek vidhwa ka hona upshagun hoga..

lady 3 -ise bhejo yaha se..

all are talking n riya cry n try to go from there..

ai - riya stop..

ri - nahi bhabhisa mai apki life mai upshagun nahi lana chahti..

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ai - nahi riya tum apshagun nahi ho..or aap sab..kitni choti soch hai aapki..uska pati nahi raha to wo upshagini or bekar ho gayi..kya wo ab insan nahi rahi..ek ladki kya ek ladke k hone par hi jindgi jee sakti hai..uske bad uski jindgi bas ek bojh reh jati hai..or agar iska pati nahi raha to isme iska kya dosh

la - are ye hi manhus hai jo shadi k kuch din mai hi pati ko kha gayi..

ridz standup n hold riya..n their talk anger aisha..

ai - ji nahi ye manhus nahi balki wo aurat hai jisne apna suhag haste haste kurban kar diya taki aap jaise logo ka suhag surakshit rahe aap surakshit rahe..are jo insan pehle hi apne apno ko kho chuka hota hai use aap jaise log hi jeene nahi dete.,or na hi insan samjhte ..how inhuman n disgusting ..

lady 2 - kehna asan hai aisha par bat jo sach hai wo sach hai..

ai - mere liye sach yahi hai..riya meri family hai or koi bhi meri family ko hurt nahi kar sakta..or haa shaheedon ki patniyan kabhi vidhwan nahi hoti qki unka suhag or uska lahu to is dharti mai is kadar mila hota hai ki inke sindur ka rang kabhi fika nahi padta..or jaise saheed log amar hote hai waise hi unki patniyan amar suhagan.hoti hai..ye jo tyag karti hai na aap jaise log na use kar sakte hai na samjh sakte hai..agar in jaisi patniya apne pati ko rok de jung par jane se to pata nahi shayad nafrat mai chalne wali goli ka agla nishana aap ya apka pariwar hi ho..

lad3 -hum yaha apni baijjati karane nahi aisha..hum ja rahe hai

ai- jaaiye mujhe bhi aise khokhli soch wale logon ki jarurat nhi..

all lady leave..n aisha come to riya who is sobbing on ridz shoulder

ai - chalo riya ab meri chuda utrai ki rasam tumhe karni hai

ri - par..bhabhisaa mai...kaise...

ai - sirf tum hi ye karne ki hakdar ho riya...ab koi sawal nahi koi argument nahi..

after alot of consolation from aisha ri finally agree n takeoff all her chudas n make her wear another bangles ..they performed ritual n ri ridz n all left for thir rooms..sam look at aisha

sam - i am proud of u aisha..aaj tumne jo kiya wo

she cut him in mid

ai - ye mera farj tha sameer..riya meri bhi family hai..or aise koi bhi use kuch bhi suna kar nahi ja sakta.

he hug her..

masa's cousin come to meet her from london after arj's death..she is very bad from heart..she always try to masa believe that riya is bad omen for them..if she was not in hislife arjun was living his life..firstly masa ignore her.but due to her emotionally weak condition n her constant pressure she start falling in trap..she starting riya..which is soon noticed by all..

ba - maalti(means masa) kya hai ye sab tum riya k sath aisa q kar rahi ho ..aakhir problem kya hai tumhari

ma -ye ladki hi meri problemhai..mera beta isse shadi nahi karta to aaj jinda hota..manhus hai ye,,,

she curse riya n cry,.ri also cry alot.rest try to make masa understand

ma - bas kijiye ap log ..koi nhi samjhega hume ,.jane dijiye..par hum is ladki k haath ka na khayenge na piyenge,.na isse bolenge..

n she left...

precap - ri leave house with ridz n get faint in way

dr - congratulations mrs rathod you're pregnant..

ri get shocked...

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