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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: duhasaad

congrats dear

nice start

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Posted: 8 years ago
#22
amazing update
loved it
poor riya arjun betrayed her because of sameer deed
update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
#23
awsm start di
poor riya arjun ne use cheat kiya
sam ne aisa kya kiya
i know apki story hai abhi kai twist honge isme
by the way di nice lines aap hi ne likhi hai na start n end mai
pls continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
#24
Aisa kyun hotha hai ki galthi koi kare aur bukhthe koi aur.. Arjun is not right on his part.. he should have taught lesson to Sameer in some other way, but not like this breaking her heart and living her at the altar.. Agar Riya ne jaldbazi mein apne aap ko kuch karliya hotha... will he be able to take it..
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Posted: 8 years ago
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jindgi tujhse aabad thi , tere jaane se veeran ho gayi
ye khali jism yaha reh gaya, mere jaan to kabse tere sath kho gayi

she is crying hard n her brother is seeing her helpless .he come to her room n crease her hair

sam - I'm sorry gudiya meri wajah se aaj tujhe itna sab sehna pada, socha nahi tha jin aankho mai humesha khushi dekhna chahta tha unme itna dard sirf meri wajah se dekha padega,

ri - bhiya sach mai aap aisha di ki maut ke jimmedar hai..

sam head hung down in shame n guilt

ri - maine sach mai socha nahi tha aap aisa bhi kar sakte hai bhaiya

sam - sach mai gudiya us waqt ye andaja hi nahi tha ki humara kuch pal ka maja kisi ke liye maut ki saja ban jayega . aaj arjun ka dard mai bahut acche se samjh sakta hu,.use bhi kya dosh du sab mere karmo ki saja hai.par mai tujhe rote hue nahi dekh sakta mai arjun se bat karunga sab thik kar dunga mai.

ri - ab ye ansu hi mera nasseb hai.ab kuch nahi ho sakta kuch bhi nahi . or jis tarah arjun ne apni behan ke ansuo ko bardash kiya hai usi tarah sari umar aapko meri ye veeran jindgi or ansu dekhne hai bhaiya..plz jaiye yaha se.

sam stand up n look at her crying form painly n guilty

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arjun is sitting in his room holding his n aisha pic in hand near to his heart. he is also crying miserably .

arj - di maine aapka badla le liye use bhi wahi dard diya hai maine par mai khush nahi hu. in sab mai maine riya ko mohra bana diya. i hate myself par aaj bhi jab aapki hasi yad karta hu to apki siskiyan sunai deti .jab bhi apke sath beete pal yad karta hu apka apni jaan de dena yad aata hai.

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arj n aisha home nasik

aisha n arjun happily packing their stuff. aisha is 18 year old n arj is 12 year old

ar - isha di mujhe mumbai nahi jana

ai - arry ye kya ab to tu bada ho gaya hai na pehle bolna nahi aata tha to aisha ko isha bolta tha. ab to bol sakta hai na its aisha aisha not isha

ar - to aap mujhe arry q bulate ho. mera naam bhi arjun hai arjun suryakant rawte

ai - mai to pyar se bulati hu.

ar - to mai bhi to pyar se bulata hu na meri pyari isha di

he put his arms lovingly in her neck.she kiss his hand

ai - dekhna arry hume mumbai mai bahut accha lagega. bada shaher badi si duniya or tu chinta q kar raha hai hum sab to waha bhi sath honge. waha jakar mere sare sapne pure honge.mai aayi baba ka support banungi, khub padungi or acchi job karke aayi baba ki help karungi..or tujhe bhi to foreign bhejna hai padne k liye. fir laut kar desh ko aage badana

ar -wo sab ho jayega isha di .aap humesha mere sath rehna. aap janti hai na aap meri bestest friend hai

ai - to tu hi mera best friend hai.

they hug n she ruffle his hair lovingly n he pout

they shift mumbai with many dreams n hopes.aisha being a scholar get admission in best college of mumbai .its first day of her college.aisha is getting ready .she is looking very beautiful in simple blue n orange salwar suit.she is getting ready n arjun is watching at her his both hand is beside his chin

ai - arry aise kya dekh raha hai

ar - isha di aap bhut acche lag rahe hi. beautiful

he join his thumb n finger n she smile.n ruffle his hair

ar - isha di not again

she laugh alot n he glare her

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he is still listening her carefree laugh n in Terence of it

ar - isha di plz don't do this

but no one is there he hug their pic tightly . n drift in fb

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aisha reach college happily someone stop her.aisha get scared

boy- new girl haaan

aisha nod

boy - give ur introduction

aisha get tensed n two more boy join him

boy 2- viraj kya ho raha hai

vir ( boy1) - are sameer accha hua tu aa gaya dekh new girl

sam - are waah so miss new girl naam kya hai tumhara

ai - aa..isha

boy3(raj)- aa..isha ye batao ...

n they rag her n she get afraid . n day by day their torture aka ragging increased n poor girl always becomes victim of them..it become tough for her to handle trauma . she fall sick.

ar - isha di aapko kya hua jab se aap college gayi ho kitna change ho gayi ho.ab pehle ki tarah hasti bhi nahi. or mujhe padate waqt dantti bhi nhi.or hair bhi ruffle nahi karti

she hug her bro n cry alot.poor 12 year arjun not understand her actual reason but cry with his isha di.she become depressed n always scared of lil things. their parents come to know about this n complaint about raj viraj n sameer. they get restigated for a week.

actually trio belong to high class family . they were overpampered by their parents.so they do ragging for fun n enjoyment n think no one can complaint against them .but aisha complaint after assurance n support of her parents n bro.

she become confident n strong after this incident n trio ask forgiveness from her .n with time become friend of her. but their motive is to revenge her .

one day they mix something in her juice n she start behaving odd. all make fun seeing her like this. she is not in her sense. she is returning home senseless someone take advantage of her situation . she was raped by unknown person . when she come in sense her whole world ruined .she was ruined.

she come home but as a lifeless body, which has no soul. after that no one see her single smile on her face, she was in depression . arju try to cheer her di but he never come to see his isha di again.she did many try to commit suicide .two year passed like this

one day

ar - isha di happy birthday

she look at him with no emotions.it pained him.yes its two year to see his sis kike this but it still pain him same. he want her isha di who always smile ,who want to do something great back to life

ar - isha di plz apne arry se bhi wish nhi lengi. plz di kya hua aapko batao na.kis ne aapko itna pain diya. di plz kuch to bolo

n first time in two year she hug his bro n cry alot.

ai - un teeno ne sab khatam kar diya arry sab chin liya mujhse.sab kuch..or undono ne to mujhe kahi ka nahi choda..

ar - di kisne aapko itna pain diya diya hai di

ai - arry aayi baba ka khayal rakhna.khub padna likhna or naam kamna. tu aisa karega na

ar - haa di .hum yaha se dur chale jayenge, bahut dur .aap plz cake kat lo na

aisha cut cake n after that all sleep. at night arjun see her bad is empty he search her n found her running on road he follow her n call her name..

but she is crying n running . she come near a bridge n jump from that. arjun also wnt to jump but public hold him tightly .n he get faint.

one week later

he found a crossed pic of sam raj n viraj in her dairy.n he read her dairy of two years. he grow mature in very small age. his mother get ill after aisha death n die . his father also die four year later due to cancer . he is all alone now, he work very hard n earn scholarship of newyork n complete his studies n come back aftet settling himself well.

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ar - di maine aapke culprits ko saja de di. raj or viraj ne jo aapke sath kiya uski unhe bhayanak saja mili hai. raj ko to khud bhagwan ne saja di hai use to apke jane k do sal bad hi unknown uncureble disease ho gayi thi. or us viraj ko bhi wahi saja mili hai jo ek rapist ko milni chahiye.

aapko pata hai di maine usi company mai manager ki post li jaha wo kam karta tha. aaj bhi nahi badla tha wo di.disgusting man. par use main saja dilwa hi di.

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arjun stlak on him n collect evidence that viraj is flirt n cheap guy. many staff ladies are fadup with his acts. arjun hier a girl n make him drink drug with alchol

ar - tumhe pata hai na kya karna hai.

gi - ji sir aapka kam ho jayega.

they ccreate a rape scene n fake report with money..n now viraj is in jail. coz not only that girl but all office ladies verdict against him..n when he will come out no thing left for him.arjun ruined him very well. his wife n kid shame on him n leave that disgusting man. arjun help them to get settled .

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ar - di maine apke rapist ko saja dilwa di par abhi ek culprit bhi baki tha. aaj maine use bhi saja de di. par afsos aaj mai khud ek culprit ke rup mai katghare mai khada hu, par di use ye ehasa hona jaruri tha ki ek behan jab roti hai to bhai k dil par kya beetti hai. ragging ya eveteasing koi fun nhi kisi k liye maut ki wajah ban sakta hai. un teeno ne mere dil mai bepanah dard bhar diya hai di .or whi dard aaj maine kisi begunah ko bhi diya hai.

he sit on his knee crying ..

mere sitam sirf tere pyar ka bharam hi nahi tod gaye
kya batau ye kis kadar meri ruh bhi jhinjhod gaye
par jo barso se palta sa aa raha seene mai bepanah dard hai
uske aage tere pyar ke bepanah saye bhi kam ho gaye.


tbc...
last shot will be continue soon


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Posted: 8 years ago
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Very heart painful and agonising update di.
Felt really really bad for riya.
Utterly helpless sam, he knows that his sis is paying the cost of his fault.
Still its gud that he has the courage to accept that he is guilty.
He wants to set everything right & i hope that he become successful in that.
The fb was so terrible, so horrendous. Poor ayesha after becoming a prey to their merciless and regular ragging became traumatic and the final blow of physical assault left her with nothing at hand.
Young arjun was a dearie. Loved the sibling bond very much. Poor kid, he tried with all his effort to bring ayesha out of the dark without even understanding what happened with his sis, but was highly unsuccessful.
Still he is a fighter. Maybe he chose a wrong way but blinded by revenge and pain of tremendous loss who can deal with his emotions in a logical way.
And thus he is suffering too. His pov was heart wrenching.
If riya is heartbroken then arjun too is no better. He too is shattered beyond repair.
Hope really sam can change the situation.
The beginning and ending lines were superb di. Deeply emotional.
Really ariya love each other unconditionally.
Waiting for the last shot di.
Lets see whether ariya's love win or they part ways for the worst.
Gud day di and thanks for updating. It was a beautiful updt all together.

Edited by utsha - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#27
awesome update.
continue soon
thanks for pm in advance
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Posted: 8 years ago
#28
Amazing update
Emotional yet nice one
Perfectly written
Really eveteasing n ragging are very dangerous.. n should be stop
Haww.. Aisha ki ragging n uspr omg ragging k Naam pr itna bada crime...
Aisha was already went from trauma
N they did worst thing with her which make her totally depressed. N she Lost her life
Arjun did very right with criminals
N with Sam he did the same what Sam did with Arjun.
But Arjun really loves Riya.. n he is also crying for putting Riya in all this as a sufferer..
Thanks for PM dear
Continue soon plz
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Posted: 8 years ago
#29
nice shot buddy
continue soon 😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
#30
Awsome update..

Love it..

Aayesha was raped by trio boys..

Teeno ko saza toh mil gayi..

Par iss bich me poor Riya bhi hurt hui..

Plz update soon

Thanks for pm

Waise last ki lines bahot hi acchi he..

N one doubt kya sach me Sam ne aisa kiya tha..?u said someone..so I still hope ke woh Sam na ho shayad usake dost ho..

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