ARIYA TS BEPANAAH shot 3 on pg 9 13/1/17

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manasvi..

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Posted: 8 years ago

tere bahon mai hi mujhe araam milta tha

teri saanson se meri saanse chalti thi

tu hi rehnuma tha meri jindgi ka

teri roshni se roshan meri duniya hoti thi

she is crying hard n hard n looking toward the bridal dress which is laying beside her on her bed. she took it in her hand hug it tightly . his words are ringing in her mind

riya mai yaha apna badla lene aya tha.,...mera kam pura ho chuka hai..ab mai yahan se ja raha hu...

arjun...she cried loudly on his name.

she drift in flash back

6 month before

riya join a firm recently after completing her studies .though she come out of her house for working but still she is sweet navie girl . she trust peoples easily.she think all peoples are like her simple n sweet. but reality is totally opposite to it.

its one week after she joined office, she is working in her cabin ,she is engrossed so much in work .she don't know when it become 9 pm.

ri - uff 9:00 baj gayi aaj to bahut late ho gayi.hope taxi mil jaye

she come out .

ri - pura office khali hai.omg

she get afraid .she feel someone's hand on her shoulder she turn to look at person

ri - rahul sir aap??

rah - are riya tum aaj ab tak kam kar rahi ho.

ri - ji wo kam karte karte dhyan.hi nahi raha

rah - mai tumhe drop kar dunga .but usse pehle qna kuch quality time spend kiya jaye

he lustily move his hand on her cheek,she get afraid n start crying n want to run but he catch her tightly n try to kiss her, she start shouting for help but next second she is behind someone and rahul is crying holding his stomach.

guy- tumhe ladkiyon ke sath thik se behave karna nahi aata.lagta hai kisi ne sikhaya nahi koi bat nahi aaj mai sikha dunga

he beat him badly riya close her eye with her palm .

guy- or kal se office ane ki jarurat nahi tumhara suspension tumhare ghar uff hospital pahuch jayega,.now move

he look at guy fearly n run from their for his dear life,guy move toward riya.

guy.- hay just relax wo tumhe ab kuch nahi karega.open your eyes

she open her eyes slowly which is totally teary . she look at him first her vision is blur due to tear but in some second he.is clearly visible to her. a tall dark handsome guy is standing infront of her with lots of concern in his eyes, ri forward her hand

ri - rrriya

guy - arjun..you ok

ri - hmm thanku so much,

ar - ahh leave it . he deserve such treatment n you deserve to be protected . n plz dont cry for such losser bad deed. he get n will get what he deserve. now plz smile

she smile little.

ar - come I'll drop you.

she follow him n he drop her home .she is shaken by incident but his caring eye sooth all her fear n pain,she sleep remembering his concern n care.

next day she come to know he is their new manager their boss..but he is very humble person.ri feel pull toward him. he also feel the same. its first time when she is feeling like this. they become undeclared friend. she talk with him freely

one day first time he ask her for coffee .she happily agreed. they both arrived cafe n order their coffee. they start talking

Namkin Si Baat Hain
Har Nayi Si Baat Mein

they finshed n move on ther path opposite to each other. but both turn n look at each other at different time.
Teri Khusboo Chal Rahi
Hai Jo Mere Saath Mein

it start raining n ri open her arms to welcome rain

Halka Halka Rang Beete Kal Ka
Gehra Gehra Kal Ho Jayega
Ho Jayega

now its raining heavilyn she is on her home'sroof n dancing

Aadha Ishq Aadha Hai
Aadha Ho Jayega
Kadmo Se Milo Ka
Vada Ho Jayega

in office when.he is working she is starring at him

Aadha Ishq Aadha Hai
Aadha Ho Jayega
Kadmo Se Milo Ka
Vada Ho Jayega

its late night.both on phone talking with each other

Beshumar Raatein
Behisab Baatein

she imagine him n when she try to touch him he is nowhere .

Pass Aate Aate Gum Ho Jati Hai

she smile n lightly hit her head nmove head in disbelief

Bekhudi Mein Dhal Ke
Bekali Mein Jal Ke

she remember all their meeting n talks .
Sau Naazare Yaadein Nam Ho Jati Hai
Fika Fika Pal Betein Kal Ka
Behka Behka Kal Ho Jayega

she wear his blazer which he give her bcoz of cold. she hug it n dance

Ho Jayega
Aadha Ishq Aadha Hai
Aadha Ho Jayega

she take some step forwardn dance

Kadmo Se Milo Ka

Vada Ho Jayega

Aadha Ishq Aadha Hai
Aadha Ho Jayega
Kadmo Se Milo Ka
Vada Ho Jayega

Adha Ishq...

office- he is in meeting out of city. she is missing him starring his cabin

Intezzaar Sa Hai
Imtehaan Sa Hai

she dring 8-10 coffee in his memory

Itminaan Sa Hai
Kya Hai Na Jane

Itraa Rahi Hai
Itna Hui Hai

she get teary n missing him badly its two days they didn'ttalk

Itraa Rahi Hai
Kaise Na Jane

outside her house its raining. she come to window sadly

Chalka Chalka
Pal Beete Kal Ka

she find him outside her house. she get happy

Tehra Tehra Kal Ho Jayega
Ho Jayega

she run toward him n without wasting time wrap her arms arround him.he too do the same.

Aadha Ishq Aadha Hai
Aadha Ho Jayega
Kadmo Se Milo Ka
Vada Ho Jayega

both are hugging each other tightly

Aadha Ishq Aadha Hai
Aadha Ho Jayega
Kadmo Se Milo Ka
Vada Ho Jayega

Adha Ishq

next he proposed her n she happily agreed. they approach her parents first they are not ready bcoz they belong to diff caste but then on riya's brother interface they get agreed.

its ariya wadding .all are preparing n waiting for groom to come he come their. riya is looking so beautiful in her red n off white lehnga n makeup. n he is looking handsome in sherwani.

all are happy .punditji invite them for marriage .

but

ar- ye shadi nahi hogi

all are shocked to listen this

ri - arjun ye majak ka waqt nahi hai.

ar - mai koi majak nahi kar raha.

sameer ri's brother hold arjun's coller

sam - arjun how dare you to play with my sister's life,.akhir kya bigada hai usne tumhara

ar (laugh)- q kisi ki life se khelne ka hak sirf aapko hai mr sameer rathod. or bigada riya ne nahi aapne hai mr rathod aappne bigada hai mera bachpan meri di ki life meri hasti khelti family . or ab apko pata chalega dard kya hota hai. kaisa lagta hai jab apke samne wo insan rota hai jise aap bahut pyar karte hai.or apke karan to meri di mujhse humesha ke liye chin gayi. you better deserve this punishment .or jab jab aap apni behan ke ansu dekhenge apko apne gunah yad ayenge.

sam - tum

ar - arjun suryakant rawte , aisha rawte ka chota bhai,.now u remember

he left the venue leaving all shocked n crying riya n lifeless sameer behind .

tu wajah thi mere muskurane ki

meri muskan tu apne sath le gaya

jindgi gamo ka jaise shamshan ban.gayi

is tan se tu meri jaan le gaya...

Edited by sur1911 - 8 years ago

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Shomaila khan

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Posted: 8 years ago

new ariya stories i lovd it conti soonish

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gauri

@ariya143

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Posted: 8 years ago

Omgg...
Awsomeee starting..
Love to more read..
Continue soon ..
Waitinggg for next..

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cuteariya

@cuteariya

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Posted: 8 years ago

interesting concept
oh hell arjun hurt riya just to get revenge with Sameer 😡
poor riya she is so broken 🥺
hope she wont forgive arjun ever 😡
continue plz

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nitris23

@nitris23

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Posted: 8 years ago

interesting concept
oh god
how can arjun be like that
kisi aur ki galti ki saza
woh riya ko kaise de sakta hai
plz continue soon
😊

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APRIL14

@APRIL14

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Posted: 8 years ago

Omg😡

Interesting start👍🏼

Hate u Rawte 🤬

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balan04

@balan04

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Posted: 8 years ago

Feeling really bad for riya...
Nice update di
Thanks for the pm
Continue soon 😊

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ariyabestfan

@ariyabestfan

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+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

Awsome story..

Love it..

Arjun was playing with riya's feeling to seek revenge from Sam..

What Sam had done to aayesha..?

Plz continue soon

Thanks for pm

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ramshaasrar

@ramshaasrar

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Posted: 8 years ago

Behn aap ka bht bht shukriya hame ek or zabardast ariya dene ke liye...
Or ye update ek dam jhakkas tha...waiting for next part

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Mishthi_Shivsai

@Mishthi_Shivsai

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Posted: 8 years ago

#10

Wow mini di congrats...New Story.👏

OMG !!!!!! What a start !!! Very interesting and quite layered.

I thought that it was a love story but shuru me hi aap sabko rula di????? 😭😭

Anyways, few lines about the update...

Poor riya, her prince charming turned out to be a betrayer, atleast it seems so for the time being. 😡😭Who is at fault or whether the person accused (Sam) is entirely guilty or not, only time will tell. I guess there is a misunderstanding otherwise sam wouldnt have been so lifeless as u mentioned.🤢 Only his sister's life being shattered couldnt be the enough cause. 😕

Waiting for the back story of the revenge to be revealed.😊

The starting and the ending lines were too awesome to be commented at. 👏 Beautiful usage of words. And before i forget to mention, the song blended with the fb situation perfectly. 👏

Now coming to arjun and his deed. What he did couldnt be justified at any cost and under the control of a vengeful mind he probably didnt notice that he is doing the same mistake his enemy did and there will be no differences b/ w them henceforth.😕

But thats not my point. I am not stating here that his decision is correct, but at the same time i want to point that its his way of carrying out the task , his strategies which is wrong. The pain of losing someone is so intense that it will erase the rational bit of a human mind , is not that illogical, is it?? We all r not super humans that we have a control over out hearts and mind. Instead its more often the other way round. Otherwise the proverb " Tit for Tat" or " An eye for an eye " wouldnt have existed. Even if arjun had hurted sam to avenge ayesha would it have caused him the same amount of pain than when his beloved sister's life was destroyed. Maybe its more and thats the reason this practise is still followed in the world.

Its said we should hate the sin and not the sinner. Am waiting eagerly to see di exactly what was the sin and to what extent the sinner was involved. Do cont soon and thanks for the pm di.

Edited by utsha - 8 years ago