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Posted: 8 years ago

#131

Originally posted by: nitris23
wow
awesome updated
sik ki to 😡
feel bad for riya
and also for arjun
full of emotion update
plz cont soon
thnx 4 pm

thanks dear

sikna both😡

hmm its too bad for ariya

will conti soon

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manasvi..

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Posted: 8 years ago

#132

Originally posted by: ariyabestfan
Awesome..

Feel disgust of that sikna..

Plz continue soon

Thanks for pm

Sorry long comment karna chahti thi..par update padh ke kuch aur likh nahi pa rahi..

thanks dear

yup they were disgusting

being a girl i can understand your feeling

will continue soon

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manasvi..

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Posted: 8 years ago

#133

Originally posted by: aashi24
nice update
very emotional n sad update
sikna kill riya's family very brutally
thanks for pm
waiting for next part

thanks dear

yup its was sad n emotional one

will give next part soon

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manasvi..

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Posted: 8 years ago

#134

Originally posted by: Darlingladdu
Awesome update
Par Riyu ka rape wala part bohot hi ghinona and dardnaak hai.
Riyu ne bohot saha hai.
thanks for the PM
Love
Laddu
Update soon

thanks dear

hmm mere liye likhan bhi bahut mushkil tha,

usne bahut saha hai isiliye wo aisi ho gayi hai

will update soon

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manasvi..

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Posted: 8 years ago

#135

Originally posted by: kashvi19
di pls update soon

will soon dear

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manasvi..

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Posted: 8 years ago

#136

Originally posted by: balan04
Di pls update soon...

will update soon dear

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manasvi..

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Posted: 8 years ago

#137

part 57

present

all get worried seeing riya like this.

arjun pick her in his arms n put her on bed.he hug unconscious riya n cry. while sam call doctor

ar - plz jiyu utho.mai hu tumhare sath. plz dont stree urself

karan look at him angerily

kar - kya jarurat thi use force karne ki, use sab yad dila diya tumne. teddy ki aisi halat to us waqt bhi nahi thi jo aaj hai. q kiya tumne aisa.

ar - yad dila diya ,tumhe kya lagta hai karan ki uske sath jo hua use ek pal k liye bhi bhuli hogi. or use force isiliye kiya taki usne jo khud ke andar hi andar band kar rakha hai wo bahar aye or uske dil se kuch to bojh kam ho,tum to jante ho na use wo itni strong nahi hai. wo khud ko saja de rahi hai us chij ki jisme uska koi kusur hi nahi tha,

kar - i am sorry arjun .mai teddy ko is tarah dekh kar ghabra gaya tha,tumne sahi kaha ye bahut jaruri tha.

ar - its ok. i can understand

arjun hug karan.

dr come n check her n give her injection n leave.no one leave her alone all sit around her . they dont want to leave her alone.

sam - isiliye rockstar aisi ban gayi. kitni hasti khelti thi . har pal ko jeene wali ,jindgi ko pyar karne wali.

un bas***ds ki wajah se uska ye haal ho gaya jinda lash ban gayi hai humari riya .

ai - sach mai uske samne or sath jo hua uske bad usne jo himmat rakhi wo salute k layak hai. par mai use aise nahi dekh pa rahi .

she hug sam n he too both are crying .arjun who is sitting beside riya holding her hand .he also has continues flowing tears in his eyes.

sh - isiliye us din jab hume pata chala ki ye humari ri hai or hum use semi conscious se jaga rahe the isne hum par humla kiya

kar - wo jab unconscious hoti hai to usi state.mai chali jati hai. aaj bhi use nightmares aate hai isiliye wo soti nahi

sk - omg tabhi drs ne kaha tha ki ye jagne k liye drugs leti hai.

kar - haa use sone se dar lagta hai. wohi cheeje uske sapno mai roz chali aati hai. jab se aap logon se especially arjun se mili hai thodi calm hui hai.

ai - haa jab hum room share karte the tb bhi ye rat mai nahi soti thi. mai ise god (lap) mai sulati thi to so jati thi par fir rat mai cheekh kar uth jati thi.

sh - or jab hum pehli bar mile the isne us mohan ko kitni buri tarh mara qki usne ise chu bas liya tha. kitna mushkil hai ri k liye . wo jara si chij bardash nahi kar pati ab.

kar - hmm use sabka touch ganda lagta hai .specially jab wo semi conscious ho. kai bar neend mai use dekhne jata tha to mujh par attack karti thi. isliye ishu hi use sambhalti thi.

sakshi - par wo arjun par kabhi attack nahi karti . humesha uske sath safe feel karti hai.

kar - qki riya ki jindgi ki sabse pure or badi chij uska arme hi hai. wo uska hero hai. uspar riya ko khud se jyada viswas hai.

all look at arjun

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manasvi..

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Posted: 8 years ago

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all look at arjun.whose face is hanging till his neck

ar - or mai apni jiya ko us nark se nahi bacha paya. uske sabse mushkil waqt mai uska sath nahi de paya.kitna badnaseeb hu mai. agar us din aisa nahi hota to shayad mai apni jiya ko is jung mai akela nahi hone deta

same day

its ariya first meeting anniversary n the black day when sikna attacked ri family

arjun is in the village , in his room

ar - happy anniversary jiyu.tumse bat bhi nahi kar sakta . but i love you n miss u so much.

he kiss the gift which ri send on his birthday .

his phone ring, its call of his informer . he get news today is deal of the drugs. his mission peak point. he.get ready.

he reach there n shoot all n call backup . but they are leaving so he has to attached them alone.he did it .its really tough,but he won .as backup also come on time. but someone of goon hit his head n he get faint. police admit him in hospital .

dr - lagta hai inhe pehle yahi chot lagi thi. wo thik sebhari bhi nahi thi ek or chot. kuch keh nahi sakte.,he.sleeps into coma.

fb end,

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ar - mai pure 3 month tak coma mai tha.fir jab hosh aya or jiya ko contact kiya to pata chala uski family ghar mai hue cylinder blast mai mar gayi. or wo jaldi hi mumbai aa rahi hai. fir roshni jiya ban kar ayi .or mai.

sam - isme teri koi galti nahi arjun ,halat hi aise the

ar -sab roshni ki wajah se hua. usne mujhe dhoka diya . wo riya ko samjha sakti thi.

kar - tum abhi bhi pura sach nahi jante ho arjun. riya ne kya kiya ye to tumhe pata chal gaya par roshni ne apni riyu k liye kya kiya ye janna baki hai. so iljam mat lagao us par,

ar - sorry par mai kaise bhul jau wo sab . khair mai bhi kahan pehchan paya use

karan - khud ko blame mat karo , sab waqt k haton ki katputli hai .

that night passed like this. all get tired n sleep there.

next morning all wake up n do their morning work. ri also get up.

she is now ok. ok means stable not fine.

all takelunch

she start telling further

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manasvi..

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Posted: 8 years ago

#139

sikna stangle riya neck ,so that she will die.

sikna laugh

sik - mar gaye humare sare dushman ek sath.bechare dcp ne socha tha ki isne khud ko or family ko secure kar diya hai. is technology ko todkar hum andar nahi aa payenge.

ran - technology wakai mai jabrdast thi par iska officer bik gaya . ise abhi paiso or power ka andaja nahi tha.bechara soch raha tha ki koi iski family ka kuch nahi bigar sakta. par hum sikna hai.

both laugh

sik - iski ek behan bachi hai na riya. use bhi marna hoga or wo bhi tadap tadap kar . iski atma ko bhi tadapna hoga uski tadap dekhkar. suna hai wo apne dost k sath bus se mumbai gayi hai.

ran - to der kis bat ki pehle inhe thikane lagaye. tum log suno sare khidki darwaje band karo or ghar ke cylinder khol do.

they come out of house. here anurag take some breath.He some how reach till riya n pull a curtain n put it on riya n try to wake her.bcoz he check her she is still breathing but her pulse rate is very low.

anu - princess utho ,tumhe uthna hoga. uth jao.

riya take long breath .she hardly open her eyes n look at her almost dead bro. she remember her condition n cry,

anu - abhi time nahi hai princess . utho jao yaha se wo ghar jala denge ,dekho gas failne lagi hai.

ri - nahi bahiyu mujhe mar jane dijiye. mai jeen nahi chahti

anu - tum ek fauji ki beti or sipahi ki behan ho. tum tut nahi sakti. promise me princess tum un dono ko unke anjam tak pahuchaogi, jo dard or takleef unhone hume or dusro ko diye hai unhe uski pai pai chukani hogi. promise me.

ri - i promise bhaiyu hum unhe saja dilwayenge, aap chaliye,

anu - nahi princess mai nahi chal paunga. promise me princess tum kamjor nahi padogi. tum jiyogi .aise ghinone logo ka kal bankar

ri - bhaiyu nahi

anu - promise me

he is not being able to talk .he is sinking

ri - promise bhaiyu. inhone riya ko mar diyaa aaj.or jis ladki ko inhone aaj janam dia hai wo inka kaal banegi.

anu - princess go.or wo log pari par bhi attack karne wale hai.us camra ko le jao usme sab record hua hai. unke khilaf sabut hoga.i..a..m, .sorry ...mai tumhe..

n he died.

ri - bhaiyu..

she stand up some how n wrap that cloth n take that cam, murti n locket give by arjun .n her family pic.

she some how come out of house from back door n faint due to her weakness.

dutin come from back route

dus - aaj back door se jakar sabko surprise dunga. amit ko bhi pata chale mai commissioner aise hi nahi bana . bada fauji hone ka dum jhadta hai.

he look at riya laying there

same time infront of her house.

ran - 20 min ho gaye hai.ab jaldi se aag laga do.

both sit in car n their man blast their home.

sik - ye kissa khatam

ran- humesha humesha k liye,

back side.

Dustin look at blast n get shocked. he cry n try to wake up ri

dus - riyu riyu utho.

ri gain conscious in some time.

ri - uncle call karan . roshu ki jan khatre mai hai.

she barely can talk. her voice is nt coming . blood come out from her mouth,

du - riyu

he shout n pick her n her bag n start car. n call karan

du - karn jaldi se roshu or tum bus chodo or mumbai laut aao

kar - par dad hua kya

du - jitna keh raha hu utna karo.

they come out of bus.

here dustin take riya to dr vaani clinic . he already inform that there is an emergency .

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Posted: 8 years ago

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he bring riya to dr vaani clinic . ishu n dr subhash is also there,

ish - maai kya case hai dad ne itni rat ko kaha

vaani - pata nahi ishu, par wo bahut ghabraye hue the. mujhe bhi ghabrahat ho rahi hai.tani se bat karne ka man hai. par wo so rahi hogi.

ish - hum kal bat kar lenge maai. or waise bhi didu ko double rest ki jarurat hai. jaldi hi mai masi ban jaungi.

sub- hmm. sahi kaha par pata nahi q neend nahi aa rahi hai. ajjeb lag raha hai.

dustin come there hurriedly n riya is in his arms.all get shocked n worried to look at riya like this,

ish - teddy. kya hua meri teddy ko dad.

she shout n cry..

dust - abhi waqt nahi hai..bhabhiji plz check her . i think iska ra

he can't tell more n cry. all get numbed hearing this n looking at her.

her whole face has many strach marks n blood is all over her face.,

he put her on stratcher n vaani call subhash to assist her, bcoz dustin ask them not to involve any one in this.

trio in ot.n ishu with dustin.she is crying very badly,

ish - kaise hua ye sab or sab kaha hai,mumma papa ( ri's mapapa)jiju or didu.

dust - pata nahi jab mai pahuch

he tell her all with so much difficulty .

ish - didu

she cry more hugging her dad.

ish - mujhe ghar mai achha nahi lag rha tha isiliye mai babu k sath aa gayi. par mujhe kya pata tha ye sab sunne or dekhne ko milega.

they both cry.

tbc...

precap

ri-rosh meet.

riya take a decision

riya condition

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