ARIYA SS - HOGI PYAR KI JEET part 2 on page 11 27/2/17 - Page 6

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Posted: 8 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: Ayushi2608

Its a vry different concept but at the same time it is nice also[DIV]Arjun ki mom uska shadi karva rhi h vo bhi uska marzi ka against...pr accha hua last moment mei engagement tooth gaya..pr roshni ka accident was sad part..hope vo jald hi thik ho jaye[/DIV][DIV]Riya ki family moment was vry sweet[/DIV][DIV]Aur ariya ki kuhdali ki kya mistry h..aur aise kaun se baat h jo badoo ko pta h pr ariya se chupaya ja rha h..[/DIV][DIV]Continue soon[/DIV][DIV]Plz pm me also when u will update the nxt part[/DIV]



thanks dear
glad u like it n find different n interesting
yeah rosh is fine n arni didn't engaged
you will know all soon
sorryfor late

but will update soon

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Posted: 8 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: cuteariya

sur dear did u forgot this SS? [:^(]



no dear..i remember this one
will give update soon
n sorry for make u wait
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Posted: 8 years ago
#53
Mujhe iska pm chahiye.. So gd baccho ki tarha pm de dena.. Ok?
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Posted: 8 years ago
#54

Originally posted by: Aayat.aru14

Mujhe iska pm chahiye.. So gd baccho ki tarha pm de dena.. Ok?


yeah will surely pm u lke a good kid
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Posted: 8 years ago
#55
part 2

riya is trying hard to find a perfect job for herself ..she has given many interviews ..today she come rawte industry to give interview .manager is taking interview.

ri - may i come in sir

man - yes come in

she come in

man - please sit.n show me your document

ri give him documents n he ask some question n she answer them..

man - okie miss we will inform you if you got selected .

ri nod n standup .she has wore a beautiful pink shiffon up n down kurta with kapri. bangles in her hand n a scarff. she collide with someone n her documents fall from her hand..she start arranging them..her hairs are coming on her face just than arjun passed from there. he here sound of her bangles n goes in subconscious state..some scens flashing infront of his eyes.

he is searching for someone n suddenly he hear someone making sound form bangles . he smile n follow the sound direction..he find a girl is hiding .he go from back.

he- itna late q ayi

her face is not visible her hairs come on face .she don't say any thing..just make sound of bangles .

he come in present world as lisa is calling him ..he is sweating alot..he search for the girl but she is nowhere.,yes riya collected her documents before lisa arrived n call arjun

li - bhai kya hua aap aisa q behave kar rahe hai..cabin mai chaliye kitna paseena aa raha hai aapko..or kise dhund rahe hai aap.

ar - wo yahi thi..maine dekha use

li - kaun yahan thi bhai kise dekha aapne

arjun calm alil

ar - koi nahi..kuch nahi chalo cabin mai..,

he move towards his cabin n a confused lisa follow him.

scene shift

riya come out of building ..she is walking senselessly..a car is coming toward her..some aunty pull her..

aun - ladki pagal ho gayi ho kya..dhyan kahan hai tumhara ..mar jati abhi

she look at the surrounding all are looking at her n aunty is glaring her..she feel embarrassed

ri -.sorry aunty.n thanku

she smile nervously n aunty move head in disbelief

au - aj kal k bacche pata nahi.kuan si sapno ki duniya mai rehte hai.

she left n also all. she is confused what happened with her..

ri mv ye kya hua mujhe aaj tak to aisa kuch nahi hua .aisa laga jaise kuch pal k liye mai ek alag hi duniya mai thi.,,

she look here n there

ri - omg mai yaha q ayi mere ghar ka route to opposite way mai hai..document collect karne k bad mujhe kuch yad nahi..

she confusedly left the place n reach home. her head is heavy so she lay on her bed n sleep.,

here when lisa left arjun is alone in his cabin

arj - kya hua ye mujhe kya tha wo sab. or kya mai sapna dekh raha tha .kaun thi wo ladki.

he hold his head which is paining .he take his intercom

ar - verma ek do ghante mujhe disturb mat karna.my head is paining..

ver - yes sir..are you ok

ar - hmm fine..

he cut call n go to his personal bedroom attached with his cabin n sleep on his bed..
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Posted: 8 years ago
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next day

riya get a call from rawte industries .she is numb to listen whatever she listen.shree come there n put his hand on her shoulder

sh - riya ,riya kya hua

ri - haaa shree..tu..shree shree

sh - kya hua bol na

ri hug him

ri - i got job shree..i got a good job with best salary ..

shree is so happy n hug her back.,they give news to their parents they are also very happy for her. they celebrate her joining ..

next day riya join her job n is happy but she don't meet with arjun.

one week passed n she easily adjusted in office .both arjun n riya feeling restless for unknown reason.,

7:00 pm

ri look at her watch

ri - omg 7 baj gayi..itna late ma mera mandir mai wait kar rahi hongi aaj maha shivratri hai..

she quickly pack her things n leave..she collide with arjun..

ri - sorry.,

n she left quickly .today also he didn'tsee her face coz its wrapped in scarff..

ar - kaun thi ye

peon - sir nayi ladki hai. ek hafta hua hai.

arj nod..

his pov nahi ye wo nahi thi isne wo bangles nahi pehne the or dressing bhi alag tha..but still i feel strange when she collide with me..

yes she come office in formal kurta n jeans with only watch in her hand n studs in her ears n hairs tied in french choti.

his phone buzzed he attend call

ar - yes mom

mala - arjun aaj mahashivratri hai hume shivji k mandir jana hai..

ar - mom plz mujhe nahi jana

ma - arjun shivji mahakal hai wo sari musibat dur kar dete hai..tu mere sath chal raha hai bus.

ar - mom aap itna insecure q ho I'm fine

ma - tu aa raha hai ki nahi

she said cryingly he sigh

ar - ok mom aa raha.hu..

she cut call n driver give him a packet he move his head in disb

ar - mom bhi na she already know mai unke ansu nahi dekh sakta..so mr rawte pehno ye kurta or jao mandir with mom..

he return to his room in office .take bath n get ready in blue jeans n white kurta.he wore shades his watch n come out of room sit in his car n left.


riya also reach home

ri - shree

sh - yeah you guessed right nirupa roy bahut gusse mai thi..

ri - yaar dhyan hi nahi raha.

sh - chal jaldi ready ho ja maine dost ki bike li hai .hopefully hum time par pahuch jayenge..
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Posted: 8 years ago
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ri - aww bunty you're so sweet

sh - dekh bunty mat bula warna mai chal raha tere sath..ek to ma se dant khao tere liye or tu nam bigad

ri - aww my bro sorry

sh - ohh dramatic di jaldi kar,.

she ruffle his curly hair n run to bathroom .she take quick bath n get ready in 3/4 sleeve anarkali kurta with front cut from bottom to waist with chudidar..she dry her hair n only made puff n left all hair open..she apply bindi n wore big earing take duppata..

ri - ohh bangles to bhul hi gayi..

she start wearing bangles ..some flashes come infont of her eyes

some one is making her wear bangles..

he - ye chudiya na tujh par bahut acchi lagti hai..jab ye teri kalaiayon mai khankti hai na to lagta hai jaise koi surili she dhun suna raha hi.aisa lagta hai bas inki khank se meri subah shuru ho or .

he smile naughty

(only his smile is visible his face is blur)

she - chup karo..bade besharam ho gaye ho tum.mai nahi pehanne wali abse chudiya.

he - nahi aisa mat karna mai to inki khank sune bina mar hi jaunga

she put her hand on his mouth

he - to wada kar tere haton mai chudiyan khankti rahegi..,

she - wada..

di di riya ...

she hear some voice n come in sense

sh - di tu thik hai..

she composed herself

ri - haa shree chal chalte hai..

sh - you sure..ma ko phone karu..kitna paseena aa raha.hai tujhe

ri - mai thik hu shree chal..

she move n he worriedly follow her.

they sit on bike n she is lost

ri mv ye kya tha jo maine dekha kaun the wo dono ..dono ka face blur tha..par aisa laga jaise wo mere samne hua ..par kaise mai...

she is confused but shrugged off her thought ..they reached tample

ri- uff itni badi line

sh - hmm aaj shivratri hai na..
ri - hm .or udhar dekh vip line ..bhagwan ko bhi nahi bakhshte ye paise wale log huh,

she made face..

sh - tu bhi na di humesha paise walon se chidti hai specially boys se

ri - or nahi to kya maine to koi aisa genuine ladka nahi dekha jo genuine or grounded ho..bas paison ka proud..yaad hai na us bade baap ki bigdi aulad ne kya kiya tha sona k sath..pehle khud pyar k jaal mai fasya or fir use middle class girl keh kar sabke samne usi par iljam laga diya..how disgusting

sh - par sab bure nahi hote di

ri - pata nahi ..maine to koi accha bhi nahi dekha.

sh - or teri life mai koi aisa aa gaya to

ri - ha ha jaise wo ayega or aakar bolega mai aa gaya hu riya tumare liye..aisa koinahi hai..samjha tu

she hit him n drag him..here arjun reach same time

ar - mai aagya hu ma..
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Posted: 8 years ago
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ar - mai aagya hu ma..

mala , suryakant n lisa look at him..

li - wow bhai looking handsome in kurta..

ma - chale arjun ..

they are about to enter vip line

ar - mom ap log chalo

ma - dekh arjun tu aaj darshan kare bina nahi jayega

ar - haa mom nahi jaunga but mai vip line mai nahi jane wala..ye un logon k sath galat hoga to un par astha rakhte hai or ghanto line mai lagte hai..

sur - its ok mala tum janti ho tumhara beta usulon ka pakka hai,,

li - bhai mai bhi apke sath aaungi..

she look at her mom dad they nod n left for normal line..

li - wow bhai kitni bhid hai..first time mai bhid mai ayi hu..

ar - meri to adat hai

li - i know i know..accha bhai aap na ab is special ladki ko mang lena..

arjun raised his eyebrows

li - are wahi jiska description dete waqt us din apki ankhe chamk rahi thi.

arjun move his head in disbelief ..

ariya is in a row but a rope is betweenthem which divide them in column ,both are busy in talking with their siblings .suddenly their hand touched n they feel something ..but before they see eachother crowd push them n they miss chance..

arjun - lisa n shree - riya separated in crowd ..they reach inside temple n look for their siblings..its a big templefrom inside so no rush is there..

riya mv uff ye shree kahan gaya

ar - lisu kahan gayi bechari pehli bar itni bhid mai ayi..dar gayi hogi..he is searching for her

shree also searching for riya,

sh - ye di pata nahi kahan gayi

just than he hear small sob he find a girl sobbing ..she is looking afraid but so beautiful.chubby n cutie pie..

sh- excuseme aap ro q rahi hai

li - mai bhai k sath aayi thi kho gayi.

she said between sob,he offer her hanky she look at him , cute curly hair boy is standing infront of her having genuine concern in his eyes.

sh- plz ro mat

her word make her comfortable she nod n clear her tears

sh - chalo tumhare bhai ko dhundte hai or meri di ko bhi

li - wo bhi kho gayi hai

sh - hmm..

he offer her hand n she hold his hand ..she don't want to lost alone again..they finding their siblings while talking..she see arjun who is looking for her..

li - bhai..

she smile n shree left her hand she run n hug arjun who is relived now..she smile at shree while in hug with her bhai..he to smile n bid bye to her..here riya find him n hit his shoulder
ri - kahan tha tu kab se dhund rahi hu

sh - ahh di lagti hai na..

ri - lagti hai di..jhute..

he smile n they enter main temple ..after them ariza also enter n pray to god.arjun again hear similar sound ..he open his eyes n look here n there..
tbc...


precap - ariya hit n miss some more flashes..a relation come for riya..

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Nice update di
Thanks for the pm
Continue soon 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Awesome amez fantastic update
Loveit
Cont soon

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