ARIYA SS - HOGI PYAR KI JEET part 2 on page 11 27/2/17

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Hey dears

I know alot of stories of mine are pending n here I present new one .
But this story is on request of lovely Darlingladdu. She want me to write an is on ariya on concept of reincarnation .so here I present this one.
Sorry but my little mind can't write this topic in one shot so I present it as ss with 6-7 parts. N try to update it daily. Hope you enjoy this one too.

Thanks

PS - on request of n dedicated to laddu. N of course you all my lovely readers...
N sorry for all n lots of irritating PMS..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part 1

One big mansion is decorated like bride. All servants are doing their work in hurry.
Inside the mansion one couple in their 50s are standing with worried face.

Lady - surya ye tumne bilkul accha nahi kiya use USA se wapas bula kar sab jante hue bhi.

Sur - or tumhe kya lagta hai mala jo tum kar rahi ho WO sahi hai is tarah apna decision apne bete par thop kar .WO to humara beta hai Jo chup chap apna sir jhuka diya tumhare decision k a age warna uski jagah koi or hota to

Ma - dekho surya mai jo bhi kar rahi hu usi ki bhalai k liye kar rahi hu.or roshni acchi ladki hai.hum use or uski family ko bahut acche se jante hai.bas chat jaldi se sagai fir shadi or arjun or roshni ko hum wapas USA bhej denge or hum or lisu bhi shift ho jayenge.

Su - or tumhe lagta hai isse sab theek ho jayega.tum aaj bhi us bekar baba ki baton ko nahi bhuli.

Ma - tum mano na mano mai manti hu.or mere bete par koi anch nhi aane dungi. Kitni mannaton k bad paya hai use.warna mai to aulad ki aas hi chod chuki thi.

Su - mai bhi usse utna hi pyar karta hu .akhir baap hu uska par tum is tarah jaldbaji mai 2 jindgiyan DAV par laga rahi ho.

Ma - dekho surya bahas mat karo mehman Or ladki wale
Aate hi honge.

this is engagement ceremony of arjun rawte , one n only son of rawte industries owner Mr suryakant rawte n mala rawte with roshni deshpande daughter of famous diamond merchant n her mother is friend of mala.

All guest start coming. Suryakant n mala receiving all guest with smile. Voice of chripy laughs n happiness is echoing hall.at last deshpande family arrived.

Mr suraj deshpande arrived with his wife kalpna despande n son ishaan deshpande.

Sur - welcome aaiye

Mala - roshni nahi ayi

Kal - tumhe to pata hi hai mala rosh ko Sab perfect chahiye or aaj to uski engagement hai to aaj to time legi hi.parlour mai hai aati hi hogi.

All smile

Su - arjun kaha hai.usse kai saal pehle mile the USA Jane se pehle

Ma - yahi hai apne doston k sath abhi bulati hu.arjun

N one boy of age abt 25 turn from a group of young boys.he wear a grey sherwani n looking very handsome. As he turned all girls look at him n lost in him.but he straightly go to his mother.

Ar - ji aayi

Ma - beta inse milo ye suraj bhai sahab ye kalpna roshni k mom dad or ye uska bhai ishan.

Arjun take blessings of them n shake hand with ishan.after little time he excuse himself n goes to his room.

He worriedly sit on bed n some one put hand on his shoulder. He know who is this n he lightly put his hand on her n light wispher her name

Ar - lisu.

Lavika aka Lisa or lisu is younger n only daughter of rawte's n Darling sister of arjun.she is 22 year old.

Li - dada mai aayi se bat karu

Arjun look at her n smile

Ar - kis bare mai

Li - aap roshni se engagement nhi karna change hai na.kya koi or

Ar - its not like that lisu .koi nhi hai par mai abhi kuch kam karna chahta hu .is tarah itni jaldi shadi nahi. Or tu acche se janti hai Maine kabhi kisi ladki ko date nahi kiya its like mujhe kabhi kisi k sath wo spark fell hi nahi hua.

Li - kaisa spark Dada

Ar - jab pehli bar uske bare mai sunu to usse milne ko man kare. Jab pehli bar wo mere samne aye to us par se najar na hate.jab pehli bar wo mere pas aaye to dil ki dhadkane tez ho jaye. Jiski hasi se mere hoton par khud muskurahat aa jaye .uski ankhe jaise mujh par koi jaadu kar jaye. Uski batien mere dil ko chu jaye.Jo sirf or sirf mere liye bani ho or mai uske liye.

Li - wow Dada aapko to writer hona chahiye tha.

Arjun smile n servant call them in party hall. They sadly come there.

After 15 min more

Kal - suraj plz roshni ko call karo wo pahuchi nahi abhi tak.

Suddenly his cell buzz n he get numbed after hearing that call.

Kal - kya hua suraj tum aise

Su - ro...roshni ki car ka bhayanak accident ho gaya.wo hospital mai hai.

All get shocked n rush to hospital.they meet inspector there

Ins - car ki halat bahut kharab hai.dumper chad gaya us par.or kaha gaya kuch pata nahi.WO to mis roshni ki kismat acchi thi wo pehle hi bahar gir gayi warns unka bacna mushkil tha.

Tabhi Dr - wo ab thik hai. Par 15 din full bad rest or had roj bandage change karne honge.iske alawa left hand or leg mai minor fracture bhi hai.wo abhi behosh hai hosh mai aate hi aap mil sakte hai.

Kal to mala - mala dekh ye shaadi nhi ho sakti, pehle mai baba or bhavisyavani mai nahi manti thi par aaj jo hua uske bad. Meri beti aaj kismat se bal bal bach gayi par aage mai risk nahi le sakti.

Mala - I can understand. Hope roshni jaldi thik ho jaye.

Here arjun n Lisa is totally puzzled what is happening.
N why she break marriage.

They return home n ask them about all this but they don't tell them any thing.

More to read
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Scene shift

Small colony in Mumbai
A small house

one couple n one boy n girl is sitting on dining table n enjoying their lunch.

Man - to beta kya socha hai tune.

Gi - or kya kal se interview dena shuru.

La - par beta tu to aage music school mai job karna chahti thi na.

Gi - to kya hua ma school mai job karu ya company mai. Waise bhi mujhe company mai jyada salary milegi .fir jaldi hi is bunty ko
Bhi pg mai admission dilana hai.

Man - par beta

Gi - offo papa no bahas or dekhna ek din mai khud ka music school kholungi or aap sabko kahenge wo dekho wo meri beti hai riya Mukharjee

Boy - par di plz mujhe bunty mat bulao it doesn't suit me

Ri - to kya bulau aapko Mr shreekant mukharjee

Sh - call me shree Di.

Ri - ok baba.

All laugh n continue dinner

So this is happy n small family consist of mr onir mukharjee n Mrs shubra mukharjee their 24 year old daughter riya n 23 year old son shree.

Next day

Riya is getting ready for interviews

Shu - riyu beta apna tabiz q utara tune mana kiya hai na Ise nahi utarna .

Ri - sorry ma par ise q nahi utarna

Shu - tumhe bola to samajh nahi aata har bat mai sawal.
Kya apni ma k liye bina puche itna nahi kar sakti.

Ri kiss her cheek.

Ri - ok meri nirupa roy nahi puchungi dobara or kholungi bhi nahi. Ok by ma bye papa

On- bye beta.

N she left.shree already left for college.

On - mujhe lagta hai hume use bata dena chahiye taki wo sawdhan rahe

Shu - nahi mai nahi chahti wo ye sab sunke pareshan ho.jo jaisa chal raha hai chalne do .baki hume bus dhyan rakhna hai wo ye tabiz kabhi na utare.


Sceneshift

Deserted location

An old man is sitting on steps of tample. He is singing bhajans n praying to god.

Om - jo kab ka likha ja chuka hai kismat mai use kaun rok payega. Tum or hum to bas katputliyan hai uske haathon ki. Fir se wahi jang shuru hogi jo aaj se 25 sal pehle aduri reh gayi thi. Wo teeno fir aamne saamne honge. Kya wo dono is bar use hara payenge.or is kahani ka wo chutha or aham hissa kya wo is bar sahi faisla le payega or le payega apne paapon se mukti. Ye sab to samay k garb mai chupa hai mai nahi janta .mai to bas itna janta hu mohabbat to khud prarthna k saman hai us ishwar ki.wahi mohabbat ab shuru hone wali hai.wo Milne wale hai.

TBC..

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey wonderful storyline
Pls continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thanks for the pm di nice story line
Continue soon 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Interesting
Continue soon
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Superb start!!!
Totally luvd d concept...
Wat were ri parents talking abt telling her??
Waiting for ariya to meet!!
Continue soon
Thnx for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
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nice start di
loved the concept
why Mr n Mrs rawte worried about arjun
ohh she is forcing arjun to marry rosh
but she got hurt in accident
n her patents break alliance but why
here riya n family moment very nice
but here is also mystery of that tabiz
wow ariya will be going to meet
shisa is siblings of ariya
who are they four person from past I guess two is ariya but who is rest two.
update soon
thanks for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wonderful update
Nxt part jaldi update karo
N thnx for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thankyou thankyou thankyou thankyouu so much for this Ariya story in Reincarnation.
Awesome amazing story line i m loving it.
Waw Arjun toh shayar ban gay. Ladki pe pura panna likh diya woh bhi bina dekhe. Jab dekhenge tb toh puri kitab likh denge.
Ohhh waw Roshni bach gai.

Mamma thoda jysda hi sochti hai haina.

Pleasr update sooon

❤️Love you
Thank you for the story.❤️

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