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Posted: 9 years ago
#51
Ress/unresss...!!!

Yipppeee... Me first to comment!!!🥳okks.. Okds... Not actually!!!! *sorry*
Coming to update!!!! Its so Awsomeeessst update yaarrr!!!!! 👏 just love love love love it!!!!!!! So riya directly blurt out her feel but watching her expression... She got what's she is for him.. So she quickly back out... Nice one!!! I love that... How you describe whole this part!!!😛😛 and coming to Arakshi... Ohhhooo... Mr.arjun was confused because of his lady love and then directly dragged her to his cabin...😆 love that confession... Each of the wordsss of his... To make her believe that both are perfect and eaqually needed for each other!!! Truly simplicity at its best!!!👏 love this part so much... That finally kiss!!😳😳
😳 Fantastic story!!!! Loved it!!

Plsss do write epilogue!!!!*puppy face**

Plsss do write more...!! Trust me you are an awesome writer plsss want more on arakshi!!! Love you dear!! 🤗
Edited by Arakshiya_58 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#52
awesome update .
thanks for PM
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Posted: 9 years ago
#53
Yiipppeee I am dancing reading last one. Its amazing honey. Pls update another new one okay. And ya congrats for this one. Love you. Keep writing.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#54
Oh! the wait is over.
But I must say it was worth waiting.
Very nice update.

I thought maybe Arjun will have to !manage ria politely but u gave no scope for that. She expressed her maturity just when needed and controlled herself.
Though I felt it a little funny that Arjun didn't understood her mind when she half proposed, but again given that he already had such a pressing issue of making sakshi understand, his state was quite understandable and apt.
The confession was deserving. The picture of their happy future, that Arjun weaved through his words could ultimately bring out sakshi out of her insecurities and bitter past. The lines could actually bring a genuine smile on her face, not the fake ones which always carried amidst profuse tears of loneliness and sufferings of all these years.

They both have a past, both have a tainted soul. So they would be the best healers for each other. Its true that they both still need time to recuperate, but having each other by their side, its won't be that impossible. The couple had truly found their heaven after losing a part of their lives. They finally found their HOME where they truly belong, THEIR HEARTS, which now behold new hopes and eyes sparkling with dreams of future.

The story ends here, but it was a beautiful journey altogether. Now don't be lazy and come up with a new one pls pls pls pls pls. Thanks for the pm. Have a Gud day.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#55
Hey my dear frnd🤗...after a long time u wrote something and i couldn't even check it😔
Look...now its completed...but i just read the first part😔...don't worry i will read it whole...coz the starting was amazing👏
First part -
Amazing start...as i said😃
Arjun changed after killing siki...old Arjun came back...so good😃
He now jokes and pass funny comments...😆😆...Sakshi and Arjun became frnds...too good...😃
Sam and Saki did their best to bring old Arjun back...and even the team...
Riya came...and with her entry...everything changed😒
Sakshi felt bad seeing riya so close to Arjun and Arjun felt the indifference...
He tried to talk but she just din't give him a chance to speak...
She felt bad when Arjun said ki mai bhul gaya...she think he ignored her...so much of complications🤔
"Tum pregnant ho kya"...this one was too good🤣
Sakshi hurted Arjun and Arjun also got angry and went from there...hmmm...
Will read other parts soon...thanks for the pm😊
Edited by Desirable_Star - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#56
Unres on page 7...!! 🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
#57

Originally posted by: Arakshiya_58

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2" color="#993333">Ress/unresss...!!!</font>

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<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2" color="#993333">Yipppeee... Me first to comment!!!🥳okks.. Okds... Not actually!!!! *sorry*</font>
<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2" color="#993333">Coming to update!!!! Its so Awsomeeessst update yaarrr!!!!!👏just love love love love it!!!!!!! So riya directly blurt out her feel but watching her expression... She got what's she is for him.. So she quickly back out... Nice one!!! I love that... How you describe whole this part!!!😛😛and coming to Arakshi... Ohhhooo... Mr.arjun was confused because of his lady love and then directly dragged her to his cabin...😆love that confession... Each of the wordsss of his... To make her believe that both are perfect and eaqually needed for each other!!! Truly simplicity at its best!!!👏love this part so much... That finally kiss!!😳😳</font>
<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2" color="#993333">😳Fantastic story!!!! Loved it!!</font>
<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2" color="#993333">
</font>
<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#993333" size="4">Plsss do write epilogue!!!!*puppy face**</font>
<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2" color="#993333">
</font>
<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2" color="#993333">Plsss do write more...!! Trust me you are an awesome writer plsss want more on arakshi!!! Love you dear!! 🤗</font>



Ahh i thought about an epilogue but tbh I've an entirely different plan. Maybe I'll go with it or I'll not but for now this is complete. Thanku so much for your worthy words. Love 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#58

Originally posted by: meera1803

Oh! the wait is over.

But I must say it was worth waiting.
Very nice update.

I thought maybe Arjun will have to !manage ria politely but u gave no scope for that. She expressed her maturity just when needed and controlled herself.
Though I felt it a little funny that Arjun didn't understood her mind when she half proposed, but again given that he already had such a pressing issue of making sakshi understand, his state was quite understandable and apt.
The confession was deserving. The picture of their happy future, that Arjun weaved through his words could ultimately bring out sakshi out of her insecurities and bitter past. The lines could actually bring a genuine smile on her face, not the fake ones which always carried amidst profuse tears of loneliness and sufferings of all these years.

They both have a past, both have a tainted soul. So they would be the best healers for each other. Its true that they both still need time to recuperate, but having each other by their side, its won't be that impossible. The couple had truly found their heaven after losing a part of their lives. They finally found their HOME where they truly belong, THEIR HEARTS, which now behold new hopes and eyes sparkling with dreams of future.

The story ends here, but it was a beautiful journey altogether. Now don't be lazy and come up with a new one pls pls pls pls pls. Thanks for the pm. Have a Gud day.




Haha thanku so much for supporting me throughout and if my brain allows me I'll maybe come up with something new very soon 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#59

Originally posted by: Desirable_Star

Hey my dear frnd🤗...after a long time u wrote something and i couldn't even check it😔

Look...now its completed...but i just read the first part😔...don't worry i will read it whole...coz the starting was amazing👏
First part -
Amazing start...as i said😃
Arjun changed after killing siki...old Arjun came back...so good😃
He now jokes and pass funny comments...😆😆...Sakshi and Arjun became frnds...too good...😃
Sam and Saki did their best to bring old Arjun back...and even the team...
Riya came...and with her entry...everything changed😒
Sakshi felt bad seeing riya so close to Arjun and Arjun felt the indifference...
He tried to talk but she just din't give him a chance to speak...
She felt bad when Arjun said ki mai bhul gaya...she think he ignored her...so much of complications🤔
"Tum pregnant ho kya"...this one was too good🤣
Sakshi hurted Arjun and Arjun also got angry and went from there...hmmm...
Will read other parts soon...thanks for the pm😊



That's fine but do read and tell me about rest of the parts also. And yeah this arjun is quite funny 😆
So i hope you like it and thanks for this awesome feedback 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#60
nice update
happy to see how arjun removed every insecurity from sakshi's mind 😊
waiting for more arakshi stories from u

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