Arakshi ss- My one and only last part page 7 *completed*

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PrettyRapunzel

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Posted: 9 years ago

#21

What a beautiful update dear. Just love it. Every emotions of them describe very nicely. She a share her grief with him. Feeling truly bad for her. Plss update soon.

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@Arakshiya_58

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Posted: 9 years ago

#22

Dearrr... Realllyyy fantasssticcc update...!!!!👏👏 👏👏From starting tilll the end I was hooked to me completely... Wanted to know more and more...!!!!. Totally love this big blaster update...!!!❤️❤️ ❤️❤️starting from the clock Stoke 12... That was super awesome how you describe her feel with each passing hours...!!!! A great work...!! 👏 👏 Ooopss...!! She leid to her friends?!!! and morning part...!! Arakshi session... He wished her...!!!🥳 well I know not a big deal... But it happens only sometime so dance...!!! 😆... He was so much concerned while watching her like that sad and pale..!!... Without bangles and kajal that too saki... Trulyyy very sad...!! And then comes the team...!! Just love their love towards Saki.. And there wishes... But again while cake cutting and all she was in so much horrible state.. I felt like crying for her...!! 😭 But then finally He comes to rescue..!!Such a horrible past yaar...!!! That doggsss!!!! 😡 😡 but He made her open up in front of her... Console her.. Made her calm and cheer up her making her understand lots of thing required...!! The must her happiness for her family and friends...!!! He made her believe that he believes her... She isnt alone..!!!This part was totalllyyy superbbb dear..!! How you portrayed all was just perfect..!! 👏👏 ooppss... He kissed her and was finding excuses... But loved her reaction...!!! Saki back in mood... After all she try to be norml...!!! then comes riya...!! Ufff... I m having no problem with her only until she didn't come between arakshi and done anything bad..!! FB was good..!! And last part.. Gift session... Totally beautiful...!! His each word... Superbbb yaar 👏[=D<] they said bye to each other but I m in arakshi dreamland...!! Totally fantastic..!! Please con.soonnn...!!!love you dear!!! 🤗

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@Arakshiya_58

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Posted: 9 years ago

#23

Ufff!!! The longest comment I had ever given...!! hope you don't mind...!!!

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spatika

@spatika

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Posted: 9 years ago

#24

awesome update..
Arjun and sakshi conversation is nice..
the gift, wind chime is super idea...
can you PM me the next update..

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meera1803

@meera1803

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Posted: 9 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: lovesick23

Your comment seriously motivated me to write the next chapter sooner. I'm not sure if i will increase the number of chapters but i can definitely increase the length since I've already planned the sequence of events in mind. Also thanku so much for this constructive criticism! :)

THANK U SO MUCH. I'm really honoured. Also I'm sorry for replying late as my net connection was creating troubles. But pls do cont soon.

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meera1803

@meera1803

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Posted: 9 years ago

#26

Now some tiny bits about the 2nd part of the story.

It was a superb update, no doubt about it. And may be it is the best one if the story, taking the readers for a tremendous emotional roller coaster. Till now, to be very frank and am sorry if my lines hurt anyone, we have come across some stories where sakshi was made to hold back immense pain behind her glittering eyes but you have successfully promoted her to become an EPITOME OF LIFE AND COURAGE. We often find people brave enough to accept their life with all the best and worst of it but there r very few who challenge it back to get back what they truly deserve and just not sit back with what bits of crumbs life has showered on them.

There r some things which make ur story really really different and help u to make a specific niche as a writer, it's the words u use and obviously the way u use it. Its really commendable.

But what take u, as a writer to a different level is that u have complete control over all the threads of ur story and moreover u know very well when to pull each of them to make it more striking.

Just for example, introducing the tiny part of Riya's pov just when the readers r enjoying an arakshi filled episode and managing to digest sakshi's bitter past. Another one, at nearly the end of the story when arakshi were emotionally coming close with a confused Arjun and well aware sakshi about their respective emotions, sakshi held back and took just what she needed at the moment.

I agree that all these were perfectly spaced and needed in the story but these also increased ur credibility as a writer. More or less quite a perfect update altogether. U r the writer who literally commands the readers that hold on guys, this maybe the same dish but when served uniquely , u r bound to relish it that way only. He he he. Before I forget to mention, the windchimes took my heart away along with sakshi. Not becoz I'm in absolute love with them but for the fact that nothing could have been more appropriate that this as a gift to this ALONER sakshi. Great thinking on ur part.

Sorry , did I make my comment long enough to bore u, but silly me couldn't help it, and I had to make up for coming late too.

NOW CAN WE PLS PLS PLS GET THE NEXT PART EARLY??????

Edited by meera1803 - 9 years ago

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Loveena

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Posted: 9 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: shdiksha
Awesome part
Feeling really bad for sakshi
She has suffered so much in past...
But now no worry Arjun is here then why care...
Hope arjun confess soon his love to sakshi...
Beautiful update
Eating continue soon
And plz pm me...

Thanku so much 😳

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Loveena

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Posted: 9 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: angle1shanu
Most beautifull and loveliest update...
finally arjun realize that he loves sakshi..
and sakshi ka past..
horrible...
but hope arjun ka love uske pain ko heal kar de...
and ria madam plzzsz kuch ulta pulta mat karna
superb part...
Love it
and windchime vala idea awesome tha...

Haha thanku 😆

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Loveena

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Posted: 9 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: aditiarakshi
Awesome update
feeling bad for sakshi
she suffered alot
love the arjun handled sakshi
love arjun's gift
waiting for the next part
cont soon😊

Thankuu 😃

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Loveena

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Posted: 9 years ago

#30

Originally posted by: sisodia_shefali
sakshi suffered so much and that too on her birthday
seeing her in pain arjun couldn't hold himself back any more his worry his love for sakshi came out
and may be arjun's love can bring sakshi's happiness back in her life
arjun atleast know in his heart that he loves sakshi now lets see when is he going to tell her
Ria is not in love with arjun but she is attracted to him hope she doesn't come in between these two

Thanku so much 😳