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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: sameera08

pll update soon waitingg



soon I'll update this one
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will try to give day after tomorrow
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Part 41



Arjun is thinking how to say sorry to riya. Its not like that he never think abt riya's pain n secrifice but today he know it by a girl pov n it pinch his heart too.

Riya is trying sleep in her room .she think arav is with arjun but he is with anu bcoz he is angry on arjun.she is totally unaware what happen .suddenly someone put hand on her mouth n close her eyes with black cloth she try to protest but no gains.
He take her to roof n disappear she open her eyes n get shocked . infront of her i am sorry is written with candles n after that arjun is sitting on his knee holding his ears. Riya's eyes moist seeing this
She immidiately go to him n try to stand him up.

Ri - arjun uthiye

Ar - nahi pehle batao maaf kiya ya nahi

Ri - kaisi maafi arj mai aapse naaraj hi nhi .galti to maine ki thi.

Ar - nahi riya maine bhi ki thi tum par chilla kar tumhe ignore karke. Tumne maafi mang li to mujhe bhi mangna chahiye na.

Ri - ok maaf kiya ab uthiye.

Ar - to hug karke bolo maf kiya.

She move her hand in disbelief n smile then hug him.

Arj hold her hand n make her sit n he too sit beside her.both are sitting resting their back on wall.

Ri - arj..

He put his finger on her lips

Ar - shh. Riya aaj mujhe tumhare dil ka dard janna hai. Sabse tumhare bare mai suna par tumse janna chahta hu. Janta hu tum kisi se apna dukh share nahi karti .par mai tumhara har dard share karna chahta hu tumhe humesha khush dekhna chahta hu. kya tum mujhe is layak samajhti ho ki apna dukh mujhse baant sako.

Ri - pata hai arjun mai humesha sochti thi ki q mujhe itna dukh milta hai .or jab bhi kuch accha hone wala hota hai or bura ho jata hai. Mai kisi se apna pain share nahi karti thi. Par anjane mai hi jaane q apse maine apne ansu or dard bant liye. Or sach mai mujhe usse bahut sukun milta tha .aaj mai apni jindgi ka had dard aapse bantungi arjun .par aap mujhe sambhal lenge na arjun mujhe tutne to nahi denge na.

Arjun just hold her hand tightly to assure her.


Ri - aap baki to jante hi hai ki meri life mai kya hua. Par jab mera surrogacy operation hua or mai Kolkata gayi to baba ne mujhe character less kehkar mujhse sare rishte tod liye. Or mai Delhi chali gayi. Par sab kuch asan nahi tha. Meri body mai changes aa rahe the. Mujhe bahut takleef hoti thi. Or har pal ek dar ki kahi di ki nishani ko kuch ho na jaye bas baby in tak sahi salamt pahucha du, Par mujhe guide or support karne wala koi nahi tha. Mai nahi chahti thi mere work place mai koi mere baby ko lekar batein banaye ya sympathy dikhaye .to Maine Chandigarh jakar arav ko janam diya.

Arjun pata hai jab Arav paisa hua to use dekh kar aisa laga jaise mai puri ho gayi mera har dard mit gaya. Uski smile bahut pyari thi. Mujhe har dukh mai hasa hi deti thi

Ar - pyari q na ho uske papu par Jo gayi hai.

N both smile.

Ri - par jab Arav k birth certificate k liye pita ka naam pucha to mai kya batati mujhe to pata hi nahi
tha.mere dr jante the arav is surrogate child hai so unhone sambhal liya. Par ek ward boy ne mujhe badtamiji karne ki koshish ki qki use laga arav is illegamate child or mere boyfriend ne mujhe cheat kiya hai.he try to n she stop n cry

Arj also have tears N anger
but he calm her

Ri - par Dr waha time par aa gaye. Or mai bach gayi. Fir mai Delhi aayi or kuch month bad police training start ki. Par jab jab logon ko pata chalta mai single mother hu to koi tane deta koi gandi najar se dekhta. Kabhi kabhi to ghar rent par bhi nahi milta tha. Mai bahut tut jati thi arjun. Arjun q ye duniya kisi ko chain se jeene nahi deti. Q agar wo kisi ki madad nahi karte balki unke dard ko or bada dete hai.

q ek single mother k liye sab itna tough hota hai chahe wo unmarried, divorce ,ya window mother ho .q log use apne property samajhne lagte hai. Q arjun wo ek ma ko respect nahi karte jabki mandir mai rakhi murti ko ma man kar pujte hai.

Ar - yahi to humara samaj hai or dohri mansika hi iska sabse bada draw back .par hum sab kuch thik nahi kar sakte par khud ko aaspas k logon ko to thik kar hi sakte hai. Riya hum apne Arav ko bahut acchi seekh denge taki wo bada hokar khud bhi or dusron ko bhi woman's ki respect karna sikhaye.

Ri - ha arjun .ap sahi keh rahe hai.yadi parents marks grades k sath woman's n dusre humans ki respect karna sikaye to society mai rape , eveteasing , domestic violence jaise case hi na ho.

Ar - riya tumne ek bar kaha tha na jab tum pragnent thi to arav ne tumhe kabhi tang nahi kiya. I want to know us waqt tum kaisa feel karti thi.

ri smile - pata hai arjun jab mai 5 month pragnent thi tab arav ne thoda thoda move karne shuru kiya tha.
Ek din mujhe achanak chai peene ki iccha hu wo bhi chai wale ki.or pata hai jis chai wale ho mai euu look deti thi usi ki chai pene lagi . i was too surprised aisa q ho raha tha .maine kabhi apne life mai chai nahi pi or ab wo bhi unhyginic chai wale ki.
Par ab samajh aata hai q.

Riya made face n arjun smrik.

Ri - or pata hai 7 mon se aarav na morning mai jaldi uthkar apne movements start kar deta tha or mujhe bhi jaldi utha deta tha.

N she pout

Ri - pura aap par gaya hai.

Ar - hmm ye to hai. He said smilingly.

Or isi tarah batien karte karte riya uske shoulder par so jati hai .arjun uske hairs ears k piche karta hai.

Arj mv tumne bahut kuch saha hai riya . tumne na apna teenage jiya na hi apni life .maine socha tha ki aaj tumhe apne dil ki bat bata dunaga.par ab lagta hai tum ek i love you se bhi or jyada deserve karti ho. I promise you riya tumhe wo sab milga jo ek ladki ki chahat hoti hai.
Tum bhi apni jindgi utni hi free hokar jiyogi jitni tumne kabhi sochi hogi.

N he too put his head on her head n sleep.now both are sleeping in each other arms in sitting position.

Morning

Anu is searching for ariya n rajat is behind her to monify her

Raj - anu plz yar kabse sorry bol raha hu. Rat ko bhi tumne room mai nhi aane diya .balcony mai soya kitne macchar kate pata hai. Ab to maaf kar do yar.dekho chutki ne bhi kar diya.

Anu - dekhiye rajat abhi hum mood mai nahi hai .hum bhai or riyudi ko dhund rahe hai dono k phone unke room mai hai par wo dono nahi

Raj - kya chutki or arju nahi hai.kaha gaye. Chat par dekha

Anu - wahi ja rahe hai ap rasta chodenge

N she went on roof.

Raj - plz yar anu suno na

N he follow her

Anu put her hand on his mouth.n he signal kya hua by eyes n she guesture him to look at his side by eyes.

Both look their n find ariya is sleeping holding each other hand n ri's head on his shoulder n his head on her head .there is peace on both face n smile on lips.

Anuraj smile tearily looking at both of them n they find dry candles on floor making I am sorry. They smile n left

Anu - dekha humare bhai ne kitne acche se mafi mangi or ek aap hai huh.

Raj - mai to or acche se mang Sakta hu .

N he catch her n kiss her.

Raj - dekha tumhare bhai se bhi romantic tha na.bolo ab maaf kiya ya nahi.

Anu blush n look away

Anu - hmm.kar diya .par isiliye q ki aaj hum bahut khush hai.

Raj - or wo meri wajah se na n he smrik

Anu -ji nahi hum to bhai or riyu di ki wajah se khush hai.

He get serious

Raj - ha anu meri chutki ne itni kam umar mai bahut kuch face kiya hai ab wo bahut khushi deserve karti hai .Jo arjun hi use de sakta hai.

Anu - mujhe pata hai mujhe kya karna hai.

Rajat look confuse n she
Smile.

TBC..


Precap

Arjun n his dad confortation. Ariyaarav cute family scene.

Edited by sur1911 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice update di loved it
Riya has suffered so much
Loved Arjuns sweet apology 😊 😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
superb
love it
thnx for pm
cont soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Waooo. ...Kya baat he arjun ne romantic tarikhe se sorry bola..

Riya apna dard arjun se bata. .

Sach me riya ne Choti si umar me bhot khuch saha he...

Sirf I love you bol ne se kaam nahi chalega acp saheb. .

Bhot khuch karna hoga riya ke liye...

Samje ya samjavu. ..

😆 ... 👏 ... 😊
Edited by rvss - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
I loved this mini😊
Sorry will revert to detailed comment later after my exams. But I just wanted to let you know that I have read it and loved it.

Well written👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
Superb update!!
Luvd d way arjun said sorry!!!
Sad for ri...she has suffered so much!!
Bt dat has made her a strong woman...she is today!!
she deserved d best!!
Wow...arjun luvs ri!!!
Waiting for his confession... ..
N d answer from ri!!
Continue soon
Thnx for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice update
So arjun ne riya se mafi mango or itne sweet way me
Ariya convo are so emotional
Arj loves ri
Anu ne bhi raj ko maff kar diya
Ab anu kya karegi
Waiting for next part
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
wow
awesome n superb updated
loved it
hmm loved arjun style to say sorry
plz cont soon
thnx 4 pm

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