Ariya SS ~Thousand Years~ updated on pg 25 - Page 9

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part-4
Awesome update...
Just loved it...
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part 5

It was time of evening , the sphere b/w day &

night & the people working hard from mrng are

finally free to go back to their respective homes ,

to their families or the people living alone to get

home & enjoy their own fun moments...


So was our NIA team after working so hard on

keeping the city safe they were finally free to get

their own time to chillax


Choree & ariya were in Arjun's XUV going to

ariya's house...


At first there was an awkward silence in the XUV ,

which arjun thought to break


Arjun : guys office mein toh itna bak -bak kr rhe

the aur jab ab bak-bak krne ka time hai toh itni

shanti kaise ??


Riya : bak-bak se aapka mtlb kya hai hum toh

kaam kr rhe the , itna sara kaam jo aapne hi toh

diya tha ( she stuck out her tongue at arjun )


Arjun : riyu mujhe aisa kyu lg rha hai ki tumhe

jaldi hi leave deni pregi wrna meri halat kharab

ho jayegi


Riya : haaw , arjun ...aap...


Choree : bilkul sahi keh rhe hai, jiju


Arjun : guys tum mujhe arjun hi bulau , jiju sunkr

aisa feel ho rha hai pta nhi mein tum logo se

kitna bara hu , voh buzurgo wali feeling aa rhi hai


Choree : (started giggling ) aap toh bilkul bhi

khadoos aur akdu nhi hai


Arjun : guys office mein composure banaye rkhna

prta hai wrna mere murder hone k chances

zyada hai


Choree : voh kaise ?


Arjun : dekho agar itne friendly office mein hu aur

ladkiya mujhse flirt krne lgi toh tumhari yeh friend

toh meri jaan hi le legi


Choree : look at riya's face & started laughing

hard & riya pouted cutely at them & soon the

whole XUV was filled with cont chatter & whole

hearted laughter's and with such a happy

moment ariya & choree reach ariya's house & as

soon as they reached Riya run towards the

house like a kid who come back from school..


Arjun : pta hai tumhari dost ne mujhse meri ma

cheen li ab toh yeh feeling aati hai ki mein iss

ghar ka jamayi hu aur voh beti


Choree gave sympathic looks to arjun & entered

the house to find a overly excited & chirpy riya

moving around & mrs Rawte with a juice glass

making riya drink the juice


Arjun : mujhse toh puchenge bhi nhi ek kaam kro

tum dono bhi khud hi le lena wrna toh humein

kuch nhi milega


Mrs rawte : arjun tu kya bol rha hai un dono ko


Arjun : aai mein toh bas yeh bta rha tha ki hum

khatirdari kitne acche se krte hai smiling

innocently


Aai looked at arjun suspiciously then ignored him

& greeted choree & ask servant to bring drinks

for them... while they all were sitting there in

living room chatting happily & now choree were

also free & close with Arjun they really liked

arjun's personality & it was like they were Arjun's

friends not Riya's they were telling Arjun about

Riya's college life golmals & riya was glaring at

them...


Choree : arjun bacha yrr wrna teri yeh biwi

humara murder kr degi


Arjun : meri biwi na tum dono ki bhi dost hai , toh

tum dono ko bachane gya toh voh mera murder

kr degii


Riya : aaiii dekho na yeh pareshan kr rhe

hai...


Aai : kyu pareshan kr rhe ho meri bacchi ko kuch

kaam nhi kya tum logo k paas...


And this three make a cute puppy dog face


Arjun : aayi mein soch rha tha bahr dinner pr

chale , bohot deeno baad as a whole family

bohot maze krenge ...

Choree felt so happy thinking arjun consider them as a family

Aai : pr beta inn dono ko ghar ka khana khilana

tha mujhe toh


Choree : aunty ji aap chinta mat kro hum na

bohot besharam hai hum na har roz tapak

jayenge aapk hi ghar khana khane


Aai : beta tum log bhi mujhe inn dono ki tarah aai

ya ma bula skte ho aur mujhe toh khushi hi hogi

agar tum yaha aaoge


Choree : ji aai


After sometime all of them left for aai's fav

restaurant

In the restaurant , they entered as a happy family

gaining all the eyes on them as If they were

some celebrities .


Arjun went to the counter & ask for a table for 5 &

a lil bit away from crowed too & within a sec got

the table he wanted well how can the manager

say no to the owner's son they all took their

seats & after sometime placed their orders still

laughing & joking around & were flirting with both

the ladies making them laugh , giggle & glare at

them & the boys had formed a gang against

them...


Totally unaware of another 5 pairs of eyes staring

at them from far as soon as they entered the

hotel they were noticed by the Rathod family &

their eyes almost budge out of their socket , riya was wearing a beautiful white knee length sleeveless frock with a silver pendent while arjun was wearing white shirt & dark blue jeans looking killer as always & were looking like the perfect couple , Mrs Rawte was wearing a beautiful white Saree & chotu was wearing black shirt & blue jeans while shree was wearing faded blue jeans black shirt with white half jacket & without noticing anyone they directly went towards their table & sat there

Sam to aisha : kitni khush lg rhi hai na voh...


Aisha : ha , arjun sach mein bohot pyaar krta hai

arjun usse aur uski har demand puri krte hai..


Buasa made a face at that mv ( jaha dekho in

ladko ne seer par chara rakha hai iss chori ne

aur iss arjun ne toh kuch zyada hi)


Nikhil : lgta hai kafi modern khayalat ki hai arjun

ki mom jo yeh dresses mind nhi krti


Netra ( buasa's daughter ) : ha , kafi freedom de

rkhi hai riya ko aur kafi close bhi lag rhe hai


Buasa : pr itni azadi choriyo ko sahi nhi sar pr

chada rkha hai inhone toh bas


Samsha glared hard at buasa shutting her up

completely while Nikhil was glaring towards

ariya's table...


Buasa : aur inlogo ko itni asani se itna acchi

jagah seat kaise mil gyi ??


Aisha : mrs rawte owner hai yaha ki so I guess


Sam : acchi baat hai


Aisha : and you know sam rii is really sweet , the

way she was talking to choree like a kid & after

meeting her they both are totally ignoring us..


Sam : the three of them are like that only you

know we used to call them three muskeeters


Aisha : looks like that only ...


At ariya's table


Chotu was totally engrossed on eating dishes

while others were shooking there head looking at

him

Shree : bhai aur kitna thuse ga bas kr


Aai : shree mere bte ko khane do aise mat bolo


Riya : mujhe ice cream chahiye


Arjun :knsi wali


Riya : hmm , chocolate & blue-berry & butter

scotch & tuti-fruti


Arjun : as you whish mam & u guys ??


Aai : I want badam pista kulfi


Chotu : me too


Shree : vanilla


Arjun : doneee


He told the waiter to bring the ice - creams , after

sometime waiter come with their oders & chotu

just jump on his ice -cream , shree shooked his

head on him & started having his ice-cream while

aai laugh at their reactions & riya grabed all her

ice-creams & started having one spoon of each

ice-cream while smudging the rest of ice cream

around her face, making others laugh


While her this antics were giving shock to the

Rathod family...


Nikhil : whats wrong with riya ????????


Sam : ya , she is a child & crazy about ice-cream

( ab usse kya pta yeh pregnancy carvings hai )


Nikhil : oh


Aisha : and look choree also seems close to


Arjun sir must be a really nice guy to get on their

good books


Netra : ya , I'm over are you guys ?? can we go

back home ?


Nikhil : ya , me too


Samsha : ya let's go , buasa ??


Buasa : ha chalo...


Sam paid for the dinner & they banged with ariya

near the exit of the resturant


Netra : hi , ri congrats on marriage got such a

handsome hunk as husband...


Ri : same to u sweetheart , wish you a happy

married life


Netra : ur hubby business man ??


Ri : naah cop


Netra : oh...


There convo was disturbed by an aunty


Aunty to riya : beta , aap kitne pretty ho.. aap koi

model ho kya ?


Riya : nhi aunty ji...

Aunty : fir miss india ??


Riya : umm


Aunty : koi actress honge ya dancer ya singer ??


Arjun was laughing behind riya


Riya : nhi aunty ji mein police officer hu


Aunty : itni khubsurat , kya baat hai beta aur yeh

aapk sath kn hai ?? aapk bf ??


Riya : yeh mere pati hai aunty


Aunty to arjun : beta bohot khubsurat biwi mili hai

tumhe , bohot pyaare lgte ho tum dono sath mein

, humesha aise hi khush raho


Ariya just smiled at her


Buasa to aunty : ji meri beti model hai ??


Aunty then noticed netra


Aunty : aap bhi bohot pyaari hai beta saying so

she left from there...


Shree : yrr chotu mujhe kuch jalne ki smell aa rhi

hai


Chotu : yrr mujhe bhi ( buasa's was so angry

when aunty was praising riya & Nikhil was

burning when she said ariya looks perfect

together )


Arjun just laughed at their antics & then said guys

chale raat ho rhi hai thak gye hoge tum sab


Riya : ma kaha hai


Aai coming from behind : yahi pr hu , chalo ghar

chalte hai


And they all left from there


Netra : kitni perfect family hai na inki


Buasa : drama


Nikhil : kuch khas nhi hai


Samsha just shook their head at them & exited

the restaurant with the other three following

them...

After reaching rawte mansion , aai was very tired & she directly retired to her room leaving this four alone...

Riya : guys tumse ek zaruri baat krni thi...


Choree : ha ri bol...


Riya : actually & she told them everything...


Chotu : haila , mtlb Nikhil sir the uss sab k

peeche


Shree : mera man toh kr rha hai ki unhe itne

shocks du ki unhe unki nani yaad aa jaye


Arjun : vahi toh krna hai


Choree & arjun smiled mischeviously


Riya : but abhi humein proofs chahiye to solve

this case


Choree : and we all are working undercover


Arjun : top secret mission , chotu activate ur

informers & get all detail about Nikhil & Shree

check his call records & all...


Choree : will be done


Riya : if Nikhil is behind this all ,then he is inviting

his death


Arjun : ya , he can't get away with all this


Choree : and now when we all are together not at

all


Riya : so mission


Choree : Nikhil ki band bajana begins


Arjun just laugh at their craziness , they talked &

laughed for some more times & then choree left

with determination of standing with their frnd till

the end this time...


Precap : cases & cases

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Posted: 9 years ago
#83
Superb
Choree and Arjun are too cute
Continue soon
Than for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
#84
awesome update.
continue soon.
thanks for PM.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#85
👏 loving Bond between riya-Mrs.Rawte-Choree 👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
#86
fantastic update
⭐️⭐️⭐️
choree blended with arjun and his mother also
ye buasa ko dekhkar puraani hindi serials ki vamps yaad aati hai
lol us aunty ko riya model lagi
hmm waise yeh pehli baar toh nahi hai
ofcourse humari ariya ki jodi perfect hai❤️
cont soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#87
Very nice update
Loved it so much
Ariya chores moment so cute n nice
Arjun comment on ri n his ma's relation was funny
Arjun ghar ka damad n ri beti
Wow ri ne arjun ki ma ko side kar liya to arjun ne uske bffs ko
All go for family dinner n cute family moments
Sam n busa family also come
Wth is sam doing with buasa n family when he don't like them
Aisha told them what she notice in office abt ariya
I m little confuse netra is bad or good
I mean she meet riya n praise her n her family I think its in good way is it right or wrong plz clear
Update next soon
Thanks for updating it
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Posted: 9 years ago
#88
nice update
ariya are so happy with each other
choree are now become arjun friend
choree ariya plan against nikhil
waiting for next update

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Posted: 9 years ago
#89
part 1



oh sweetie my dear
love it

you showed every emotion very well

don't want to bring the bad past
just remember the good memories

love riya and arjun's aai bond

arjun is so I sweet and supportive


thanks for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
#90
part 3



oh GOD samjun past is so emotional
Sam thought arjun wants revenge
poor ariya and sam
arrgh that nikhil
hate him

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