Ariya ss 'MITWA-Ishq Pe Zor Nahi' PT 21 PG 88 11/01/19 - Page 4

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Posted: 9 years ago
#31
it was a nice story
please continue
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Posted: 9 years ago
#32
awesome update..
continue soon..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#33
wow sissy
its hawt update
hut me romance 😳😳
me blushing blushing😳😳😳
arjun ko akela chodke chali gayi wo😲😲
lol the girl waiting 4 him
that was superb 👏👏👏
jaldi se next update dena sissy
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Posted: 9 years ago
#34
interesting. Continue. thanks for pm.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#35
Awsome update..
Love it..
Ariya romance starting me hi..
Let's see aage kya hota he..
Plz continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#36
Nice n amazing
Love it
Edited by shreyashi19mld - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#37
Wow dear...
It's awesome and mind blowing start...
Just loved it...
So baarish start...
Ariya goes in hut...
Both were lost in each other...
Loved ariya moment...
It was so hot and passionate...
Me blushing...
So ariya become one..
Now arjun regret...
Riya gone...
Yeh last main cliffhanger??
Riya sitting near his suv...
Continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Ariya ss "MITWA-Ishq Pe Zor Nahi"

PART 2

Ese hi wo SUV ke paas pahuch jata he but there is something which left him shocked to his utter surprise or shock he saw unexpected thing

Wo ladki waha uski SUV ke paas apne luggage par bethi hui he

Arjun us ladki ko waha dekh kar shocked hota he dhire dhire uske expression change hote

Pehle shocked fir shocked se happy fir happy se relief fir relief se anger

Arjun : how dare u tum ese kese ja sakti ho tumne ek bar bhi nahi socha when I'll up to what was my stat haan ab ese bethi mat raho jawab do"he said angrily"

Obviously gussa to aaega na uske dil me kya kya khayal aa rahe the or ye madam yaha bethi he aram se

Arjun use or kuch kehne wala hota he but one look at her face n he stops he understand ki usne jo kiya he uske baat use gussa hone ka koi haq nahi he

Arjun : wo.. me I am.."said while stammering"

But the girl intruppt him

Girl : umm wo kya aap mujhe is address (she gave him some chit jisme address likha he) par chod denge yaha se koi vehical nahi milega mujhe or mera aaj 11am tak collage pahuchna bohot jaruri he warna meri seat chali jaegi"she said slowly avoiding any eye contact with him"

Arjun just nod his head on this

Dono me kuch baat nahi hoti arjun thought that first he should mend the SUV then he should talk to her apology to her

Arjun gaadi thik karta he but uski nazar to us ladki par hi he n wo ladki ek bar bhi ab tak arjun se nazare nahi milai sirf chup chap usi jagah bethi he jaha rjun ne use dekha tha on her luggage

SUV thik hoti he

Arjun : ummm wo gaadi thik ho gayi he

The girl just nod her head n starts to drag her luggage

Arjun immediately uske paas aata he or uske haath se luggage le leta he

Their hands get touched while this, wo ladki immediately apna haath hata leti he

Arjun ko ye dekh bohot dard hota he wo bhi nahi janta ki kyu us ladki ke withdrawl se use pain ho raha he

He was thinging kal tak wo ladki bina hesitate ke uske paas thi uspar vishwas kar rahi thi

Use kal ki raat fir yaad aati he kese wo ladki goons ke dar se arjun ko hug ki thi kese uske saath ek hut me raat bitane ko ready ho gayi thi or aaj sirf unki fingers touch hui or wo ladki usse dur chali gayi

Arjun ko samjh nahi aata ki wo ye sab kyu soch raha he us ladki ke is behavior se use itni taklif kyu ho rahi he ?

Arjun shredding those thought aside n place her luggage on back seat

They both settled on front seats n SUV starts

Arjun usse baat karna chahta he usse mafi mangna chahta he but kese shuruwat karni he use samjh nahi aata

Arjun : ummm wo me.. mujhe I"he starts to talk unsurely"

But she again intrupt himn says

Girl : ummm aapko maafi mangne ki jarurat nahi he Mr. Rawte"she slowly starts to say"

Arjun ek dam se uski taraf dekhta he

Arjun : nahi wo mujh..

Girl : jo kuch hua usme sirf aapki galti nahi thi I. iii.. I waasss... at fault too"she said slowly n stammeringly"

Arjun sirf ek tak use dekh raha he or wo ladki apni lap me dekh rahi he


Girl : please apne aap ko dosh mat dijiye jo bhi hua uu.. usssee.. bhul jaiye jo hua mosam ke karan hua me samjhti hu"n now she look towards him into his eyes n says"n don't worry kal raat ko lekar me aapko kabhi blame nahi karungi isliye aap bhi khudko kasurwar mat maniye

Saying this wo ladki fir apni aankhe zuka leti he or arjun sirf use dekhta rehta he

Both are silent in the SUV

Tabhi us ladki ka phone ring karta he

Girl : hello

Other side : "..."

Girl : maa me thik hu

Other side : "..."

Girl : maa maa ab bas bhi karo me koi choti bachi nahi hu plzz I am 19 years old now yaha padhne aayi hu padhai ke alawa or kya karungi

Other side : "..."

Girl : uff maa me akeli kaha hu bohot se log padhne ke liye bahar jaate he okie me apna khayal rakhungi okie

Other side : "..."

Girl : aapko kya lagta he me yaha ladko ke saath ghumungi"she said little angrily"me jan bhuj kar esa koi kaam nahi karungi jisse aapka ya papa ka sar nicha ho"she said this with distance look"

Arjun ye sab sun raha he but last line sunke his grip get tight on steering wheel

Ek dam se us ladki ki nazar arjun par padhti he she understands ki kya ho raha he

Girl : maa ab me rakhti hu bye"with this she cut the call"

SUV me fir silence ho jata he

Arjun : I am very so..

Girl : aap plzzz bar bar maafi nahi mangiye mene kaha na aapse jo hua usme aapka koi kasur nahi

Arjun try to speak but

Girl : plzzz don't speak mujhe is bare me koi baat nahi karni he plzzz"she said helplessly"

Ab arjun kuch nahi kehta

Kuch der baad they reach at the address where the girl want to go

She hurrily moved out off SUV n takes her luggage

Girl : thank u for the lift

But isse pehle arjun kuch kahe she immediatle moved towards her apartment

Arjun kuch der uske ghar ke waha khada rehta he n fir wo bhi apne ghar ke or chal deta he but all his thoughts starts and ends with that girl jisne use thik tarah apology bhi nahi karne diya thik tarah seriously usne ek sorry bhi nahi kehne diya arjun ko

Usi ladki ki soch me arjun ghar pahuch jata he

Its not at all a house its very big and lavish banglow

Arjun enter inside or ek nokar aa jata he

Arjun ask him : kaka Niti

Hariram kaka : sab bitiya apne room me so rahi he

Arjun : abhi tak"with confusion"

N starts to move towards niti's room but kaka says something n he stops

Kaka : saab wo memsab ghar par nahi he

Arjun : hmmm"calmly"

Kaka : wo kal sham ko gayi thi bahar

Arjun : aap niti ka breakfast uske kamre me hi bhijwa dena

Kaka : ji saab

Or arjun waha se apne room me chala jata he, he went to take bath jese hi uske body par pani ki bunde girti he use us ladki ka pehla touch yaad aata he

Wo naha ke aata he n starts to read an old case file but aaj uska dhyan kisi or chiz par nahi sirf us ladki par he esa aaj tak kabhi nahi hua but aaj wo chah kar bhi use bhul nahi pa raha uske saath bitaye wo pal bar bar uski aankho ke samne aa rahe he or upar se us ladki ne arjun ko galat nahi theheraya uski jagah koi or hoti to kuch bhi kar sakti thi but she is different, sabse alag arjun ke face par smile aati he uske bare me sochte hue but agle hi pal wo smile dard me badal jati he, he remember her convo. With her mum she is just 19 n what he had done with her, uski family unse kese kahegi wo ye sab

Isi soch me wo room se bahar aata he n starts to left the house

Arjun to kaka : kaka niti

Kaka : saab bitiya to chali gayi kuch der pehle hi

Arjun nod his n left

Arjun apni SUV me apne hi khayalo me khoya hua ja raha he aimlessly he don't know ki wo kaha ja raha he

Apni hi soch me duba sa or fir ek dam se SUV rukti he...



so here is the update hope pasand aaye do tell me howz it m waiting for ur reviews

love u all

ramya😊

Edited by arsh4heaven - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#39
nice update who is niti and memsaab
update soon
Edited by pink1 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#40
Wow awsm update i lovd it.
Ye niti or mem saab k0n hain?

Thanx 4 the p.m
Plz conti s0onish

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