RAISHA ARIYA SS - AB KE BARAS. part 6 on pg 23 21/9 - Page 4

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Part 2



That evening

Lucknow railway station

Raksha - Aisha apna khayal rakhna or mumbai pahuch kar phone karna.

Ai - ji bhabhi ma . pakka

Ri - offo mumma disa koi bacchi hai kya .she is senior insp or apne dekha nahi kaise gande or danger logon ko marti hai

Adi - tumhari disa kitni bhi badi ya bahadur police officer q na ho humare liye to bacchi hi rahegi na.

N he creses her hairs lovingly. Aisha hug him n her bhabhi ma .

Ai - I'll miss you both.

Rak - hum bhi .par kya kare inka transfer hi nahi hua. Or haa kam k chakkar mai khane pine ka dhayan rakhna mat bhulna.

Ri - haa jaise mujhe roj wo ewww milk pilate ho khud bhi pina sys.

Ai - samajh gayi meri ma.ab niklu train ne signal bhi de diya hai

N she hug all of them n sit in her compartment.

Adi n raksha has tears in their eyes.

Ri - ohh mumma papa plz don't cry. Or jaldi se apna transfer karwa kar aap bhi Mumbai aa jaiye .

Ra - riya no shaitani or din mai 4 bar mujhe call karna .Aisha ki to mujhe chinta hai par tumhara to dar hai pata nahi kab kya kar do.

Ri - ma aap humesha mujhe jhalli pagal hi q samajhti ho

Rakdi - qki tum ho.

Ri - ma papa ..n she pout

Rakdi - ohh mera baccha n they hug her

Ri - OK bye .aap log nikaliye meri bhi train nikalne wali hai.bye


Adi - par tumhari friends.

Ri - WO log kal hi chale gaye. Ohh ye good luck to disa ko dena hi bhul gayi .unki train bas start hone hi wali hai aap log jaldi unhe de do.

They agree n move toward Aisha coach.

Risha 's train are on side by side connected platform

After their departure ri's goa train start first but she didn't board on that she sit in Aisha's train but in different coach far away from hers .

Ri MV finally Mumbai I am coming .yes yes I have done it. Hope sab waisa hi ho jaisa maine socha tha. Sorry disa mai Mumbai hi aa rahi hu par aapko nahi bataya .Jo mujhe karna hai its most important.

Scene shift

Mumbai etf

sam - team time to go now . kal on the right time.

All - good bye sir

All left expect samjun

Ar - chale bro

Sam - hmm.chalo.

Both sit in their car .arj is driving n SAM is on copessenger seat

Sam - Chote thodi dheere gadi chalao hume ghar hi Jana hai or traffic bhi bahut hai.

Ar - bro plz na itni bhi speed nahi hai.pehle to aap

Sam face fall and arjun understand his mistake

Ar - sorry bro wo mai

N he slow the speed of car

Ar - waise bro wo khanna murder case k main suspect ko hume pakad Lena chahiye.

Sam - no Chote humare pas abhi proper evidence nahi hai .wo bahut influencel person hai .asani se chut jayega.

N they talk about cases

Arj MV I know bhai apka mood kaise divert karna hai.but sorry Maine anjane mai hi apka dil dukha diya.


They reach home n open door n retired to their respective rooms.

They take dinner and after some talk go to their room.

Scene train

Aisha is starring the darkness outside the train. She is looking outside like she is seeing some thing very Interesting she is sigh .darkness is now very interesting thing in her life bcoz her light is snatched from her long ago

Ai MV pehli bar Bhaiji or bhabhi ma se dur ja rahi hu thoda dukh to hai par itna sukun q hai man mai. Jaise Mumbai ajnabi nahi mera apna hai.koi mera bhi hai waha. She sigh
Tu bhi na Aisha tera ab kuch bhi nahi bacha sab wo tufaan uda kar le gaya .

Sameer is standing near window n starring outside

Sam MV kitni shanti hai aaj k mausam mai.pata nahi ye man ko sukun pahuchane wali shanti hai ya tufan se pehle wali. Ye mera man itna baichain q hai achanak. Jo neend roj in ankho se ankh michioli khelti thi aj wo bhi dur dur tak nahi hai. Kya hone wala hai.

riya in train
She is Laying on her berth. Holding a pic
Ri MV - bas aaj ki rat or kal ki subah ek nayi ummed le kar ayegi. Barson baad hum aamne saamne honge. Be ready Mr rathod riya aa rahi hai aapke shaher apke ghar .Jo dhaga aap ne tod diya tha wo dhaga jodne mai aa rahi hau.

N she put photo in her purse n close her eyes .

Arjun is sitting on bed holding one photo.

Arj - to akhir aap aa hi rahi hai waha jaha aapki sahi jagah hai. Bas ab intzar hai to kal ki subah ka .
Hope is bar koi gadbad na ho. Is bar mai wo dhaga nahi tutne dunga. Kitne sal ho gaye par aaj bhi utna hi besabar intzar hai. Ye intzar mai khatam kar ke rahunga abke baras.

Four lives four person are waiting for tomorrow morning. Two are egar , excited n upto something two don't know what they are feeling n why.

Two are sleeping peacefully n watching beautiful dreams. N other two are restless .sleep are far away from their eyes.

TBC..

Precap - new morning. But what will happen.

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