RAISHA ARIYA SS - AB KE BARAS. part 6 on pg 23 21/9 - Page 3

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice concept n interesting character sketch
Update soon
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#22
Interesting cs!!!
Plz add ariya too along wid raisha!!!
Plz plz plz...
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Hi
Ariya lovers don't worry this story also consists ariya plz wait for 2-3 parts n you will come to know about their roles in this .

N thanku you all lovely people for liking it


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I will update first part today.
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Intresting cs..
Plz continue soon
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Part 1



Etf office

shree Chotu Lisa sakshi are sitting around table in their conference hall

Sak - waise guys ek baat puchu tumse

Sh - ha sakshi pucho na

Sak - ye sameer itna khadus hi hai ya aaj kal kuch khas occasions chal raha hai.

Ch - do sal se unke sath kam kar rahe hai agar tum Ise occasion keh rahi ho to ha unke khadus hone ka occasions hum do sal se dekh rahe hai.

All laugh at this but

Li - kuch bhi bolo lagte bade smart or dashing hai.

Sh - don't mind haan tum dono new ho isiliye suggesting de raha hu senior hone k naate. Waise to rathore sir bahut acche hai perfect gentleman par kam mai strict or rules regulation k bahut pakke

Sak - aisa kya

Ch - hmm .or ek baat unse flirt karne ki ya unki taraf aisi najron se dekhne ki sochna bhi mat warns tum logon ka bhi wahi haal hoga Jo inspector lata ka hua tha

Sakli - aisa kya hua

sh - lata rathore sir ko pasand karti thi or aye din unhe impress karne ki koshish karti thi .rathore sir ne pehne sharafat se samjhaya nhi mani to pata hai kya hua

Sakli - kya hua. Curiously

Ch - uska transfer . wo bhi pata hai kaha mahila jail mai. Bechari etf se direct jail wo bhi waha Java sirf females hi hai.

Sh - bechari rathore sir k chakkar mai koi or Milne ka chance bhi gaya. Ab samjhi tum dono.

Li - thanks for story but mai sir k appreance ko praise kar rahi thi it doesn't mean in that way. By the way I already have a boyfriend

All - kya

Li - haa. Q nahi ho sakta
Sak - naa re aise hai.or guys mai bhi kisi or ko like karti hu.or wo bhi isi office mai.

Chores curiously n happily - kaun hai wo sakshi.

Sak blush - wahi hottie samjhe ya samjhau

Choree face fall

Sak - kya hua

Sh - k ka kuch nahi bas yahi ki tu kue se bachi par khai mai jaa giri. Waha bhi no entry ka board hai. Khadus pan mai rathore sir ka bhai hai .or upar se akdu or gusse wala bhi hai.dono ka surname bhi same hai.

( no one in etf knows that samjun are siblings)

Sak - par mai har nahi manne wali. Lisa chalo coffee bana kar late hai

They left

Ch - shree apna kuch nhi ho sakta pehle rathore sir or ab ye arjun pura attention le jata hai ladkiyon ka.

Sh - dhere bol bhai sun lenge or sir bol senior hai

Ch - ha par mujhse to umar mai Chota hi hai.tere barabar hai tu sir bol

Sh - tu bhi na Chotu senior age se nahi rank se bante hai.

Ch - hmm.

Both sigh sadly

At rathore's cabin

Sam - ye kya hai arjun

Ar - relex bro its leave letter mujhe kal se 15 days ki leave chahiye or kya

Sam- arjun ye office hai

Ar - offo bro but its your cabin na.

Sam - ok.par leave q

Ar - wo kya hai na mujhe kuch kaam hai

Sam raised his eyebrow

Sam - kam kaisa kam .i want to know

Ar - wo kya hai na bro wo mera dost hai na vicky use na force join karni hai or wo shooting or marital art seekhna chahta hai mujhse

Sam - par chote wo to business line mai hai ab ye force. Tu mujhse kuch chupa to nahi raha .is bar koi advantue trip to fir se plan nhi ki yad hai na last time tu jungle mai gaya tha wo bhi akele or tujhpar sher ne humla kiya tha

Ar - haa or maine us sher ko bhi accha maja chakhaya tha

Sam - or khud bhi ghayal hua tha dekh chote

Ar - relex bro i swear of you is bar no advanture trip .

Sam - ok .thik hai .i will sanction. Par rat mai tu mujhe time par ghar chahiye.

Ar - done bro. To mai jaaun.

Sam nods n arj happily left his cabin

Ar mv sorry bro apse jhut bolkar accha to nahi lag raha but its important . aapko sach nahi bata sakta par believe me aisa kuch nahi karunga jisse apko hurt ho. Love you bro.

Scene shift

Lucknow

One small but beautiful n pleasent house

One girl is dancing in her room. Another girl come n turn off music system

1 girl - disa ye kya apne mera dance q rok diya

2 girl - miss riya shrivastav bahut practice ho gayi ab ye lo jaldi se dudh piyo or ye biscuits bhi

Ri - miss aisha shrivastav ab hum bacche nahi jo hume aap ye dudh biscuit khilati hai

Aisha face fall

Ri - agar kuch khilana pilana hi hai to rum wiski with chakhna laya karo
She try to recover her mood

Ai - abhi batati hu tujhe apni bua se rum wiski with chakhna mang rahi hai .ruk tu

Ri.start running n aisha chasing her

Ri - ohh disa nam ki bua ho aap mujhse sirf 6 sal badi ho samjhi ki samjhau. She stop at this dailouge

Ai - pakad liya ab bata kya saza du tujhe

Ri - offo disa wo din kabhi nahi ayega jab disa apni kali ko saja de.

( aisha call her kali by love)

Ai smile

Ai - par tum apna dhyan rakhna kab sikhogi

Ri - offo disa aap hai na mera dhyan rakhne k liye

Ai - accha bahut batien banane lagi hai .chal pehle ye finish kar or mujhe bat

Ri while eating n drinking - kya
Batau disa

Ai - yahi ki tu mere sath mumbai q nahi chal rahi. Tera bhi to waha kisi dance class mai as dance teacher selection hua hai.

Ri - wo kya hai na disa mujhe 20 days bad join karna hai to mai 15- 16 din bad aungi

Ai - or kal tune bhaiya bhabhi se jo 15 din ki permission li .uska kya?

Ri - ohh wo.wo to meri dost sanju hai na uski shadi hai to hum sab wahi attend karne ja rahe hai sath mai its destination wadding at goa.

Ai - par 15 din

Ri - offo disa fir kab milenge hum pata nahi so thoda time sath spent kar le uski shadi k pehle. To apki investigation puri hui senior insp aisha

Ai - ji madam. Nautanki kahi ki

Ri - disa ..

Ai - apna khayal rakhna .mai aaj sham mai niklungi.

Ri- mai bhi aaj hi sham mai.or mai apna khayal bhi rakhungi.

Ri with tears

Ri - I'll miss you disa

Ai - me too Kali.

Both hug n Aisha left

Ri - sorry disa apki Kali ne aaj apse pehli bar jhoot bola hai.par kya karu sach apko bata nahi sakti or ye karna bahut jaruri hai. Hope jab apko pata chalega aap mujhe maaf kar dungi. I love you disa.


Ariya happily nervous - ab bas kal ka intjar hai

TBC...


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Posted: 9 years ago
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OK guys I change title from raisha ss to raisha ariya ss
Now you believe na its ariya also

Thanks
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Posted: 9 years ago
#28
Awesome updated
Loved it
Love bonding of Aisha n riya
N also of samjun
Plz cont soon
Thnx 4 pm😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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superb
loved it
thnx for pm
cont soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#30
It's awesome. ..
Continue soon. ..

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