ARIYA TS - EK RISHTA AISA BHI epilouge on pg 36 17/6

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Its a fine morning. One man about 27 of age is sleeping in his bed. Sun rays start hitting his face through window. He lazily turn his face another side.

Suddenly one soft hand rub his cheek. He smile in his sleep .n put his hand on her hand

Man - plz sone do na Jaan.aaj Sunday hai.

Other side

One girl about 25 of age sleeping on a chair hugging her teddy tightly.one man around 28 come look at her lovingly n move his head n pick her up n put her on bed and kiss her forhead .she tight her hold on Teddy n smile in her sleep . that man look at her smiling lips and tears start flowing from his eyes N he quickly left that room.

Again in that man's room

Man - plz sone do na Jaan aaj Sunday hai.

But next sec he feel that he is wet. He open his eyes next sec he see an angry face is starring him . he quickly get up and

Man - sorry sorry jaan I forget

Gi - ap bhul gaye pa hume mandir jana tha. Aap kaise bhul gaye .ab mai apse bat nahi Karungi. Samjhe ya samjhau.

Man mutter. - uff ab kya karu Jaan to naraj ho gayi .nhi nhi naraj nhi bahut jyada naraj. Mai bhul kaise gaya. Or aaj samajh aya ye mera samjhe ya samjhau kitna danger lagata hoga dusro ko sunne mai. Kuch soch arjun kuch soch IPS top karna etf ka second chief hona itha tough nhi jitna apni 4 sal ki baby ko manan hai.

Suddenly he get an idea.

Ar - Jaan suno

Gi - Jaan nahi I am miss Archita Rawte aap samjhe ya samjahu.
She put his police hat on her lill head n frighten her Father.
Arjun give her scary look and

Ar - OK OK mis archita rawte kya aap apne pa Mr arjun rawte ko maaf karengi or unhe apko mandir le Jane ka mauka dengi.

Arc - no Archie ko pa k sath kahi nahi jaana

Ar - archi plz

Arc - no pa aap bhul kaise sakte hai.
N she turn her face other side

Ar - ok to fir ab mujhe us cake shop ka order cancel karna hoga .

Arc - cake kaunsa pineapple wala my fav na .she look so happy

Ar - ha wahi tumhara fav but tum to chal nahi rahi na. To fir
He said lill upset

Arc - no no pa mai chal rahi hu.bas abhi champ ko bata kar aati hu Or aap jaldi ready ho jaiye nahi to

Ar - ha ha meri ma ho raha hu. Bas 1/2 hr OK.

Arc - OK pa. She kiss his cheek n run happily. He look at her smilingly.

He quickly freashenup n get ready in 1/2 hr. Bcoz he didn't want to hear another sys.

Ar - Archie kaha ho tum beta.

Arc - mai yaha hu pa. She come from her toy room.

Ar - come fast aapko bhi nahana hai na dekho pa to ready hai.

Arc - ha pa jaldi se maujhe bhi ready kar do na

Arj pick his baby n give her bath .n wrap her in towel.

Ar - OK to aaj Archie ko kya pehnna hai.

Arc - pink wala frock.

Ar - ok Jaan.

He made her wear pink frock.n pick her up and goes to kitchen and put her on slab .

Arc - pa aaj fir se sandwi ( she is 4 yrs old so can't say properly)

Ar - sorry Archie but you know na aaj kaki chutti par hoti hai or pa ko khana banana nahi aata .plz sandwich se kam chala lo.

Arc - pa meri mumma kaha hai.

Arjun hug her with teary eyes

Arc - sory pa archi ne fir aapko rula diya. Ab kabhi ma k bare mai nahi puchungi .she also cry with her father

He wipe his tear n her also

Ar - no beta .aap roo mat plz aap jante ho na pa apki ankho mai ansu nhi dekh sakte.

Arc - she smile n kiss his hand . aap sabse acche pa ho. I love you pa

Ar - I love you beta .or tu sabse acchi beti ho.

Arc - pa jab mai big girl ho jaungi na to aapko apne hath se khana banungi.

Ar - achha kya banaogi aap

Arc - hmm sab kuch Jo aapko pasand hai. Or fir aapko office se aakar kam bhi nhi karna padega.room bhi nhi uthana padega.mera hw bhi mai hi kar lungi or next day ki prep ( preparation) bhi mai karungi. Aap thak jate ho na.

Arjun hug her. He is stunned his 4 year baby is so understanding.



Ar - nahi baby pa apni archie ka kam karne se kabhi nhi thakte.


Arc - isiliye to aap mere hero ho.


Ar - accha .he smile n she giggle.

He feed her by his hand and take her in his arms.

Ar - Archie bas thoda room utha le fir chale aap jab tak apka fav shinchin dekh lo

Arc - OK pa.

He start TV n put her on sofa n clean their room n her toy room n all house.
After that he change n pick her n leave for temple on his bike.

Other side

That girl see a nightmare n get up with scream n all sweaty.
Hearing her scream that man come in her room panicly .

Man - riyu riyu kya hua .tu thik to hai na.

Riya hug her brother sameer n cry

Ri - bhai bhai n sob. Wo kaha hai wo use le gaye bhai.

Sam -shh shant ho ja riya . wo bhi ab is duniya mai nahi ye baat man le beta .jitni jaldi tu ye sach man legi utna hi accha hoga.

She cry on his shoulder. Like she agree with him

After one hr.

Ri - bhai apka nashta table par rakha hai.mai mandir ja rahi hu.

sam - ruk mai bhi chalta hu.

Ri - bhai plz mai akele rehna chahti hu. Aaj mai char late aungi . mera wait mat kijiyega.

Sam - OK.

She left

Sam MV I know riyu tujhe aaj akele rehne ki jarurat hai. Hey bhagwan meri behan ko shakti dena.

TBC..


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