Ariya FF 'Dastan-E-Ishq' part 8 page 30 14/08/17 - Page 5

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Posted: 9 years ago
#41
Superb update!!!
Riya entry was Fab...
N y ri was so detached??
N didn't talk to arjun n Sam!!!!
Waiting for samjuniya convo!!!
Ohh no ri got injured!!
Hw lala knows riya??
N wat happened to her husband??
Luving d story!!
Continue soonish
Thnx for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
#42
ohh wow awesome twist in story
me wanna know yeh chakkar kya hai
samjun worried for rii
hope Rii jldi thik ho jaye
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Posted: 9 years ago
#43

https://i.imgur.com/rpHb7HQ.jpg


"Dasta-E-Ishq"

PART 2

Chotu n ETF girls are shocked n only standing there in same position...

Kisi ke kuch samjh nahi aata ki kya ho raha he kya karna chahiye

Ayesha compose herself n says

Ayesha : guys u khade rehne se kuch nahi hoga we need to go there too"but still she is hurt seeing sam's care for riya"

Sakshi : tum itni asani se kese baat kar sakti ho tumne dekha nahi sameer or arjun kese us miss attitude ke piche pagal ho rahe the"angry over riya"

Liza n chotu decide not to enter in the matter

Ayesha : wo sab abhi chodo sakshi abhi wo hospital me he humari team member he hume waha jana chahiye

Sakshi : huh.. dekha nahi tumne usne kis tarah baat kit hi mujhse or tum"angrily"

Ayesha : sakshi agar ek tarah se socha jae to usne kuch galat nahi kaha

Sakshi : WHAT?? Tum uski side le rahi ho

Ayesha : nahi sakshi me kisiki side nahi le rahi but usne sahi kaha case jyada important he

Sakshi : me sirf introduce kar rahi thi what is wrong in that or wo attitude dikha rahi thi usne suni tak nahi meri baat or suna diya mujhe"angryly"

Ayesha : sakshi usne tumhe roka but ye bhi kaha ki introduction badme ho sakta he iska matlab yehi hua na ki usne tumhari baat ko oppose nahi kiya but us waqt humare haath me case tha or wo isse jyada jaruri tha so isme galat kya he"trying to put sense in her head"

Sakshi : fir bhi use koi haq nahi banta ki mujhse is tarah baat kare"angrily"

N other just shook their head over this n think iska kuch nahi ho sakta

Ayesha : chalo sab

Liza : but kaha

Chotu : abhi to kaha hospital

Liza : are wo me bhi janti hu but kaha se matlab hume nahi pata ki wo konse hospital gaye he

Now sabki batti jalti he yes they don't know where they take her

Tabhi un sabko unki miseries se bahar nikalne ke liye chotu ka phone ring hota he

Chotu : its shree

Phone convo.

Chotu : hello shree

Shree : yaar chotu mene hospital ka address batane ke liye call kiya he

Chotu : hmm hum wahi soch rahe the

Shree : ok come to city hospital 5th floor room no.512

Chotu : ok hum bas abhi aaye

Shree : hmmm "n manne jaldi aana"

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Chotu : guys chalo wo city hospital me he

Sab SUV me bethte he n went towards hospital

CITY HOSPITAL

Samjun shree riya ko lekar hospital aate he shree to total shock me he seeing the way this both kadoos behaving

Samjun both are getting mad over doctor asking him lots of questions

Jab doctor ne kaha inhe stitches dene padenge they both shiver

Shree to shocked hi ho gaya ye dekh kar dono ke dono itne bahadur he kisi chiz se nahi darte but doctor ki baat sun kar shiver karne lage use to kuch samjh nahi aa raha tha ki kya chal raha he

Dono ke dono doctor se sawal karne lage silly silly se like or koi option nahi stitch eke siwa koi tab koi syrup etc etc

Dono ka bas chalta to dono ye bhi keh dete ki uske badle hume stitches laga do

Lots of warning ke baad un dono ne doctor ko stitches lagane diye

They are behaving like she is a glass doll

Sanjun : Doctor injection dheere se lagana use dard hoga, u know na how to stitches ?,this is not ur first time na?r u expertise in this right? And many more...

Shree to bas ye sab dekh raha tha or shocked ho raha tha usse ye digest hi nahi ho raha tha ki ye kharoos itna softhearted bhi ho sakte he

Bechara apne dosto ko miss kar raha tha or soch raha tha ki kaha akela fas gaya in dono ke bich

Kuch der baad doctor riya ko treat karke bahar aaya

Tab tak samjun glue ki tarah door par chipke hue the looking inside from thar small window n time to time winch seeing doctor stitching her forehead

Samjun : is she ok doctor

Doctor : ji mr. sameer mr. arjun wo ab thik he

Samjun : to use hosh kyu nahi aaya

Doctor : dekhiye unhe kuch der me hosh aa jaega aap chinta mat kijiye she is absolutely fine n wo kal se apni job bhi resume kar sakti he humne unhe room me shift kar diya he aap unse mil sakte he but don't disturb her

Samjun : ye aap kya bol rahe he abhi abhi aapne use stitches diye he or keh rahe he kal se duty resume kar sakti he kese doctor he aap aapko patients ko treat karna bhi nahi aata

They both are saying everything together

Samjun to eachother : cant u speak later

Fir saath me they glare each other

Samjun : jo me bol raha hu tu bhi wahi bol raha he"again together they glare eachothers"

N went in riya's room while saying or should I say cursing eachother under their breath

Arjun/sammer : weda/idiot

Dono same room me he but alag alag side me n every now n than both are glaring eachothers

N outside shree uski to halat hi kharab he bas wo pray kar raha he uske dost jaldi aa jae jese durga ma ne uski sunli ho or tabhi chotu or baki sab waha aate he

Ayesha : shree kya hua tumhe ese kyu khade ho

Shree : to or kya karu tum log to bach gaye but me un dono ke saath aa kar fas gaya or kuch der tum log nahi aate to me to mar hi jata shock se

Chotu : shock kesa shock

Shree : are ye sirf shock nahi back to back shock he

Sakshi : hum kuch samjhe nahi

Shree : kuch der ruko sab samjh jaoge

N kisike kuch palle nahi padta sab confuse ho jate he

Or shree se kuch puchne hi wale hote he ki tabhi

Tabhi samjun room se bahar aate he n fir ek dusre ko ghurte he

Sab shree ko ishara karte he ki inhe kya hua but shree ishara karta he as if dekhte jao

Samjun : doctor"n angrily see each other"

Doctor come there

Sam : aapne kaha tha ki use hosh jaldi aa jaega use room me shift kiye half n hour ho chukka he

Arjun : half n hour nahi rathore 34 n half minute ho chuke he"n glare him"

Sam return the glare

Samjun : ab boliye bhi are u an doctor or not

Doctor : dekhiye unhe hosh aata hi hoga kisi bhi pal"fearingly"

Both first glare the doc then each others n again went inside the room

Sakshi : ye kyat ha"chokte hue"

Baki sab bhi apna sar hilate he jese asking the same

Shree just shook his shoulder

Kuch der baad riya ko hosh aata he(uski aankhe uski fingers move karti he)

Sam jaldise bahar aata he

Sam : chotu jaldi se doctor ko bulao

In room

Arjun : riyu riyu dore ughad bagh maza kade riyu"oprn ur eyes riya n look at me"

Says while cares her hair

Sab room me aa jate he

Doctor check her n says she is completely fine

Riya ko bhi puri tarah hosh aa jata he

She open her eyes but again close they seeing the light fir dheere dheere apni aankhe kholti he uske dono side samjun bethe hue he ek taraf same k taraf arjun

Dono ki aankho me aansu or chamak dono he use hosh me dekh kar dono uske haath pakde hue he

Or uske sakne n samjun ke piche puri ETF team khadi he

Sam : ri u ok hena

Arjun : kiti ghabarlo hoto ami"hum kitna ghabra gaye the"

Samjun : ri kuch to bol

Riya bas dono ko dekh rahi he n fir dono se apne haath chudwati he n says

Riya : mujhe yaha se jana he I want discharge

Sam : but u r not well

Riya : mujhe kuch nahi hua he ye koi or nahi me decide karungi ki me thik hu ya nahi"little angrily"

Sam : par.."but 1 glare from riya n he just nod n went to talk to doctor about discharge"

Riya ab arjun ki taraf dekh rahi he becoz she is feeling irritated having his constant eyes on her

Riya : what"irritately"

Arjun just shook his head

Riya : to ghur kyu raha he kabhi koi ladki nahi dekhi kya"angrily"

Arjun : dekhi he par tere jesi nahi dekhi

Isse riya ko or gussa aata he but baki sab unke to tote ud jate he ki arjun unka kharoos boss flirt kar raha he





i hope itna bura na ho plzzz tell me guys howz it m waiting for ur reviews



love ramya

Edited by arsh4heaven - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#44
oh god!!! I was laughing all the time reading the update...
simply superb,fantastic and entertainment full on..
continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#45
wow wow n wow update
kitna maja aya
waiting for their relation to unfold
ye na sabse mast story hai tumhari
par plz jyada saddy mat banana.
plz clear arjun is speaking in Bengali or marathi.
update soon
thanks for pm.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#46
awesome update...,loved samjun concern for ri & poor doctor he was interrogated by two acps nd shree was totally shocked even team too & continue soon nd thnx for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
#47
😊 sach mei yar maza aa gya what a update its to good superb.
I love it.
Thanx 4 the p.m
Conti s0on
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Posted: 9 years ago
#48
samjun so so so much caring n worried for Rii shree toh shock lg Gya but rii thank god Ri ko Josh aa gya nahin toh doc marr jata darr she arj flirting rii rii toh khdoos arj jaisa behave kar rahi hai ab aage kya hoga waiting to know
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Posted: 9 years ago
#49
awesome update.
continue soon.
thanks for PM.
Sam , Arjun were funny..
bechara shree..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#50
Nic one...
Pls update ur other stories also..

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