New ss Kuch Panne Jindgi ke. part 13 on page 33 4/12 - Page 10

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Posted: 9 years ago
#91
Nice updates
every one has sad past
hope sik jldi pkda jaye
samjun ka kya secret hai
waiting to know
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Waooo. Fantastic. ...

Riya arjun se pyaar karti he. ..

Shree bhi kisise pyaar karta tha par Uska pyaar adhuri rehne gaya. ..

Rahi ka bhi. ..

Not fear...

Tenon ke pyaar pure hone chahiye...

Arjun to apni hi duniya ne me khoye huva he...

Sam or arjun el dusre ko khuch batana chahte he par kya...?

Kahi koi or raaz to nahi. ..

Bas jaldse case khatam kar do raki vo raaz pata chal sake. ..

Or ariya ki gadi bhi thodi thodi love track par lane ki koshish karo...

Us jamane me kanha meera ka na huva par es jamane me to meera ko Uska kanha mil hi sakta he ...

He na...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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opch feeling bad for riya aur rshi...continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#94

Originally posted by: Ritikanfly

Nice updates
every one has sad past
hope sik jldi pkda jaye
samjun ka kya secret hai
waiting to know

Ya I know its sad .
But sab accha to end mai hota hai na
Par picture abhi Baki hai mere dost😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: rvss

Waooo. Fantastic. ...

Riya arjun se pyaar karti he. ..

Shree bhi kisise pyaar karta tha par Uska pyaar adhuri rehne gaya. ..

Rahi ka bhi. ..

Not fear...

Tenon ke pyaar pure hone chahiye...

Arjun to apni hi duniya ne me khoye huva he...

Sam or arjun el dusre ko khuch batana chahte he par kya...?

Kahi koi or raaz to nahi. ..

Bas jaldse case khatam kar do raki vo raaz pata chal sake. ..

Or ariya ki gadi bhi thodi thodi love track par lane ki koshish karo...

Us jamane me kanha meera ka na huva par es jamane me to meera ko Uska kanha mil hi sakta he ...

He na...

Yes I want to Reval it soon but story has to progress
N us jamane mai bhagwan ji ki marji thi or serial mai director or actors ki but yaha to writers ki marji hai.n ariya fan writers unhe kabhi alag nhi karenge.
So plz wait for story to unfold.
Thanks..😊😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part 7
Next day
All gathers at arjun's house n discuss about their further plan.
Just in a month they destroy almost business of sikandar. But unfortunately they couldn't catch sik bcoz he is hiding somewhere. But his right hand altaf has been cought n encountered.

At evening some where in mumbai outskirts deserted place.
One man of 55 age is sitting on couch and tension is visible on his face. And some other mans are also there some are standing n some sit with him.
Yes he is sik.

Sik - Humara pura dhanda barbad ho gaya. Us arjun ne etf k sath milkar hume barbad kar diya.

1 man - chill dad .mai hu na sab thik kar dungi.

Sik - aman humara pura business khatam kar diya or tum keh rahe ho chill. Mujhe laga uski biwi ki maut ke sath sab khatam ho gaya par nahi wo fir khada hua. Use wo informations kaise mili.

Am - reflex dad. Ye business to hum fir khada kar lenege.par us arjun or etf ka wo haal karunga na ki unki kya dekhne walon ki bhi rooh kaap uthegi.

Sik - laugh evilly. Ye hui na mere. Bete wali bat. Mujhe yaken hai tu sik se bhi bada banega. Hum to uth hi jayenge par mai chahata hi arjun ka wo haal ho ki koi aage se humare khilaf uthne ki koshish na kare.

am -aisa hi hoga dad. Etf ki ek kadi mere hath mai hai.ap bas dekhte jayiye

N both laugh n raise a tose.

Same time in etf

Sh - wow yar maja aa gaya humne sik ke pure business ko barbad kar diya.or aaj etf best team hai.

Ri - haa bas jaldi.se sik pakda jaye

Ra - tu dekhna ri aisa jaldi hi hoga.

Sh - par pichle ek mon se chotu mai bahut fark aa gaya .ab humse kam hi bat karta hai din bhar use nehal k alawa or kuch nahi dikhta. Abhi bhi dekho phone par laga hai.

Ra -chotu hume jaan kar ignore nhi kar raha .wo to abhi kuch or hi duniya mai hai
Ri. - hmm. Ye pyar bhi na.

Sh - comeon you both wo puri duniya mai eklauta nhi hai.

Ra - guys mujhe kuch doubt hai..i mean dont think mai ye jal kar bol rahi hu par mujhe nehal kuch theek nahi lag rahi .maujhe lagta hai wo chotu k bhole pan or pyar ka fyda utha rahi hai.

Ri - comeon ras to aisa kaise bol sakti hai ki hum tere bare mai aisa sochenge .kya hume pata nhi tu kaisi hai or chotu ko selflessly chahti hai.or doubt to mujhe bhi hai us nehal par .i mean hum kya jante hai uske bare mai.

Sh - even. chotu bhi nahi janta jyada. Aisa karta hu nehal ki detail nikalta hu or use trace karta hu.

Ri - mai bhi apne informer activate karti hu.

Ra - hope hum galat ho warna chotu ka dil tut jayega.

Trio hug.

Wo kehte hai kabhi kabhi khushi se jyada ek sa gam logon ko pas le aata hai. Aisa hi shree riya or rashi ek dusre k best friend ban gaye or sahara bhi. Yaha tak kabhi kabhi to bina bole hi bas ankho se hi ek dusre ko samajh jate hai. Or chotu kam k alawa nehal k sath busy hai. Aisa wo jan kar nhi kar raha par anjane mai hi uski priority change ho gayi hai. Uski batien sirf nehal k irdgird hi ghumti hai.
Or samjun ka to ek hi maksad hai sik ko pakadna.iske liye unhone khud ko machine bana liya hai . dir raat bas ek hi junoon.
Buy riya rashi or shree unka pura dhyan rakhte hai kahne ka health ka ek family ki tarah.

Samjun enter

Ar - team mujhe information mili hai ki sik india aa chuka hai even mumbai mai hai.

Ri - to ab hum uspar attack ka plan banayenge.

Ar - nhi us par attack ka plan nahi banana hai balki uske attack ka wait karna hai.

Ri - matlab.

Ar - matlab ye ki hume uski location pata nhi or wo chupne mai mahir hai. Or humne uska sab barbad kiya hai to wo hume chodega nhi.bas wahi humara mauka hoga . par haan tum sabko bahut alert rehna hoga. Wo kabhi bhi kisi ko bhi harm kar sakta hai .or ha kisi par bhi believe mat karna.

All - yes sir

Samjun left for cabin.

Ch - thank god chutti mili .pata hai guys aaj mai nehal k form house ja raha hu. Aaj to use propose karke hi rahunga shadi k liye. Usne mujhe specially bulaya hai aaj.

Ra - chotu mujhe negetive vibes aa rahi hai plz aaj mat Jao. Arjun sir ne kaha na kisi par believe mat karna.

Ch - tum kehna kya chahti ho rashi

Ra - chotu tum nehal k bare mai jante hi kya ho.plz hume sab check karne do fir jo chaho kar lena par aaj mat jao.
Ch - bas bahut ab ek word nehal ke against nhi. Tum uski enquiry karoge . nehal sahi kehti thi maine hi nhi mana ki tum mujhe pyar karti ho isiliye usse jalti ho.

Ra - par

Ch - tum mujhe pyar karti ho rashi

Ra - dekho chotu

Ch - ha ya nahi

Ra - ha par

Ch - bas .mujhe tumse ye ummed nhi thi rashi.mai use pyar karta hu isiliye tum uspar ghatiya iljam lagaogi bas .tum itna gir jaogi ye maine nhi socha tha

Ra - chotu...or uski ankho mai ansu aa jate hai.

Ri - chotu tum us kal ki ayi nehal k liye ras ko ulta sidha bol rahe ho jise tum bachpan se jante ho.

Sh - or wo mana kaha kar rahi hai.hume uska background pata kar lene de fir jo chahe kar lena

Ch - waaa..kya bat hai tum log bhi.tum logo ko bhi mujhse jalan ho rahi hai na qki tum logo ki love story ka kuch nhi hua par meri aage bad gai.agar dost aise hote hai to mujhe nhi chahiye.

N he left without hearing anything n trio standing shocked there n most hurt..

Ri - guys sambhalo apne aap ko isse pehle wo kisi problem mai pade hume nehal ki enquiry karni hogi
Sh - right ri .uske kehne se kya hota hai hum uske dost hai or use kahi fasne nhi denge

Ra - hmm..chalo jaldi.

After some time

Ri - mai arjun sir ko batati hu.

At arjun cabin
Ri - arjun sir mujhe kuch batana hai apko

Ar - haa riya bolo itni ghabrayi hui q ho.

Ri - sir wo

Scene shift
At nehel farm house

Ne - chotu comeon pichle 2 ghante se aise hi upset or chupchap baithe ho.
Ch - mujhe unse aise bat nhi karni thi akhir hum best friends hai. Par wo log tum par believe q nhi karte

Ne - jane do chotu .tum mujh par believe karte ho yahi kafi hai. Chalo ab humari sham mat bigaro.dekho maine khud apne haton se tumhare liye khana banaya hai. Comeon

Ch - hmm.chalo.

Itne mai..
Sh - ruko chotu bada bharosa tha na tumhe is par ye dekho.

N he handover him some documents

Ch - tum nehal nahi neelam ho altaf ki behen. Dhoka diya tumne mujhe. Chodunga nhi mai tumhe

Sam - riya arrest her.

Ne - itni bhi kya jaldi hai and she clap and some man come
And war start .soon etf win over them . and riya arrest neelam.

Ri - batao kya plan hai tumhara

Ne - ha ha etf ki barbadi. Or wo hokar rahegi.mujhe pakad liya par boss tumhe nahi chodenge

Ar - wo to waqt hi batayega. Tum ye batao chotu ko q fasaya

Ne - mai jab bhi departmental store jati to ye mujhe dekhta tha. Mai jyada dhyan nhi deti thi.fir altaf bhai ne arjun ko mara par use shak tha ki ye jinda hai yahi pata karne k liye maine chotu se dosti ki. Par isne kuch nhi bataya.or tum logo ne mere
Bhai ko mar dala.mai to usi waqt ise maar deti par upar se order aya ise fasana hai.to maine iske proposal ko haa kar diya.taki ab to mujhe kuch bataye.par hai to etf wala hi na.mai hi janti hu iski lovydovy batien kaise suni.or aj khane mai drugs milakar isse sab ugalwa leti par tum log aa gaye.

Ch - tumhari wajah se maine apne dosto ko pata nhi kya kya bola.u disgusting girl.
Batao kaha hai sik

Ne - maar daloge to bhi nhi bataungi

Sam - le chalo ise.

Itne mai neelam mauka dekh kar chotu par gun point karti hai par rashi beech mai aa jati hai or use stomach mai goli lag jati hai. Or wo neeche girti hai to table se jor se takra jati hai or bleeding start ho jati hai. Riya bhi Neelam ko shoot kar deti hai.WO log local police ko sab handover kar rashi ko lekar hospital jate hai.

At hospital

3 hrs operation k bad jab Dr bahar aate hai
Sam - Dr rashi kaisi hai

Dr - sorry she sleeps in coma. Kab theek hogi kuch keh nahi sakte.

All get shatter hearing this.

Usi waqt arjun ka call aata hai

Ar - kya???


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Posted: 9 years ago
#97
nice update..
continue soon..
thanks for PM..
Arjun ko kisne call kiya
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Posted: 9 years ago
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wow
superb
loved it
thnx for pm
cont soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Superb Did's
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