ariya-- bikhra hua sa part 3 update no pms.. - Page 2

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Posted: 10 years ago
#11
Mind blowing update sheen
Loved it so much
Arjun is in pain
Feeling sorry for him
Eagerly waiting to read more
Please do continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#12
emotional chapter
poor arjun feeling bad for him 💔
he lost everything in his life 🥺
now arjun become drunken 😭
Sameer also felt his pain
hope sajun will find riya soon
in this heart broken situation riya should b with arjun not blaming him & leave him in hell
continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#13
Awesome update and concept
Continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#14
Part 2
Later that day-
All are present in the office
Arjun was sitting on the chair reading file tabhi
Sakshi- yaar tum log bataao tumhare tumhaare pyaar se pehle mulakat aur pehle baat kaisai hogi??
Saare bataana shuru karte hai but arjun to flashback me chala jaata hai
( arjun ki 1 wife roshni ne uuse dhokha diya tha and arjun uske jaane ke baad zindagi me aage badhne ki koshish kar raha that)
6 years back
Mumbai police station-
Inspector-sorry sir aaj ke baad kabhi koi bhi ham me SE aise galti nahi karega.. Please maaf kar digiye.. Please..
Arjun-tum maafi ki baat mere saamne to Karna bhi mat kyonki tumne apne zindagi ki sabse badi teen galtiyaan ki hai
1st - tumne police ki duty nahi nibhai
2nd-tumne inn gundoo ki madad ki jinki vajah se kitni jaane chale Gaye
And 3 rd tumhaare sabse badi galti tumne mujhse jhoot bola
And he started beating him black and blue.
Sameer aakar badi mushkil se use rokta hai
S-arjun meri BAAT to sun
A-kya SAM??
S-tujhe abhi Kolkata ke liye nikalna hoga, commissioner mukherjee ke ghar rehna hai tujhe. Case solve Karna hai. To jaldi ready ho jaa...

Precap-
Flashbacks-ariya meet
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Posted: 10 years ago
#15
inta chota sa update 😳
so roshni cheated arjun 😡
continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#16
superb story
different concept
very interesting
loved it
plz pm me when u update
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Posted: 10 years ago
#17
Amazing. ..

Waiting for ariya first meeting. ..

I hope arjun riya ko khoj nikale. ...

Super. ...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#18
Part 3
Continuation of flashback

Arjun- OK mai AAJ hi Kolkata ke liye nikal jaaonga. Mukherjee sir KO inform kar Dena
Sam-ok

Later evening arjun reach Kolkata airport
At airport--
One police officer is standing with a board with arjun's name
Arjun uske pass jaakar
Ar- hello officer I am arjun
Off-hello sir, mujhe commissioner sir ne aapko unke office chodne KO bola hai
Ar- OK chaliye

They reach office-
Off- sir aap andar jaaiye mujhe aapka saaman sir ke ghar pahuchana hai

Arjun office me ghusta hai
Receptionist SE puchta hai and vo use cabin ka raasta batati hai
Arjun chalne lagta hai
Jab vo cabin ke baahar pahunchta hai to dekhta hai ki ek ladki commissioner ke cabin me hai and files idhar se udhar kar rahi hai
Commissioner vaha par nahi hai
To vo chup chap andar jata hai
And ladki ke sar par bandook taan deta hai
Vo ladki dar se piche mudte hai
Ladki- KO..kon ho tuu...tum??
Yahan bhi aa gaye mujhe maarne... Plz mat maaro shakal se to handsome ho ache khase.. Mere piche kyo pade ho..plz..
Tumhe pata hai yahan ek bohot hi talented insaan aane vaala hai, you know har cheez mai first...
Usko hi to dhund rahi thi..

Us ladki ka chehra dekh kar vo kisi alag hi duniya me chala jata hai...
Tabhi piche use ek aadmi gun aim karta hua dikhta hai unke taraf vo use shoot kar deta hai...

Goli ki tez aawaz sunkar vo ladki
Ladki- baba...
Aur vo behosh ho jaate hai

To be continued
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Posted: 10 years ago
#19
1st meeting was nice
what was that at the end???
who shoots whom???
awesome update
cont soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#20
nice story
eager to read more

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