ariya-- bikhra hua sa part 3 update no pms..

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Prologue
Arjun ran into the hospital. He saw sameer, ayesha and maa crying helplessly.
Riya was sitting slumped on the hospital bench.

Ar- how's kunal now??

He looked at everyone but none of them speak a word.

Finally he go to riya and placed his hand on her shoulder.
Life suddenly entered her body.she suddenly got up and looked at him.

Ri- my baby is gone you hear that?? He is gone. He was in so much pain.but all he kept is asking for his father.his father is too busy chasing professional glory.you hear that arjun rawte??

Our son.. Correction my son has gone with that our relation also..

Riya never came back to their home.she never spoke to him after that.he tried to explain but she never hear. She also does not wanted him to attend their..no her son's funeral but maa make sure that arjun can bid bye to his beloved son.

A week later arjun received a message

I am leaving this city with maa don't try to find. As it is pointless.

Riya was supposed to be arjun's second shot at life.what will happen next in their lives?????



For prologue no PMS
Do read and suggest weather to continue it or not???
I will be waiting..
Apart from that happy friendship day to alll...

Index
Part 1- pg 2
Part 2- pg 3
Part 3- pg 5

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow...
Awesome concept...
Just loved it...
Plss pm me...
Do continue soon..
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Posted: 10 years ago
#3
Wonderful concept tha sheen
It was fabulous and fantastic
Ariya ko ek beta hai kunal
Par ab woh Mar gaya
Aur Riya arjun ko zimedar
Maan rahi hai
Ab woh Arjun ko chod kar chali jaa rahi hai
Eagerly waiting to read more
Please do continue soon

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Different concept. Pls continue soon.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Omg con soon plz every day
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Posted: 10 years ago
#6
interesting concept
oh god ariya lost their baby 🥺
riya blame arjun for that
she even left arjun
continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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omg ariya lost their baby & got separated
what ll happen now???
interesting concept
cont soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Part 1

4 years later
At 12 In night--
Etf conference hall Mumbai
Only a man is sitting on the chair lost in deep thoughts about his life, how his life changes every time away from his happiness.
How he lost his beloved things in his life first his father then his roshni, after that Riya came with sunshine but soon it faded away after that accident in which his son died and along with him riya and his relationship..

He has tears in his eyes ,
Suddenly he wipe his tears and say-
I will find you riyu.. I will

And with that effect of drink make appearance and soon with this thought he fell asleep...

Next day-
First sammer came and saw arjun sleeping on the chair itself..
S-arjun, get up kitni baar tumse kaha hai apna khayal rakha Karo and kaam khatam hone ke baad ghar chale jaaya Karo but tum thode na kisi ki sunte ho..
A- us ghar me akele rehta noon to mujhe ghutan hote hai, puraane baatein yaad karke khud par gussa aata hai, kash me us din apna kaam chodkar apne bete ke paas chala jata,kaash...
S- chal ab jaake fresh hokar aaja OK..hame case solve Karna hai..

Arjun uthkar chala jaata hai..
S-mv- tu chinta mat kar arjun tujhe riya se milna hai to tujhe riya zaroor milegi, I promise...


End of part first
Do comment and give suggestions
Waiting
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Posted: 10 years ago
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itna chota update
par koi baat nahi dear
agli baar bars bala update dena
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: triptiray

itna chota update
par koi baat nahi dear
agli baar bars bala update dena


Hey
Actually my PC is damm irritating
Not posting big updates and PMS
So thode din to aise he chote chote updates milenge
Sorry..

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