Ariya SS ~ TERI YAADEIN ~ (in the memory of arjun n riya) - Page 2

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Posted: 10 years ago
#11
kriya entry was dhamakedar 👏
samjun was to shocked to react 😲
wow kriya going to help samjun to get sikander 👍🏼
kriya's every word remind arjun abt riya
loll Sameer flat on zoya😉
zoya was worried for kriya
uff arjun bhi na
continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#12

chapter 5

scene1(next day outside club BLUE ORCHID)

kriya getting ready in car...arjun in disguise as cab driver...and rathod and zoya as waiter...keshav calls rathod...rathod picks up the phone...-"han keshav...bollo..."

keshav-"rathod sir...maine apko club ki saari positions samjha di hai nah...aur mangesh 9baje tak pohoch jayega club me...sir par iske age main apki aur help nahi kar sakta...hope kriya aur zoya ap ki help karengi..."

rathod-"its okay...haan thik hain..."

kriya(in car) -"ufff yeh larkiyon ki tarah saajna sawarnah muje bilkul acha nahi lagta...kriya tu toh apni jeans main hi thik thi...aur driver...oppps sorry mr.khadus arjun...ap zara mujhe pani ka bottle denge...??"

arjun makes a face...and gives her a hard look...

kriya-"kya...?? pani maingungi toh bhi attitude dikhayoge kya??? Oh hello...main inha tumhare..."

she was about to say something tabhi arjun uske muhpe hat rakh deta hai...her big big eyes become even bigger...she was totally shocked the way he put his hands on her lips...telling her to be quite...their was an eyelock between them...kriya ki ankheen jaise arjun pe hi tham gayi hon...arjun tooo was lost her kohl-filled eyes...

suddenly he removes his hand...kriya-"what the...??? kya kar kya rahe ho??? Have you gone mad???"

arjun-"tum dhire bol sakti ho??? Thoda aur chillaogi th sab ko definately pata chal jayega..."

kriya still in schock...in her mind-"what the hell...yeh khadus iski inti himmat...mujhe attitude dikha raha hai???...rukh meri bhi bari ayegi..."

both of them look in different direction...

scene2

a big car enters BLUE ORCHID where a man enters the club with three personal security guards...rathod calls arjun-"mangesh aa gaya hain...kriya ko bhejo..."

arjun-"okay..."

rathod-"arjun kriya tumhari responsibility hain...isbar kriya ke sath hum koi chance nahi le sakte...kriya...ko ...khone ke baad..."

arjun-"dnt wrry rathod..."

arjun cuts the call...and says kriya-"madam ap chaliye..." taunting her...

scene3 (in club)

mangesh comes and sits in a special place arranged for him...zoya comes and serves him drinks...mangesh looks at zoya and gives a flirtatious smile...yeh dekh kar rathod ko thoda gussa aa jata hai...but he controls...

tabhi club ka manager aata hai...and he annousces a dance specially arranged for that night!!!

The curtain raises and kriya starts dancing...

Song on background...

Tere naal sajhna...dharke mera dil dharke...

Tere naal sajna...dharke mera dil dharke...

Main...lovely ho gayiyan...naam tera parke...naam tera parke...

Main lovely ho gayiyan naam tera parke...

Mangesh bash kriya ko hi ghurta rehta hain...where as kriya focuses on her plan...rathod aur zoya bhi uspe nazar rakhte hain...

Mangesh gets up and goes near kriya takes her hand in his hands...tries to flirt with her...after the dance ends...

Scene 4-mangesh takes kriya in a sepatare room...which was only arranged for mangesh...kriya-"sir ap muje yaha...kiyu le kar aaye hain???"

Mangesh-"main tumhare sath thoda waqt bitana chahta hun...pata hai miss..."

Kriya says her false name passing the drink-"miss shanaya..."

Kriya mixed medicine in the drink...and gave to mangesh...

Mangesh takes it -"so miss shanaya...maine aj tak tumhari jaisi khubsurat larki nahi dekhi...so shanaya..." he tries to touch her...tabhi kriya says-"sir ap drink pijiye nah..."

He drinks it...and he tries to hug kriya tabhi woh faint ho jata hain...kriya-"yesss...yesss..yeh toh gaya...!!! bappa aj bacha lenah bas...woh quickly apna phone lekar arjun ko call karti hain...but before she could call him arjun window se khud kar andar aa jata hai...

Kriya-"tummm??? Mr.saddu??? pata hain main tumhe...abhi...call...acha chodo.."

Arjun-"mujhe jaldi mangesh ka phone toh..."

Kriya takes out the phone and gives it to arjun...arjun uske phone ko apne lappy se connect karke uska phone hack kar leta hai...and mangesh ki sare phone records aur messages apne database me save kar leta hai...and they leave from there...

guys comment must😳😳

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Posted: 10 years ago
#13
nice story
love it
waiting 4 next update
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Posted: 10 years ago
#14

Chapter6

Scen1 (in kriya's house at 4am) arjun was working in his laptop finding out the details of contacts and messages that he has copied from mangesh...tabhi kriya so rahi hoti hain...usse ek ajib sa sapna aata hai...

Flashback-( ek aadmi aur ek chota bacha kuch logo se maafi mang rahe hai...

Aadmni-"please mujhe aur mere bte ko chor do...plz...mere bte ne tumhara kya bigara hai???"

Tabhi ek insaan us aadmi ko shoot kar deta hai...aur uske bte ko bhi mar deta hai...)

Flashback over...

Kriya chilla utti hai...-"papaaa..."

Tabhi uski awaz sunkar arjun daur kar aata hai...

Arjun-kriya kya huya are u okay??"

Kriya-"kuch nahi..."

Arjun kriya ko paani deta hai...

Kriya-"thankxx"

Arjun kuch nahi kehta hai...aur chala jata hai...

Scene 2 (next morning)

Sab drawing room me bait kar plan discuss kar rahe the...Zoya sabke liye coffee le ati hai...sabse pehle kriya ko deti hai...phir rathod ko...rathod smile karta hai...aur zoya starts blushing little...phir woh arjun ko coffee dene hi wali hoti hai...tabhi kriya uska hat pakar leti hain...arjun got a little surprised and so was rathod...zoya bhi hairan thi...

Kriya-"areee areee...zoya baby...inke liye coffee nahi...inke liyeee...toohhh..."

Yeh kehkar woh daurkar kitchen me jati hain...aur waha se ek kettle aur ek glass le kar ati hai...

Kriya-"jaanaab ke liye...special home-made cutting chai...!!! samjhi zoya baby yah samjhayun???"

She said this looking at arjun...gave her a wink...

Arjun thoda hairaan ho jata hai...rathod smile karta hai...

Arjun (smilling ver little hard to make out)-"thankx"

Kriya-"no thanx...kal raat ka ahesan utar rahi thi..." making formalitity...

Arjun little shocked...but gave hard look...

Scene 3 (in drawing)

Arjun-"mangesh ke call records mein koi number sikandar ke number pe registered hai hi nahi...par ek message hai unknown no. Se jisme yeh likha hai ki agle do din bad ek bahot bara consignment via ship mangesh ke add ape pohochai jayegi..."

Rathod-"what...? am sure is mein sikandar ka pheja gaya drugs hi hoga...us no. Ko hack kiya??"

Arjun-"zoya hack kar ki koshis kar rahi hai...par woh signal baunce karwa raha hai...usse pakar nah bahot muskil ho raha hai...she is trying!!"

guys pleaseee give your comments...because they matter a lot...😳😳

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Posted: 10 years ago
#15
Just now read dis too
As usual it was fantastic
Nd u r a fabulous write
Hey dis story is in fb na????
I had read there
Sorry if had mistooken
Eagerly waiting to read more
Please do continue soon
I had sent u buddy request
Please accept it

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Posted: 10 years ago
#16

Originally posted by: jeharshu

Just now read dis too

As usual it was fantastic
Nd u r a fabulous write
Hey dis story is in fb na????
I had read there
Sorry if had mistooken
Eagerly waiting to read more
Please do continue soon
I had sent u buddy request
Please accept it

superb observation yaar..yah i write this in fb also 😉😉😉
thankx fr the love😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
#17

Chapter7

Scene1 (in drawing room) arjun aur rathod baitte hain hall mein...tabhi zoya aati hai...zoya- " sameer...yeh dekho...us mangesh ke phone se jo number hume mila tha nah...usko maine trace karne ki bahot koshish ki hai...but no results..."

Rathod-"toh woh number kaise track karenge???"

Arjun-"I have a plan..."

Arjun discusses the plan...-"mangesh Singapore sarkar ko dhoka den eke liye...officially real estate business karta hai...par secretly woh drugs ka dhanda karta hai sikandar ke sath...hume mangesh ke office jayenge...aur..."

Scene2 (in Mangesh's office )

Rathod and arjun go in disguise...

Rathod dressed as a real estate dealer and arjun as his secretary...

Arjun(changing his voice)- "this is my sir...mr. thribhubhan das a very successful real-estate dealer...he wants to make a new project with you..."

Mangesh-"hello sir..."

Rathod doesn't say hello...rather he just smiles little...

Mangesh thoda hairan hota hai...then he thought may be yeh mr.thribhubhan ka attitude hai...he dsn't say anything!

Mangesh-"sir ap kitna paisa invest karnah chahte hai..."

Rathod waiving to arjun...to tell mangesh..

Arjun-"sir...kehe rahe hai...woh 20 crore invest karenge aur unka profit sharing ratio 60-40 hoga!!! Kya ap ready hai???"

Mangesh -"okay..."

Mangesh-"sir ap kuch lenge??"

Rathod-"yes...sure"

Mangesh peon ko order karne ke liye bahar jata hai...tabhi arjun uska phone lekar usme tracker laga deta hai...

Achanak hi mangesh bapas aajata hai...

Arjun mangesh ko phone ko wapas rakh deta hai...

Arjun-"sir ko ek urgent kaam se jaana para hum kal aayenge..."

Scene 3 (in arjun's room) arjun bed par baita hai...achanak kriya ki cheek sunayi deti hai...arjun daud kar bahar aata hai...kriya is still screeming...awaz kitchen se aati hai...arjun jaise hi kichten jata hai...he is schocked...

Kriya is screeming seeing a cockroach in kitchen...arjun jaise usse chup karane ke liye usse rokne jata hai...tabhi kriya itni daar jaati hai ki woh daur kaar...arjun ko kaas ke hug kar leti hai...aur chik ne laagti hai...

Kriya-"cockroach cockroach...aeee...bajao bajao..."

Kriya ki chickhe sunkar arjun irritate ho jata hai...cockroach bhi kriya ki cheekh sunkar bhag jati hai...udhar kriya arjun ko kaas ke pakri huyi hai...arjun khud ko churane ki koshish karta hai...but its all waste!! Kriya usse choragi tab nah...

Arjun-"kriya...kriya..."

Kriya ko hosh aata hai...ki usne kya kiya...

Kriya-"i'm sorry..."

Arjun uski ahkhoon mein dekhta hain...aur kho sa jata hai...

Kriya-"hello i'm sorry..."

Arjun-"hmmm...its okay...kriya...tum dekh kar toh cockroach bhi bag gaya...!"

Kriya smilling...arjun remembered kriya's smile...

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thank u guys for all your love and support 😳😳😳

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Posted: 10 years ago
#18
Awesome update
So they fixed a tracker in mobile
Kriya shouting on seeing cockroach
Continue soon
Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
#19
Super Awesome amez update
loveit
cont soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#20
i read all parts
its awesome brilliant
loved it
thnx for pm

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