Arakshi OS - The Yellow Umbrella

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Swara85

@Swara85

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Posted: 10 years ago

#11

Wow.. Ritu..! It was awesome..👍🏼
I have started liking yellow colour now..you know..not to the extent that I'll buy yellow umbrella..😛but I'm liking it.
Rain..cutting chai..umbrella ke saath khelna..best part with the leaves during rains..they look so fresh..aand and his song..Anything else left..*sigh* Sheesh..! you made my day today..🤗
I loved it.! Though its not raining here but I'm feeling fresh..
About Arakshi..kya kahu..was smiling throughout while reading..their little banters were so cute and the romance was also😳..
Aarvi's part at the end..I had a laugh..
Feel-good OS tha..loved it but thoda chota tha..😛
Keep writing more.

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TereLiyeMINU

@TereLiyeMINU

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Posted: 10 years ago

#12

That was incredibly splendid.Rain,Tea stall and the yellow umbrella brought the rainbow in the couple's life and the update.😊😊 I loved the innocence of all the characters especially of the protagonist our yellow umbrella.the lines are beautifully crafted.

Thanks for the pm and keep enjoying the monsoon with umbrellas...😊😊

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Shravani / Arohi

@skrafty

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Posted: 10 years ago

#13

Lovely

Beautiful

Amazing

Magical

Just loved it

Ritu u r amazing dear

Keep writing such stuff

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fly.high

@fly.high

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Posted: 10 years ago

#14

ha ha ha ha ha...
the title itself reminded me of my bright purple umbrella...
my brother hates it and we both fight like cats and dogs over it...

such a cute and romantic OS.
loved it.

update Ur other stories soon. sparks
missing them

love
Birdie

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Maham

@Mahaali2905

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Posted: 10 years ago

#15

wow love it

superb awesome Os

really nice u r the best...

thanks 4 pm n love ur stories

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IArmageddonI

@IArmageddonI

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Posted: 10 years ago

#16

The Yellow Umbrella...

Do you know a day before I had noticed a little yellow butterfly nearby *giggles* no need to say what's the first thought which crossed my mind!

Now coming to this story, I think I have already told you how much I adored this one! I guess it was natural for the years old couple to succumb to their honeymoon instincts when they found each other in rain.

Well Arjun turned out to be the most romantic by plastering a trail of hot kisses on his wife 😳 If only the two end up taking a weekend off for each other, I mean literally! Send your lovely little daughter over to the Rathore's and the duo must enjoy a day in Lonavala or Lavasa... 😉

Reliving their honeymoon days... the spark hasn't gone but time and age might be playing factors to douse the spark off...

I must say they have a smart little kid at home and the last question was

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Aye... phasaaa