Ariya FF: Electrons Cannot be friends, New Chapters added Pg 101 - Page 68

You said its just the beginning of a new chapter

Glad there is hope for ariya to meet again n reunite

At least there is no sad ending

Awesome update

Loved it:)

Hey still waiting for the sequel....

Hi, I am here sitting in my office reading your story ignoring work because work is boring ur story is interesting :p

First things first loved your storyline it's such a refresher.

Riyas character has so much Depth. Could make a connection with the character, it's so true your past influences your today and tomorrow a lot. The way she has evolved her past has made a lot of impact. All her facets her friendship, her relationship with all team, her love for arjun, her guilt of being so close but unable to save so many lives is so beautifully put in words.

I love the way you narrated arjun. Every person has flaws no one is perfect, everyone makes mistakes what's important is you own your mistakes. That's arjun for you. He carries guilt of being unable to save his wife and mistrust in Riya. I am loving how you portray his emotions.

Looking forward to read the rest of the chapters please pm me. Would love to hear from you and read all the other chapters. Did I forget to mention I love your narration actually I am addicted now. Please pm me.

Loads of love and best wishes

Shravani

Hey .....

I'm one of the old readers and I waited desperately for this story to re start.......

I couldn't keep this out of my mind and kept checking in case you updated....

Due to new IF you don't get enough PM's and neither you get an email notification in case you miss it.... So that may explain my long absence as I didn't know this story has updated

Excellent job btw..... The story is as fantastic as it was the first time I read it......

Loved the way you brought into light the fact how Riya Mukherjee was underestimated .... I remember the episode where this guy tried to hit on her and Riya beat him ...... I also remember the faces of the team.....

The character was not only underestimated but also taken for granted..... Even the mourning was for just one episode

I loved how Riya is strong now and the table has turned as now Arjun is the one regretting and apologizing......and the way the character in story are so close to original and no instant lovey dovey crap......

I also loved the change in dynamics of relationship and how easily the plot is flowing

I read till chap 16... I can't find the rest in case it is updated....

Plz keep updating

Loved it

Update soon

And do pm me.... I'd love to read.....

Being the last chapter, it was amazing. I couldn't expect a better ending of this story. I liked each scene of this chapter so much.

The bandage scene was so beautifully penned down. I really wished something like that in this story. It felt real.

Liked how Arjun tried to console Riya saying the true words. The support was much needed.

Finally, they got over the past truly from heart. It seemed both wanted to talk many things but something was stopping them. Really both were advising each other to move on!! Which hardly they can without each other !

Who is Sikander's mole in ETF? Is it Gorky Sir's mole? But I hope the information is wrong. Don't want anyone from the current team to be a traitor.

The full story was revolving around this only case & the closure of it was unsatisfactory!!

And another thing I wanted to ask, do you understand Bengali language? Actually there's a Bengali song named ''Shei Tumi'' which reflects Ariya or say Arjun's emotions much. Whenever I hear the song I keep remembering this story ! You can check it once if you understand.

Thanks for the PM.

The Teaser

I'm so excited for their new journey. I'm sure it'll be damn interesting. Already liked the teaser much.

Uff...At last, iss gadhe ko samajh mein to aya ki , he loves her ! M super happy for that. Eagerly waiting for this beautiful journey to begin.

I like the way you presented the CS in siggy.

All the best for your exams. Wish you would come soonish.

Can u pm me the story ,its really awesome👍🏼....i dont get any chapters after 15...n i really wanna read further😒...plzz if possible do pm me...

Eagerly waiting for the sequel!!

All the best for sequel 👍🏼

Please pm❤️

Arre yaar aur kitna wait karwaogi sequel k liye....plz yaar de do na sequel....we are waiting for soooooo loooongggggg....