Ariya FF: Electrons Cannot be friends, New Chapters added Pg 101 - Page 54

Hey where r u??? Kahan gayab ho gayi? Can't wait more for d nxt chapter...plzzzz jaldi jaldi update do na.....

Originally posted by: ishitadalal

Hey where r u??? Kahan gayab ho gayi? Can't wait more for d nxt chapter...plzzzz jaldi jaldi update do na.....

The next update will be little late dear. I am caught up with study and revisions. Hope you understand.

Originally posted by: MissShaikh

Awsmmm 😍

Beautifully written

Thanx for pm

Continue soon

Originally posted by: nitris23

Thnx 4 pm

Awesome update

Love it

Plz continue soon

Thank you girls

Originally posted by: kurkuresandwich

Awesome update👍🏼

Loved the equation between Riya n Shree❤️

it show how much Shree care about RI and was always with her in her bad times.

Riya POV was nice. Loved the terrace scene.Rain,Ariya,pain.

The confrontation between Ariya was necessary and dear it was heart wrenching.😭💔

Thanks for the pm...

Continue soon....

He was always there with her in every situation.

I am glad you liked the update. Thank you so much for the reply.

Originally posted by: minamma

Bang on

It was unexpected but not unpleasant

Break down of Arjun in arms of Riya and Riya in confines of her apartment was well written

After long we got glimpse of our old Riya and I totally loved it

Riya point of view was totally correct her love story only exist herself there was no Arjun in it from the start

At least he got his love she never got hers

But now maybe just maybe they might find each other again

Lets hope against hope

Do you think it's too soon for them to be starting that topic?

I am also hoping against hope.

Their needs healing before they heal each other.

Thank you so much for the reply Mina. I am glad you liked the update.

Originally posted by: swaasp

super update dear

riya's past😢

full of ariya update ❤️

and awesome edit dear😍

thanks for the pm

update next part soon

Yeah. She had a horrible past😥😥

Thank you so much for liking the edit and the update 😘😘

Originally posted by: Mdmadona

Finally ariya's face off

Riya got more angry on him

Arjun's part is not clear

If he wanted to save her, then why he didn't save her afterwards, in trial, in front of public

Hope we can have his pov

Awesome update

Cont soon

Arjuns part will be more clear in the coming updates. He have to answer for all the injustice he had made her face in the past.

Thank you for reply dear. I am glad you liked the update.

Originally posted by: cuteariya

awesome chapter

i feel really bad for riya she had really horrible childhood🥺

There will be more to her past than it's already available.

her so called left her & her mom in fact he was never there for them😡

she don't want the same thing happen with anjali so she is trying her best to make anshu understand😊

Yeah. That's the least she could do. To stop someone else become just like her.

after long time finally ariya confront each other & honestly it wasn't pleasant😭

It was meant to be ugly as they do have such conflicts. I hope I didnt make it unacceptable.

both were broken hurt it's really painful for them💔

Yes 😒😭

i wish arjun just had listen to riya & trust her that day

in deep down in riya's heart she still love arjun & can't she him broken

Love never fade I guess 😋

don't know what arjun will do know?

continue plz

Thank you for your reply dear. 🥰😘

Originally posted by: tasnimrodela

An update full of Ariya came as a pleasant surprise.

Hey Tasnim🤗 I so glad to see you back after so long.🤗

I love the way you pen down the emotion of the characters.

Thank you

Riya had a terrible past. Yet she tried to be a better version herself. But she somewhat failed doing so and ended up becoming the person again she was before ETF members knew her. This shows how much we human beings fight with ourselves and our inner turmoils every single day.

I have heard somewhere that the greatest battle we fight is we with ourselves where you dont know what to do if you win or lose. She tried her best. Maybe that wasn't enough...

Riya's love for Arjun hurted her beyond imagination. She was right on her part. Arjun at least got his love. Be it for a short period. But for Riya there was no Arjun. It was she waiting desperately for Arjun to reciprpcate. Her love story didn’t even start and she was sent back to that phase of life where she always struggled with herself. Yes..she is no longer the girl who used to care. L

Love evokes such emotions in a person. It hurts so much to care that one day not caring so much can also bring you some relief and save you from the hurt. Riya was no different. She only tried to guard her heart this time by not caring but when you love so deeply its difficult not to care.

But deep inside we all know how much she still cares and how terribly her own feelings affect her.

That's something, she can her attitude. Not her feelings. They will still be there.

Arjun's breakdown was heartbreaking. 😭

He was suffering too.

It was needed I feel. Both of them are broken and I hope they fix each other.

I hope too🤭😉

Their journey is not going to be an easy one. But then they say "Pyaar aag ka dariya hain." Toh doobke jaana toh padega. 😆

They need to realise they are the only ones in the world who can fix each other 😆

Your updates deserve detailed reviews. But I'm a little caught up these days. Will leave longer comments once my exams finish. 😃

Your replies always give me the satisfaction that I did something good to the story and I am improving. I wish you all the best for your papers. 🤗

Hoping to see you soon Tasnim🤗

Thank you so much for taking out time and giving your feedback 😘😘

Originally posted by: ariyabestfan

Awesome update

Love it..

Pumpkin carriage of cyndrella..lol..🤣

Uff Shree ne toh Arjun ke upar Sara gussa utar Diya..

So dinner date cancel lol..

Shree ne toh sweet se hi Pet Bhar liya Hoga

Chalo ACP Arjun ne investigation Ka ek Naya tsrika sikh liya....ye tsrika toh pehle wali Riya Ka copy tha ACP..

Please continue soon

Thanks for pm

Sorry for late comments

ACP remembers everything about old Riya 😉😉🤣 I always wanted a revert of that scene. But arjun was far away from flirting in that show 🤣

Originally posted by: ariyabestfan

Awesome update

Love it

Riya's childhood is really distured..

Hope now at least Anshu will find his love..

Arjun is heartbroken..he wanted to save Riya..

Riya too took out her all anger..

I think Arjun is not totally wrong here..

Plz continue soon

Thanks for pm

Sorry for late comments

Sooner or later Anshu will find his love. He just need to realise who is the right person for him. Arjun might have his reasons but it destroyed Riya not only emotionally but professionally. I am not being biased with Riya, but arjun will have to come up with something justifiable to prove to Riya that he actually had his reasons.

Thank you so much for reply.

And dear, dont say sorry.