Ariya FF: Electrons Cannot be friends, New Chapters added Pg 101 - Page 53

Bang on

It was unexpected but not unpleasant

Break down of Arjun in arms of Riya and Riya in confines of her apartment was well written

After long we got glimpse of our old Riya and I totally loved it

Riya point of view was totally correct her love story only exist herself there was no Arjun in it from the start

At least he got his love she never got hers

But now maybe just maybe they might find each other again

Lets hope against hope

super update dear

riya's past😢

full of ariya update ❤️

and awesome edit dear😍

thanks for the pm

update next part soon

Finally ariya's face off

Riya got more angry on him

Arjun's part is not clear

If he wanted to save her, then why he didn't save her afterwards, in trial, in front of public

Hope we can have his pov

Awesome update

Cont soon

awesome chapter

i feel really bad for riya she had really horrible childhood🥺

her so called left her & her mom in fact he was never there for them😡

she don't want the same thing happen with anjali so she is trying her best to make anshu understand😊

after long time finally ariya confront each other & honestly it wasn't pleasant😭

both were broken hurt it's really painful for them💔

i wish arjun just had listen to riya & trust her that day

in deep down in riya's heart she still love arjun & can't she him broken

don't know what arjun will do know?

continue plz

An update full of Ariya came as a pleasant surprise.

I love the way you pen down the emotion of the characters.

Riya had a terrible past. Yet she tried to be a better version herself. But she somewhat failed doing so and ended up becoming the person again she was before ETF members knew her. This shows how much we human beings fight with ourselves and our inner turmoils every single day.

Riya's love for Arjun hurted her beyond imagination. She was right on her part. Arjun at least got his love. Be it for a short period. But for Riya there was no Arjun. It was she waiting desperately for Arjun to reciprpcate. Her love story didn’t even start and she was sent back to that phase of life where she always struggled with herself. Yes..she is no longer the girl who used to care.

But deep inside we all know how much she still cares and how terribly her own feelings affect her.

Arjun's breakdown was heartbreaking. 😭

It was needed I feel. Both of them are broken and I hope they fix each other.

Their journey is not going to be an easy one. But then they say "Pyaar aag ka dariya hain." Toh doobke jaana toh padega. 😆

Your updates deserve detailed reviews. But I'm a little caught up these days. Will leave longer comments once my exams finish. 😃

Awesome update

Love it..

Pumpkin carriage of cyndrella..lol..🤣

Uff Shree ne toh Arjun ke upar Sara gussa utar Diya..

So dinner date cancel lol..

Shree ne toh sweet se hi Pet Bhar liya Hoga

Chalo ACP Arjun ne investigation Ka ek Naya tsrika sikh liya....ye tsrika toh pehle wali Riya Ka copy tha ACP..

Please continue soon

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Sorry for late comments

Awesome update

Love it

Riya's childhood is really distured..

Hope now at least Anshu will find his love..

Arjun is heartbroken..he wanted to save Riya..

Riya too took out her all anger..

I think Arjun is not totally wrong here..

Plz continue soon

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Sorry for late comments

Awesome update👍🏼

Loved the equation between Riya n Shree❤️

it show how much Shree care about RI and was always with her in her bad times.

Riya POV was nice. Loved the terrace scene.Rain,Ariya,pain.

The confrontation between Ariya was necessary and dear it was heart wrenching.😭💔

Thanks for the pm...

Continue soon....

Awsmmm 😍

Beautifully written

Thanx for pm

Continue soon

Thnx 4 pm

Awesome update

Love it

Plz continue soon