Ariya ss please forgive me (part 9: pg 52 Dec-18 updated) - Page 2

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awsum di...
Cont soon...
Vry excited 4 it...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome prologue
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Friends here is the part 1 hope you like it...

Part 1

A beautiful girl's sleep is disturbed by sunrays...she woke up and got freshened up and went near a room and knocked on the door but its already opened...she saw the most important people of her life quarreling cutely...she smiled and went inside they saw her and stopped quarreling and the girl hugged her and said good morning riyu...[Yes the girl who came in was riya]

Riya : Good morning Bhabhi...Eh kya aap subah subah meri bhai per chillarahe ho??

Mansi: Kya aap dhono bhai behan ek jaise hi hai ...meine kuch nahi kiya sabh thumhari bhai kha hi galathi hai...he was about to fall...

Riya ran to her brother who is sitting on bed hugged him and said : Kya bhayuu eh sahi hai kya joot math boliye...

Viren: Ha Riyu sorry ...

Tears are rolling on riya's cheek...viren wiped the tears and said sorry riyu aage se aisa nahi hoga...

Riya hugged him and said I know bhaiyuu u are trying not to trouble us but we both love u a lot...u can never trouble us we can't see u in pain please for both us don't take such drastic steps...

Mansi placed her hand on riya shoulder and sat beside viren...viren apologized both and both hugged him...

Riya: Chalo ab bahuth hogaya aur tho aur meri manjil thak khi safar kal se shuru hogi bhaiyuu I promise I won't leave the people responsible for our condition ... She placed her hand on mansi hand and said bhabhi abh mein humare saath aur injustice nahi hone doongi...they will have to payback for their deeds...

Mansi assured riya that she will definitely succeed in her mission and blessed her...riya composed herself and complained that she is hungry...mansi and viren smiled at their riyu their life and all went to have breakfast...

Later riya and mansi went to mall for shopping where etf trying to catch a criminal riya caught the criminal by tricking him and handed over to chotu all the etf were amazed at her beauty and skills...

Rathod asked chotu to take the criminal to etf office and the rest to move to office...

Arjun observed that rathod talking to the girl and hugging her before she left...Rathod returned to SUV and drove back to etf...Arjun made the criminal to tell all the info they needed and after some time case is solved...and the guilty got punished for the crime...

All were thinking about the girl in the mall and rathod is smiling thinking of the girl which got noticed by arjun he has many doubts but brushed them aside...he asked the rest to stop chitchat and concentrate on the work...

Later in the evening all left for the house after completing paper work...only Samjun were in the conference room...Sam phone beeps indicating a message after reading which small smile crept on Sam face ...he muttered pagal Larki kabhi nahi sudaregi...

Some where else riya got a call seeing the id she became happy and lifted the call...

O.S.: Hello darling how are you ...

Riya : tho abh yaadh aaya janab kho mein..finally...

O.S: oy chupkar...thum ho jho mere sawal kha jawab nahi dethi ho aur mujhe sunaraheho...

Riya: kounsi jawab...

O.S: wahi mera 143 kha Jawab...

Riya: Abhi thu phir shuruu hogaya...okay bye mein phone rakthihu ...

Abhi: sorry jaanu sorry...please talk to me...

They talked for some time and riya slept awaiting the next day to be asap as it is first day of her journey to the goal...

Next morning riya woke up early got ready and went to a place and stopped before a building..which is

ETF Office...

All were in the conference room...Riya went inside said something to the receptionist and went inside...

She reached a floor and opened the door...the door just missed hitting sakshi...

Sakshi furiously started shouting on riya as to who is she it not a place anyone can barge into...it is etf and nonstop shouting at riya..before riya could talk all heard Sam shouting at sakshi...( sakshi is not there at mall scene)

Sam: sakshi enough!!!! She is Riya Mukharjee third in command of etf...

All were shocked the girl who caught the criminal is third in command ...they were stunned how a beautiful girl like her can be a cop..


To be continued
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow
Awesome update
Love it
Cont soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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amazing
mind blowing update di
so riya is third in command of etf...
continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow..
Awesome update.
Loved it a lot.
Riya's family moment with her brother n bhabhi was emotional.
Aisa kya hua thha unke saath jiske liye Riya badla lena chahti hai?
Riya caught the criminal and handed hom to ETF.
Bhai hugged Riya.
Akhir maajra kya hai?
Riya 3rd in command of ETF.
Wow.
Continue sooonish.
Thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Prologue is amazing.
Continue sooonish.
Thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow superb start
thanks for the pm
plz continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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awesome update didu
whhoo loved riya's family moments wwith her bhai & bhabhi
they were cute & emotional too
but wht happene with her bhai
aur riya kisse badla lena chahti hai ??
wow riya caught that criminal in the mall
with her trick & skills
and sammy hugged her
omg, i'm so much excited to know more abt them
and riya joint as third in command of etf
and this sakshi like stupid shouted on my rii😡😡
but yeeeh sammy came there & shouted on sakshi
telling her ri is third in command of etf
and whole etf is shocked
didu update nxt prt soon
will be waiting didu😉
love youuu
and plss update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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awsmmm updat dr
lvd it
thnks 4 pm

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