ARIYA'~'sach ya haqueekat'~'part 11 given

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jeharshu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#61

Originally posted by: Mafruhanowrin
amazing
fantastic concept and character sketch..
Will love to read it
continue soon

thanks rizz...

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jeharshu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#62

Originally posted by: swethalovely
Awesome Cs dear
Loved it
Continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago

#63

Originally posted by: Cieli.Santi
nice cs

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Posted: 10 years ago

#64

Originally posted by: ashmijoseph
nice concept continue soon dear...

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Posted: 10 years ago

#65

Originally posted by: Mariaakanksha
Trailer mast hai.. first part kab reveal kar rahe ho...? waiting for the episodes...

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jaldi hi update karenge

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Posted: 10 years ago

#66

Originally posted by: stutisinghania
awesome cs didu
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Posted: 10 years ago

#67

Originally posted by: Anamkhan126
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plzz do cont soon n thanks 4 pm me

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Posted: 10 years ago

#68

nice cs dear

do update fast...

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Posted: 10 years ago

#69

heyy guys
thnk U sooo muchhh 4 the gr8 reponse...

zubiya92, shanafr, madmadona, cuppypie121, rinku95, meera851, --Rashmi--, Areesha566, 1993.ssg, LoveAriya, ariyabestfriend, asya789, devildiva21,
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hamare concept ko read karne ke liye bahot bahot thnksss
aur srry ki ham jaldi update post nahi kar pae..
actually hamari tabiyet theek nahi thi...
so here is the next part...😊😊😉

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Posted: 10 years ago

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ARIYA""~~""SACH YA HAQUEEKAT""~~""

srry 4 typing mstakes actually both hindi and english are nt my mothertongue..🥱😕

PART 1

Somewhere in mumbai, a girl & a boy away frm the lively , happening Nd noisy night life of the city in a simple cottage...

girl : plzz bhai , ye acha idea nahi hai.. pata nahi vo log kaise react karenge mujhko yu suddenly dekh kar...

The boy opened his mouth 2 say something bt the girl cut him sharp by saying
girl : no iske bare mein soch naa bhi mat..!!!! aap unlogon ko mere bare mein kuch bhi nahi bolo ge... aapko meri kasam...

boy : bt tht's nt fair..!!!! 2 saal se tum unse , mujhse dur rahi ho...aur ab tum mumbai mein ho kar, aapno ke samne hi aana nahi chati..!!??? I know ki tumko dekh kar vo shocked honge par uss se bhi zyada khushi hogi ... U know naa tht they luv U tooo muchhh...

girl : main jaanti haaon bhaiki vo mujhse bahot bahot pyaar karte hai par abhi tak mera yahan rahenna fixed nahi hai.. aur ye baat aapko achese se pata hai.. Commissioner saab { comm saab } ne abhi tak kuch confirmation nahi diya hai... so agar mujh phir se secret mission par jaana pare toh vo mujhko nahi jaane deng ge...!!!

boy : comm saab comm saab comm saab...!!!!!!!!!!!!

he shouted...
comm saab ke decisions important hai aur tumara family , ham log nahi hai naa... Mat bhulo ki issi comm saab ki wajah se tum hum se 2 saal tak dur rahi ho...!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

girl : Bhai.. U know thts nt cozz of him..!!!!!!!!!!! It was my decision , my choice .. Meine vo decision aapni marzi se liya tha..

"MARZI MY FOOT..." he shot back moving his hairs with his hands.. " marzi nahi RIYA.. ETF ya phir more precisely arjun aur meri liye ye faisala liya tha... DAMN IT.." ( ya thts right as u must hve already gussed the boy & girl are no other bt RIYA & SAM )

he cupped her face and said.."" uss din toh meri jaan hi nikal gayi thi tumko dekh kar. ham sab ko laga ki tum hum ko chod kar chali gayi. THNXX GOD ki blood tranfusion start ho gaya tha aur tumari saanse phir se chale ne lagi..

{ now wht happened tht day after ETF had brought Riya to the hospital...
after riya had stopped breathing.. every1 went out of the room crushing themselves 4 nt suceedind in saving riya.. they thought she was dead . but jab docs uske body ko machines se deconnect karne aaye toh tabhi uski saanse phir se chalne lage. a nurse inform sam abt this who was with the comm... they rushed back & the comm told the docs nt to tell any1 abt this as riya's life was in danger.. many criminal scientics were mad a@ riya 4 her act of consuming the bactteria and ruining their plans to destroy mumbai city.. so thy were out 4 revenge.. so comm saab and sam told every1 tht riya is dead 2 protect her .. and they sent her out & far from mumbai to protect her... then after 6 months of treatement riya was okii bt still the sideeffects were present.. and 1 day comm saab had a dangerous secret mission for ETF for which sam or arjun had to go.. bt riya came 2 kno abt this so she convinced the comm tht she was fit 4 this mission & after 2 months of excessive training .. riya went on the mission without informing sam... sam was mad at her 4 doing thi as he started onsidering her as his small sis and riya too started calling her bhai... however riya made sure to inform sam abt her position , mission's progression and health regularly.. now after the mission was over she was back in mumbai...} [ hamko pata hai ki its total bawas abt her survval bt plzz bear with me...😳😳]

Thinking abt the past sam shivered and hugged riya sayig tht : ab main tumko kahi nahi jaane dene wala hoon ... tum bass mere pass hi raho ge... Riya's eyes welled up hearing these words as they reminded her o some1 every every special..

after some time breaking the hug
sam : toh chale tumare besties se milne...???😊
riya : NO.. abhi sahi waqt nahi hai... thore time ke bard jab sab fix ho gaye ga... OKII???? flashing her dimples..
sam through he didnt wanted bt had 2 agree seeing riya's dimples 😃😃
sam : theek hai .. abhi jaa kar soo jaayo tumari health abhi abhi completely theek nahi hai.. ek min tumne medicines liya..???????????

riya who had completely forgotten tried 2 cover up & save herself frm getting scolded😲😕 " actually bhai mujhko bahot nind aa rahi hai main sone chali... GUD NIGHT...
sam who already knew this excuse said " DONT U DARE MOVE FROM THERE MISS RIYA MUKHRJEE... aaj bhul gayi naa.. jab tum akeli thi tab yaad dilane ki kabhi jaarorat nahi pari aur jab tum aapno ke pass hoti ho tab bhul kaise jaati ho.. ????????? chalo abhi chup jap kha lo aur soo jao...
he looked as riya made faces while taking her meds ...
he assured tht riya was vry well sleeping and turned 2 leave bt found tht riya was holding his hands ...
he was happy tht riya was finnally back jst like the old one...

he decided to stay there and nt disturb his little sis's sleep who seemed to be sleeping peacefully & genuinely after soo much time...

he rested his head on the bed wishing 4 a happy and bright future for riya unaware tht the following day was abt to change their lifes completely..

precap
sam/riya shopping
shreetu/sakshi/ayesha/liza shopping at the same place..
a surprise 4 riya tht changes everything 😕😕

well well this was the update.. pata nahi kaisa hai ... srry if i didnt meet ur expectations...
plzz comment and give ur feedback..
hamko help kare ga decide karne main wherther 2 cont or discont

thnkkss 4 reading😊
and ya if any one wants this pm plzz add me or jeharshu 2 ur buddy list...

Edited by SanaHolic - 10 years ago

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