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Posted: 9 years ago
kyara nice and different nme
i hink rihanaa is riay..hope so...kyoonki without riya hum ariya story padna mushkil heina ?

thansk for pm and sorry for late
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awsome update..
Love it..
Arjun missing Riya..
Riya had lost her memory..?

Plz continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hey guys kaise ho. I know i am a horrible writer but mere exams hai. Raat ke 1:30 par update kar rahi hu kyoonki 1 mahine tak forum par toh aane se rahi.So here is the next part-

Part 13

In mumbai,ETF office.
Arjun stood up from his seat went towards his drawer where he kept her diary and roseclip and other things of her. He always kept it locked. He opened the diary and touched her writing. He often read it, how she took notes on the case,how she wrote in it what she was feeling,how grossed out was she from the honour killings, how blatantly she wrote that she was falling for him, how she loved him but will never be ever to tell him because she will die before she saw him watching her with disgust(which brought a fresh round tears in his eyes) her antics(which brought a smile).
Arjun :Dekho Riya tumhaare jaane ke baad bhi tum mere chehre par hasi laa sakti ho.
In one page she had written-Arjun sir main aapse vaada karti hu ki main mar jaungi lekin aapko kabhi haarne nahi dungi.Aapki jeet hamesha hongi.
Arjun :Haarne nahi diya tune mujhe riya,apna vaada nibhaya lekin mera sabkuch le gayi apne saath jo ki tu bangayi thi toh iss jeet ka koi mol hua kya? (more tears)
He had read those lines countless times and had nearly memorised but it always made him wonder when she wrote sometimes things like,"i survived lot worse and uss pagal ne ek heartbreak ke liye ladki ko maar diya."or "Sir main uss terrorist ko marne ki wajah se nahi ro rahi thi lekin iss baat par ro rahi thi ki yeh khoon aapka bhi ho sakta tha. Bohot kho chuki hu ab khone ki himmat nahi. Haan yeh sahi hain ki mujhe kisiko maarna sahi nahi lagta lekin main apnon ke liye wo sab kar sakti hu jo sahi ho even if it means to give up my life. And i don't need anymore proof to prove it."
Arjun(saying it to himself):No riya you need no proof.
He felt a hand on his shoulder and someone said "Juno" and he knew it was his sam, not rathod not the chief not brother of Roshni but his best friend sam. He just turned and hugged him tight and just asked him while crying:"Why me sam? Mere
saath hi kyoon?Sab kyoon chale gaye mujhe akela chodke?Apne bhagwan se puchna?Papa,roshni,tum,riya, sab kyu?"
Sam:Its okay. Just cry it out.
Arjun cried for sometime and after becoming a little calm he broke the hug from sam and saw chotu and shree standing with tears chotu hugging shree by his shoulders as shree kept on sobbing near the door.
Sam:Arjun sambhalo apne apko ,apne liye nahi toh Riya ke liye. Tumne abhi kaha na ki woh tumhe haara hua nahi dekh sakti
toh phir aaise kyu haa? Meri behen ki aakhri wish ki kadar kar.
Arjun after sometime nodded.He went to pick her diary which had slipped while he was hugging sam, but saw that something
was slipping out of it. A photo? It was of riya in her messy bed head hair giving a smile in pajamas and a green t shirt but she
looked a little different like higher cheek bones and a little change in nose and eyes emerald green which he saw only a few times but loved them.
Rathod over his shoulder:Riya ki photo?Yeh tere paas kaise?
Arjun:I...I..d..don't know. Yeh bas yaha thi iss diary mein.
Shree hearing this surged towards it saw it:S..sir yeh toh wahi picture hai jo riya kisiko chuune nahi deti thi, hamesha
chupaake rahti thi sirf maine isse ek baar dekha tha college time mein.
Chotu:Haa maine bhi dekha tha. Kai baar uuse diary mein kuch dekhte hue smile karte hue dekha. Kehti thi koi special hai. Mai toh sochta tha Arjun sir ki photo hogi lekin ye toh Ri ki photo nikli.
Arjun:Yeh Riya nahi ho sakti. Dhyan se dekho. Wait. Shree riya ki last photo(all four cringed at those words)...hai tumhaare
paas.
Shree showed him the pic on his mobile. It was of her smiling with shree and chotu without a care in the world inside the temple.(guys remember the case just after xora where arjun asked shree to handle himself when he saw him looking up riya's pic and in tears).
They compared the pics and others also saw the differences in the face structure and specially the eyes. The normally brown eyes looked like they did not really belong to her and emerald was the color that was hers. How did she do that? Contacts? And specially the face difference. No one and surely not Riya will go for Plastic surgery to just change a bit here and there.
Then how are there differences?
Shree:Yeh Riya hai phir bhi nahi hai. How is that possible?
Rathod:Shree tum riya ko kabse jaante (taking a breath) thhe?
Shree:Sir college se. About when we both were 19. Mere chotasa accident hua tha isliye maine college late join kiya tha. Wo bhi late joining thi . Hum dono ka wo 1st day tha. Meri ragging ho rahi thi aur us lafange ne uske saath flirt karna shuru kar diya. And well...i don't think so ki uske baad wo kabhi bacche paida kar paya hoga.(smiling at the memory.Others also can not stop themselves from giving out a chuckle) And then we became friends. Phir Lizard se dosti ho gayi and hamari epic fights ki counsellor wo banjati. (chuckling at that) Log uske paas jaate thhe aur kehte thhe "Riya maate baccha hame inn asure ke jung se" then she came as the angel gave us a smack on each of her heads and all was well(right now he was just laughing at those memories)Xora case se pehle hum soch rahe thhe ki hum aapse chutti lekar college ghum aaye.(his eyes were moist).
Chotu was squeezing shree's shoulders. They can now fathom how much it had hurt shree.
Rathod:Toh usne kabhi aaisa kaha thi ki uski plastic surgery hui thi kisi incident ki wajah se?
Shree: Nahi sir lekin ek baar jab hum camping par gaye thhe. We were woken up by her screams. She was having a nightmare and she was crying.She woke up clinged to liz and me and said just one thing"Don't leave me".
Arjun:Anything you know about that dream?
Shree shook his head:She just remained quiet about it.
Chotu:Sir shayad ye photoshopped ho. Like the face she wants to have or will look better in it.
Shree:Riya har tech se jura kaam mujhse karaati thi. Jab wo college aayi thi uuse maine khud computer ki coaching ki thi. Even the basics. And ye photo genuine bhi lag rahi hai aur puraani and anyway 5 saal pehele tak ye software utna develop nahi hua tha.
Arjun: Aur hum sab jaante hai ki Riya unme se nahi hai jo apna chehra dekhkar uuse nikhaarti rahe.
Rathod:Aur wo words kp ko kaise pata. Wo sirf Riya ne bole thhe.
Arjun: Kahi comm. sir issi raaz ke baare mein baat kar rahe thhe.
Chotu:Sir aap kiski baat kar rahe hai.
(they told them the incident)
Shree:Sir ek cheez toh pakka Kp Riya nahi ho sakti. Itna sab karne ki zurrat woh kabhi nahi karegi.
Rathod:And hamne Riya ki body ko apne saamne jalte dekha tha.She can't be alive.
Arjun slammed his fist on the table at that.
Rathod:Aaj ke liye bus kaafi hai ghar chalte hai isske baare mein kal sochege ya shayad isske baare mein sochne ka fayda hi nahi hai.Shayad kuch raaz wo apne saath lekar chali gayi. Chalo tum sab ko mai tumhe ghar drop kar raha hu.
Arjun:Mere paas gaadi hai aur licence bhi. Chala jaaounga.
Rathod(softly):lekin tu khud jaane ki haalat mei nahi hai naa hi ye log. Chalo.
Rathod dropped everyone home.
Arjun's room,
Looking at the photo, diary, Riya's photo and Roshni's photo.
Roshni mujhe kyu lag raha ki rathod galat keh raha hai. Maano aaisa lag raha hai ki yeh raaz sirf Riya se hi nahi tujhse bhi juda hai.Mujhe pata nahi mai kya karne waala hu ab lekin Riya tere arjun sir iski jur tak to jayega hi.

Let's see udhar bakiyo ke saath kya hua tha.
Sakshi:Arre ye kaha chalta bana. Ab tum charo toh batao ki tum saare silent mode mein kyu chale gaye.
Rathod:(in strict tone)Drop it. Tum teeno ko aaj kunal ke saath jaana hoga. I am sorry.Mujhe rawte se baat karni hogi. Main kunal ko message kar deta hu.(He left the room)
Liza: Specky tu uss college waali Riya ki toh baat nahi kar raha.
Shree:(his voice was heavy)Liza plz drop it. I will tell later.(He followed Rathod with chotu in tow.)
Aayesha:Ye sab kya ho raha hai yaha. Why are they so affected by kp? Usne toh sirf himmat karke Arjun sir advice ki.
Sakshi:Riya ki baat kaha se aagayi.Liza tu kis riya ki baat kar rahi thi.
Liza: Wo specky or meri college friend thi. Dono best friends thhe.
Saakshi:Ye gutthi toh sulajhne ki jagah aur ulajh rahi hai. Mera siir phat raha hai. Chal ghar chalte hai. Warna Kunal hame yahi

chor jaayega.
All three went down.

Here Kp and kunal,
Kunal:Tumhaare prof. bade gyaani hai.
Kp:(lightly shaking her head)Hai nahi thhe. He was murdered right in front of my eyes. And gyaani i don't know but you can say he was eccentric genius.Einstein ke bhi baap thhe.
Kunal:So tumhaara ghar kaha hai.
Kp:Aapko chinta karne ki zarooorat nahi mai chali jaungi..(saw Kunal's stern gaze) accha thik hai aap chod do.
Kunal mv:Yes i am gonna have some alone time with her.(beep on his phone. Read Rathod's message.)
Kunal:Shit
Kp:Kya hua.
Kunal:Nothing. Wo umm...mobile ki battery low ho gayi. Hamare saath baaki 3 girls bhi jaayegi.
Kp:(one eyebrow raised with a smirk not at all buying the lie)Oookaaay.
Kunal mv.:Dat teriki. Ek mauka milaa tha. Uggh. Bhagwan meri love life se aapki kya dushmani hai.

I know this is crap but i need time to bbring the story on track. Ek baar exam khatam ho jaane do. Sorry. Plz review each and every review helps the story. Koi bhi suggestion hai woh bhi plz de do. Bye.

Edited by BubliBag - 8 years ago
zubiya92 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update
Cont soon
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome update
poor arjun was missing riya badly 🥺
samjun & choree was sad thinking abt riya missing her badly 😭
they found pic in riya's diary its look like riya but it wasn't her 😕
hope they will find out abt riya
loll kunal trying his luck with KP but his bad luck couldn't get time alone with her 😆
continue plz
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome
Continue soon
Good luck for exams
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Posted: 9 years ago
I think think its kp's pic..
Ab toh Arjun Sara mamla jaan ke hi rahega..
Plz continue soon
Thanks 4 pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome!!!
Samjun n choree r more near to d truth...
Hope dey recognize kp soon ...
N den can reach riya!!!!
Poor kunal...
Continue soon
Thnx for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome
loved it
thnx for pm
cont soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow its too good dear

Conti soon

Thanx 4 p.m

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