Arakshi SS - Phir Le Aya Dil - Last chapter & Epilogue 03/07

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Shravani / Arohi

@skrafty

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#21

Res//Unres

Yay!!!!!!!

Me first🥳🥳

Awesome update

Loved it

Amazing

Arjun already missing piya

Truly now only few times they all will be together

(I'm also moving out in few days and my parents and chotu bro are giving same reactions)

Loved the emails between Piya and Siddie

Their friendship is adorable

Siddie Piya ki yaad mein devdas ban gaya😆😆

Little Pari is shooo cute

Loved her

Is Siddie upto something? ???

Interesting

And The second part

It was superb

Loved Arakshi

Can't wait to read more

Waiting for the next part

Continue soon

Edited by skrafty - 10 years ago

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Devangana

@Devangana

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#22

Thanks for the pm. Waiting for the next part.

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TereLiyeMINU

@TereLiyeMINU

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#23

''Sometimes it takes sadness to know happiness,noise to appreciate silence and absence to value presence''...😊

seriously no matter how much we fight,make mess and pull hairs and legs sometimes...siblings and best friends can never have any substitute.Home has the sense of security and unfathomable love which no place in the universe can provide.The possessiveness of papa,loving arms and kisses of mama and deals between siblings to clean the room when expecting a visitor( just to show we are always disciplined.😉😉 ) ...the charm never fades.

again it was prodigious.paintings and smell of acrylic colours ...total ''camlin'' setting.Wink

song selection -- one of my favs.so thanks for that.

keep your writing spirits high and continue soon.👏👏

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anitasharma

@anitasharma

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#24

Awesome update
loved the bond between siddie and pari
siddie and piya are always cute
waiting for next update

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fly.high

@fly.high

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#25

Phir zarre zarre mein deedar aaya hai
Phir zarre zarre mein deedar aaya hai

Behad aur beshumaar aaya hai ...

haayeee...u used this one song...and His voice made me crazy enough to forget the whole update .. oh god... how much I love him... *sigh*

I had to read the 1st part again to get a grip...

now ...

The Arjun's POV and that of piya reminded me of my own situation..I m staying away from home...and trust me its very difficult to cope with the homesickness at times...
*sobs* *missing papa*

u have already got me to love siddie way too much...and this update made me fall for him even more...he us badly missing piya...

the second part...

it was so beautifully written...u know...this is the thing about u ritu...even if u write a whole update full of romance...still it doesn't seem to appear even remotely Clichy or cheesy...it didn't lose the charm ever...that's why I call u Nicholas sparks...coz apart from him I don't find this quality in any other romance genre writer...

( though Durjoy Datta is an exception *blushes*...)

lovely part... tempted for more...continue soon...

love
Birdie

PS: would like to read more on piya and siddie...its a request ...

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Humairaa

@Humzy

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#26

wow beautiful update

loved it

very nicely written

cont soon

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sairam175

@sairam175

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#27

Awesome part

Con soon

Thanks for pm

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kunchu

@kunchu

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#28

It seems I missed commenting in the firt part

sorry Ri

And here I loved it a lot

Pari Sid rishta hai badi cute

and ri... u r digging yr grave

reason private me bathathi hu

and the second half.. really ae is just numbers for them

loved it re

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Snehajain

@Snehajain

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#29

Awesome update...

Arjun has already started missing Piya...😃😃😃

Arjun dont want to think about future...😃😃😃

LOL...Poor Siddie...Sammy usko bohat pareshan kar rahi hai...😆😆😆

Aditi toh Arjun pe fida ho gayi...😆😆😆

Piya is missing her family but she is stick to her decision...👏👏👏

Sammy Piya ka badla le rahi hai...😆😆😆

Siddie sach mein devdas ban gaya hai...😆😆😆

I just loved that bargaining session...😆😆😆

Pari's sketchbook is sooo important for Siddie...😃😃😃

Pari is so cute...I want her...

Liked Arakshi & their sleep walking...😆😆😆

Continue soon...Thanks for PM...

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Areesha

@Areesha566

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#30

Awww that was soo cute and shweet
Love it ritu
You explain every line and emotion so beautifully
Ummh I wanna say more but mere cell ki battery is down *sigh*
Have to go but please you continue soon
We are waiting