ARAKSHI:MERE HUMDUM. (chap 5 updated, pg 10)

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Posted: 10 years ago

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nice start
did sakshi really added salt in arjun's tea 😆
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MERE HUMDUM

CHAPTER 3

As soon they appear at entrance.She greets them with smile.Her smile and her soft gestures makes them love her even more every time she comes in sight.Guests were looking happy and mesmerized by the surrounding but were surprised.This happens every year for them.

Girl : Kese hain ap sab?

Radha: (guest)Hum theek hain.

She distributes some gifts to every one after dinner.The party lasts till 10 o clock at night and then the time to farewell to guests.

Guest: RAM RAM madam ji.

Girl : RAM RAM kaka.

They thank her to arrange such party for them and giving them respect.Girl thank them that they always stand by her side.they assure her that they will always be with her whatever may happen. as she cares for them as well.

The party was for the labours of her company in order to appreciate them,to make them happy and forget their pains at least for sometime.and to show that they are important part of her world.According to her labours are are a key part of the grounds on which it had stood Companies.This tradition, which was started by his grandfather and his father played,now she is on the same way today as they have been.

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Morning in ETF:

Sakshi : Hi guyz.

Arjun: Ho gai tumhari subha chalo late sahi magar yad agaya k ap ko office bhi ana hai.Reports kahan hain.

Sakshi : Ye lo reports. Arjun wo kya hai na kal rat main salman khan ki itni achi movie arahi thi kay main dekhne beth gai to subha der se ankh khuli.

Arjun : Be serious Sakshi ye ETF hai mela nhi laga hai k jab chaho ajao jb chaho jao.

Sakshi : khadoos.

IN CAFETERIA:

Ayesha: Sakshi tu Arjun sir ko khadoos keh rhi thi.Agar wo sun lete to,or wo sahi keh rhe the yar tu 2 gante late ayi hai kb se reports k intezar main bethe the.

Sakshi : To to or dant parh jati or kya us ki to hobby hai Sakshi ko dantna.

Shree : to khare khare tera court marshal ho jata. Tu ne to chotu ka bhi record tor diya wo to khali adha ghanta late hota hai.

liza : Aye specky kuch bhi mat bolo tum or jao tumhare bache ro rhe hain.

Everyone's eyes spread in wonder.

Chotu: aila aisa kab hu re shree tere bache.

Shree : Shut up liza.Faltoo baton k ilawa kuch ata hi nhi hai tumhai.

Liza : Really specky.to jo dead bodies utha ke le atay ho un ka postmortem jadu se ho jata hai.

Sakshi: Shree bache.She interupts them before they catch their usual tom and jerry fight.

Shree : kya sakshu tu bhi.

Shree left from there making faces.as he left they inquire her about what she said.

Liza :(casually) Kuch nhi yar wo specky ne kuch gadgets charging pe lgae the lab main beep kar rhe hain full charge ho gaye hain may be.

Trio broke into laughter...

The day was light there was not any new case.The day was over doing paper work of some cases.some panding works were choosen to put to the ends.

Edited by khanmisha28 - 10 years ago

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sisodia_shefali

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Posted: 10 years ago

#38

nice update
who is this girl who gave party 🤔

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Posted: 10 years ago

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MERE HUMDUM

CHAPTER 4

ETF morning 9:30

Ayesha: Hello Insp. Ayesha kapoor ETF.Deadbody kahan ok. sir ABC hostel main deadbody mili hai murder case.

AT COLLEGE HOSTEL

Sameer: kisi ne lash ko hath to nhi lgaya.Sb se pehle kis ne dekha ise.

Raghav(student): kisi ne hath nhi lgaya sir.Sb se pehle main ne dekha tha ise bulane aya tha.ander aya to ye dekha or princial ko inform kr diya.

Sameer : GOOD.dekha kisi ko yahan se bhadte ya kuch pta hai kon kr skta hai e kisi se koi larai jaghra is ka.

Teacher : Nhi sir ye to bohat calm bacha tha,bohat brilliant tha parhai main, sports main bhi, scholarship bhi mili thi ise.

Arjun : Shree body forensic bhejo.or ap sab kahan the jb ye hua to.kisi ne is ki awaz nhi sunni.

Student : sir hum sab neeche hi the pta hi nhi chala ye kb hua.

A Boy was hanging from shower pipe upside down and head was drowned in water filled tub.

After hard work of 3 days case was solved.The boy saw physics teacher selling drugs to hostel students so to keep his secret safe he killed the boy with help of goons.Teacher was beaten by Arjun .he had narrow escape from death.Chotu was trying hard to stop him.

Sameer : Arjun choro use use.Sirf barbadi hai tmhara gussa.Tumhare gusse ki waja se aj rosh...

He left his words incomplete but it was well known tha he is bl;aming Arjun fo roshini's death.Arjun immediately leave him and quickly leave the hostel.

Memories never take permission.They are owners of their owm will.They sometimes make heart bloom and sometime leave a void in heart.Sometimes these are sweet and sometimes nothing is bitter then these memories.Sometimes they fade with time and sometimes they become more haunted,harmful and more deep.

Face of smiling,playing and happy Roshini come in front of his eyes as she is right infront of him as he tries to touch her she vanish in air.and the next second he see her stabbed once twicw and thrice mercilessly and finally dead.

Ankhon se ojhal hoti nhi tasweer teri.

Nazron main samai rehti hai.

These memories never fade with time,the pain increases day by day ,hour by hour and minute by minute.They are enough rough to injure his soul so deeply that nw their marks seems to be part of him.

YAD-E-MAAZI AZAB HAI YA RAB

CHEEN LE MUJH SE HAFIZA MERA

Edited by khanmisha28 - 10 years ago