ARAKSHI:MERE HUMDUM. (chap 5 updated, pg 10)

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MERE HUMDUM


CHARACTERS :1-Ek pagalpan hai , junoon hai , or pyar bhi ,toofan hai per shant bhi , guroor hai per mugroor nhi , dil ki dharkan hai or jan bhi , dheemi si muskan hai , galtiyon ko maaf krna or galat se larna adaat hai,virasat hai or kaam bhi , baba ki guriya nhi , taqat hai or talwar bhi , ek veer ka nishan nishan hai , sadgi us ki pehchan hai , zara sa sanjeeda mizaj hai SAKSHI ANAND nam hai.

2- Zimmedar hai lekin zara sa badmash hai , hansmukh hai or gusse ka naam o nishan nhi , zara milla lad bhi or pari dant bhi , pyara hai or khass bhi , zara shokh sa mizaj hai , ARJUN SURYAKANT RAWTE nam hai.

3- Rest team is as shown.

4-Some well known characters are added.




PROLOGUE



IN CID BURUE:

Daya: Chalo Abhijeet aj tumhai ghar main chor deta hoon.

Abhijeet :Are mere pas gari hai to.
Daya: Han per aj sath main chalte hain kai dino se is case k chakkar me theek se bat bhi nhi ki.

Abhijeet: Han zara pecheeda to tha case chalo chalte hain kal phir pick bhi karna parega gari to yahan hogi na.


The night is as dark as black itself.there is no sign on moon.It seems the light is afraid to come here.As long eye can see either dark was to be seen or rows of trees wrapping dark around them. Don't know since when they are standing here there branches are now hugging the branches of the trees on the other side of the road.They have came such near that they have have formed a shed on the road as if their aim is to protect the road from scorching sun and keep them cool in their bosom bearing all the hot sun rays on themselves.
IN CAR:
Abhijeet : Kesi sunsan sadak pe gari le aye ho yar.kitna andhera hai yahan pe.sadak ke dono taraf jungle hi jungle dikh raha hai.

Daya: to tumhain or kya dekhna hai boss. wese ye bike wala araha hai na peeche ise hi dekh lo tum.ye lo boss tumhain company dene ek or agaya.

Abhijeet: Aj ho kya raha hai aj sabhi Kaam se der se lot rhe hain kya.

Daya:Chalo ab to sunsan ki shikayat bhi khatam ho gai hogi tumhari wese kaho to Tarika ko le aein.

Abhijeet: Nhi shreya theek rhe gi.

Both were buzy in their gossip not knowing what the time has planned for them.

(seeing through side mirror)Daya kuch hai is doosre wale bike rider k pas yar.
Their duty kept them awake till midnight.They took responsibility to take care of their country and country men which they have to fulfil at any cost.

BOTH LOOK BEHIND just in flip of eyes the dagger was in the first bikers stomach.He fall from the bike and in a minute lay dead on the ground.the second biker then come near and check him and snatch his mobile.

Both insp. seeing this come out of the car
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Abhijeet : pakro ise Daya,bhagne na paye khoon kiya hai is ne.
Daya :ye kya kiya tm ne maar diya tum ne isi masoon ko.

Biker come near them and tear boths jacket.Both are shocked by this act but the one coming up had more more intensity.
Just a button was pressed and baaang...

...A BLAST...




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