T4:Jiya Jale..(completed)

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ClumsyAgent

@ClumsyAgent

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#231

Oh such a nice ending 👏
Yaar hasa hasa ke marne ka plan hai kya 😆
Arjun has become over possessive...
Riya aur Sam ko bhai bahen banana chahta tha aur khud ke khoda hua kua mai khud hi gir gaya...lol
Arnav lage raho beta ekdam apne bap ke raste pe chal ne lage ho 🤣
Bechara chotu 😆
Par koi nahi koyi aur mil gaye ga 😉
I really enjoyed the hole story
Will love to read another ariya story written by u 😃
Plz jara soch na iss bare mai 😳

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angelshah

@angelshah

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#232

loved it
perfect ending of beautifull story
i loved hole rakhi thing
bechara chotu
ridhi & arnav part i like the most

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Alka

@alka_07

Navigator

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Posted: 10 years ago

#233

awesome
lovely ending
loved it
Arjun sam ko Riya se rakhi bandhvana chahta tha pr use khud hi Ayesha se rakhi bandhvani padi 🤣 🤣
poor chotu
Arnav bhale hi apni Ma pr gaya ho pr flurt krne meto apne baap pr gaya he 😉 😉
happy ending
thanx for pm