Arakshi TS - Fragile Hearts - Part 2/2 Pg 3 - Page 2

Originally posted by: Humzy

wow beautiful start

loved kit

very nicely written

just left me speechless

how do u do it

every time u write something it just gets better

purely fab

keep it up

ps i hope i haven't gone on a bit

Originally posted by: Armagadon

Oh My God...

Happy Happy Happy Happy Birthday Avni ji... 🥳🤗 Just a week back from Valentine's eh.. ab samaj main aaya itna romance aaya kaha se... *dimaag ki batti jal gayi*

Ab kya karoon, ji kehne ki aadat ho gayi hai...

You see am a really sweet respectful girl *flutter eyelashes* oh yeah, innocent too! So... I pray ki iss janamdin pe where we all are bestowed with such a wonderful lady as you, you get every inch of happiness that you deserve!

From pappi and jhappi from louuved ones (I know you prefer the former... hihi *giggles*) to stupendous success in your career.

May God bless you with every bit of happiness which you so deserve!

Oh haan, mera ashirvaad yaad hai na? Dudo Nahaya Puto phalo waala *wink*

Haan haan putri woh manokaamne jaldi puri kar dena *rofl*

Jokes apart, on a serious note, I truly wish that you have a blissful life with your family and a fantabulous career. May the Lord bless you with sound health and harmony.

Loads of Love,

Twadda pyaara innocent si Shree :)

By the way was thinking about a present... actually.. what do you think of two ASRs together with KKG and SA? Asking opinion you know *wink* Psst, first draft is ready... did brainstorming with ur KK too... hihi

And yeah Ritz... now time to comment on your story...

ki re tui... tui janish amake koto comment kora baaki aache! I wish I could send a voice message, feeling tooo lazy to type out the innumerable words of wonder for every comment... hehe...

Aah... soo beautiful...

The first meet and development of feelings was so so so gorgeous! I was all "awww" while reading how the louuveee happened...

Oh shit... when the child came I thought of two things

- She is a single mom...

- Adopted child

When I got to know it's her baby and oops, she is married.. I thought of two things.

- Husband is a piakkar and hits her

- Forced marriage, finding liberation.

Grr... Men and their patience, they end up having chickpea sized brains when it comes to keeping patience I tell you!

Couldn't he have waited for an explanation? Nope... he had to run away... in anger... grrr

Lastly when they met again... I loved the way Sakshi lashed out at Arjun, he deserved it.

Well Mr. Rawte truly has a lot to make up for... a lot.

Continue soon re, I am running to get complete the other story ke comments!

Such a beautiful story indeed, and oh... loved the banner man *whistle* aar koto... aar koto shundor idea aache tor mathaye bol to *am just wishing for moi birthday* hihi... iktu greedy hote theek acche na?

Loads of love,

Shreee

Originally posted by: anitasharma

Nice start
very well written
waiting for next part

Originally posted by: _Nikita_

Awwwsssmmm Start
Loved it
It was Wonderful
Waiting for next part
Thanks for the PM

Originally posted by: skrafty

Awesome start

Loved it

How do u manage to leave me speechless every time with your stories

Men and patience are two ends of the world

He should have at least given her a chance to explain

And then they meet again

Hope this time things get better

Waiting for the next part

Continue soon

Originally posted by: PoohLover

First of all happy birthday again avniii,have a great one ahead and enjooy loads...do all crazy things possible hehe 😆

Dekho its your birthday and we got gifts as well... a story from rituuu 😃😃isiliye thank you huh 😉😉 may you have birthdays everyday soo that we get stories or may we have birthdays everyday and then you'll write for us 🤪😆😆

Ohkay enough of my bakbak and back to the story hihi 😆😆

Rituuu rituuu superb story,i loove how you've shown the way arakshi met and how they were attracted to each other and how in sucha short span they became soo close to each other and fell in love

Arjun is best knows for his gussa and thus when he got to know about sakshi son he reacted in impulse and somehow we can say he is right but then he should have listened to sakshi...but but no love stories are complete without some action and distance i guess 😉😉

Awesooome start...am very very eager to read next part hehe...continue soon and biig hugs to you🤗🤗

Originally posted by: EashaYousufzai

Superb start didi..

Loved it to the core..

Superbly written..

I really loved the theme..

Can we get a pic of the little one?

Originally posted by: Snehajain

Awesome start...

Arakshi met in Raisha's wedding...😃😃😃

They came close to each other...😃😃😃

They confessed...😃😃😃

But they separated bcoz of misunderstandings...

Now they met after 4 years...😃😃😃

But Sakshi has taken divorce from her husband...but Why??😕😕😕

Continue soon...Thanks for PM...

Originally posted by: kunchu

Moi late again

When will i sudharify??

Next year maybe

As usual beautiful my Ri

The meet n every scene was awesomwa

I wonder when the next update is

😉

Happy bday genie