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Posted: 10 years ago
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PART 1 A

It was a bright sunny morning in Mumbai in the house of Aisha & Sameer all are getting ready to move out to their daily work. Aisha served the breakfast to sameer & aarohi & after a while school bus gave horn at the gate. Aisha & Sameer bid bye to Aarohi & send her to school.

Sameer finished his breakfast quickly & Aisha was having her breakfast. Later after getting ready when aisha started to arrange the house before leaving to office suddenly she noticed a file in her room named "Confidential" she looked at it doubtfully & wanted to open it .

Suddenly Sameer snatched it from behind & said "Aisha kya kar rahi hoo?"

Aisha looked at sameer & said "ye kaun si file hai sameer?"

Sameer said "ye tumhare kaam ki nahin hai ise rehne do aisha"

Aisha said protesting "par sameeer .."

Sameer said cutting her short "Aisha please ye ek special data hai jo mujhe hand over karne ke liye diya gaya hai its highly confidential kal IG sir ne diya hai.. ye ek baar hand over ho jaaye main tumhe sab kuch bataaunga filhaal ke liye chale kyuki late ho gaya hai"

Aisha smiled & nodded saying "OK par aisa kya hai sameer ki aapne ETF ko aur yaha tak mujhe bhi nahin bataya?"

Sameer said "kyuki hamaare peeshe main kuch cheeze apno se bhi chupaani padti hai aisha usse laakho zindigiyaa judi hoti hai aisha hum usme koi chance nahin lee sakte naa"

Seeing sameer serious aisha said "sameer aap to serious ho gaye maine to aise hi pooch liya tha aur main jaanti hoon par mujhe kabhi kabhi chinta hoti hai aapki ..you know I am really proud of you ki aapko aise zimmedaari milti hai it proves ki aap apne kaam main kitne acche hai"

Sameer smiles at her & said "accha ab chale par dhyaan rahe ETF main iska zikra kisi se nahin karna its really important"

Aisha smiles & nods at him & says " Sure Main khayaal rakhungi" Sameer too smiled back & they made their way to office. After a small drive they reached at office & started their normal work.

Aisha wished all her friends & Sameer too all settled down in the conference room & Sameer started the briefing saying "guys aaj apne pending reports poori kar loo main aur arjun IG sir se milne jaa rahe hai unhone kisi khaas discussion ke liye bulaaya hai shayad koi high priority case hai isliye make sure aap jitni jaldi ho sake ye sab complete kar loo"

All nodded at him & then he said turning to Arjun "Arjun hame jaldi nikalna hoga lets go"

Arjun nodded & both went to meet IG at his office.

After a while shree said striking the conversation "Aisha kya baat hai aaj Rathore sir thoda serious sound kar rahe the kya koi khaas case hai?"

Aisha said "Pata nahin shree ye to unki meeting ke baad hi pata lag paayega par mujhe abhi kuch pata nahin hai"

Shree said teasing her "kya aisha rathore sir tujhe bhi nahin batate hai kya?"

Aisha said glaring at him "shree tum bhi na jab dekho shuru ho jaate hoo kuch aise baate hoti hai jo us level pe unhe akeele deal karni padti hai aur wo humse share nahin kar sakte"

Chotu said in a soft mutter "shree tune aisha ka naam bilkul sahi rakhha hai ye vakai rathore sir ki aastha hai" & both started laughing aloud.

Riya said growling on them "tum loog kya paagloo ki tarha has rahe hoo aur kya khusur fusur kar rahe hoo?"

Liza said "inka aisa hi chalega riya leave it inko samjhaane ka koi faayda nahin hai"

Riya said "haan khair tum loog bhool mat jaana ki kal mere yaha party hai tum sabko aana hai aur aisha uncle aunty aur aarav anu ko bhi invitekar dena meri taraf se waise main dono ko call kar chuki hoon so please tum ek baar unhe yaad dila dena"

Aisha smiled & said "sure main yaad kara doongi aur hum sab aayenge waise bhi tumhari 6th wedding anniversary hai to hum ye mauka kaise miss kar sakte hai"

Shree said "Haan kal ka din to yaadgaar hai 6 saal pehle aaj hi ke din riya k qila fateh kiya tha" & winks at her.

Riya said totally pissed off "shree lagta hai mujhe arjun ko boolna padega kitum .."

Shree looked at riya horrified & said "meri maa please arjun sir se mat kehna last time teri vajah se poori 2 raat jaagna pada tha"

Aisha said "to tum galat logo se panga kyu leete hoo shree ?" & aisha & riya along with liza started laughing.

After that Aisha said "guys 2 cases ka paperwork pending the jaldi nibta lete hai warna tumhe pata hai na" all nodded & resumed their paper work & started working.

Here at the IG office in the meeting IG welcomed both arjun & sameer & started his conversation saying "Arjun & Rathod tum dono sooch rahe hoge ki maine achanak tumhe yaha kyu bulaaya hai ek important detail hame pata chali hai.. hamaare defense ne abhi ek bilkul new technique ka system banaaya hai jise naam diya hai VAYU' ye itni chooti teez aur khatarnaak hai ki radar bhi ise catch nahin kar paate ..

iska official launch abhi 15 din main hooga with details par hame khabar mili hai ki kuch anti social elements iske peeche hai aur iski details sameet ise churaana chahte hai..hamne saare details for security hamaare ek trusted officer ko di hai aur iske parts ko assemble karke launch ke liye laaya jaayega agle week so main chahta hoon kitum dono iski security ki zimmedaari loo"

Sameer said "sure sir we will hamare rehte koi kuch nahin kar sakta"

IG smiled & said "haan main jaanta hoon par joo loog uske peeche pade hai wo loog bahut khatarnaak hai main chahta hoon ki ek baar tum unke baare main acche se jaan loo" IG calls someone inside & a tall handsome guy comes inside in early thirties.

IG introduces this man saying "Guys meet Saleem qureeshi hamaare undercover specialist ye kaafi time se kaam kar rahe hai aur ye hame unke baare main information deenge"

Saleem smiled & said "Thanks sir main aap sabko bata doon ki jin logo ki main baat kar raha hoon wo loog poori jee jaan se kosshish karenge ise churaane ki unka plan bhare launch pe attack karna bhi ho sakta hai ya fir secretly in details ko churaana

ye loog isse pehle poore Assam border , Gujrat , Delhi aur Maharashtra ke kuch choote ilaako main active the aur inhoone wahah kuch badi waardaato ko anjaam diya hai par ab ye khabar aayi hai ki insab ka movement Mumbai ki taraf achanak ho gaya hai aur iska reason simple hai ki inhe iski khabar mil chuki hai so we all have to be very careful"

All nodded & sameer said "par inhe ye khabar kahah se mili hai?"

Saleem smiled & said "gaddaro ki kami nahin hai sir mujhe jaise hi pata chalega wo aadmi fir zinda nahin bachega"

Sameer smiled & saleem shared some more details with them along with his contact so that they can be in touch. After a while saleem took leave & arjun was attending an important call from his informer & was out of the room.

IG said "Rathod I hope tumhe andaaza ho gaya hoga ki situation kya hai aur kya ho sakta hai isliye maine wo details bharosa karke tumhe di hai "

Sameer said "I assure you sir ki aapne mujhe jo details di hai wo poori tarah se safe hai aur ye sab soochkar hi maine unhe ghar pe rakha hai taaaki kisi ka shaq na jaaye"

IG said "I trust you Rathod aur main jaanta hoon ki koi problem nahin hogi par jinhe ye saari details pata hai ho sakta hai unhe ye bhi pata hoo ki details kiske paas hai shayad is vajah se tumhari.."

Sameer said cutting in between "sir please hum sab sipaahi hai aur ye sab hamare kaam ka hissa hai aur kya aapko mujhpe bharosa nahin hai"

IG said "Nahin aise baat nahin hai par tumhari family.." suddenly arjun entered the room & IG stopped in between . Bit later Arjun & sameer took leave from IG & made their way to ETF Office.












SCROLL DOWN FOR PART 1 B 😊

Edited by --GOLD-- - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#22



PART 1 B

In the SUV Arjun asked sameer "kya hua sam IG sir kya keh rahe the?"

Sameer said ignoring "kuch nahin bas aarohi aur aisha ke baare main pooch rahe the ..khair wo chodo kal teri shaadi ko 6 saal poore ho jaayenge riya ne khoob tayyiyaari ki hogi kal ki"

Arjun smiles & said "Haan party rakhi hai aur sabko bulaya hai uncle, aunty aarav anu sabko subah call kiya tha usne"

Sameer said with a smile "aur hum sab zaroor aayenge ..waise ridhima se bahut din se nahin mila main"

Arjun said "haan tujhe yaad kar rahi thi wo" sameer smiles back & they reached back office talking casually. Entire day pass in a huff & after a long day all retired to their homes. Sameer & arjun had already briefed the team regarding the new case as they required proper support.

Here after leaving the office sameer & aisha went to aishas house to meet avinaash & avantika & pick aarohi as in their absence she use to take care of her. Avantika opened the door & let them in.

Aisha asked her mother "maa aarohi soo gayi kya?"

Avantika said with a smile "haan soo gayi khaana khaa ke"

Aisha smiled & said "thanks maa aapki vajah se mujhe kabhi aarohi ki fikar nahin hoti "

She smiled & said "haan mujhe pata hai tere paas aur bahut si cheeze hai fikar karne ke liye isliye aarohi ki fikar mujhpe chood de"

Aisha smiled at her mother & sameer said "maa wo riya ki call aayi thina aapke paas kal ke liye humse bhi bola hai aapko khaas kar invite karne ke liye"

Avantika said "haan beta subah caal aaya tha uska anu ka bhi call aaya tha hum sab jaayenge waise bhi sabse mile kaafi time ho gaya hai"

Sameer smiled & said "to theek hai maa hum sab kal saath nikalenge aap anu aur aarav ko bhi khabar kar deejiye sab yahi se niklenge"

She smiled & said "Haan kar doongi par tum dono time par aana pata chale tum dono hi gayab ho jaao"

Aisha said "Nahin maa yadi sameer nahin aa paaye to main aa jaaungi" they picked aarohi & went back home.

After having dinner & putting Aarohi to sleep in their room sameer encircled his arms around aisha pulling her bit closer aisha said "kya baat hai aaj mere pati dev bahut romantic mood main hai aisa kya ho gaya?"

Sameer turned aisha towards himself "nahin aisha bas ye sooch raha tha ki main tumhe wo pyar wo samay nahin de paaya jo shayad tumhe dena chahiye tha"

Aisha smiled & said "aisa nahin hai sameer aapko kabhi kya meri kisi baat se aisa kuch laga hai? Main jaanti hoon ki aapka kaam aapki priority hai aur wahi meri bhi aur shayad yahi hamare rishte ki kaamyaabi ki vajah hai ki hum ek doosre ko acchi tarha samjhte hai aur ye faisla mera tha sameer aur mujhe mere faisle par koi pachtaava nahin balki naaz hai main bahut kushkismat hoon ki mujhe aap mile"

Sameer said pulling her more closer "Haan main jaanta hoon par kabhi kabhi lagta hai ki main apni zimmedaariya nahin nibha paaya tumhe aur aarohi ko har waqt aise saaye main jeena .."

Cutting her short she said "sameer please aap aisa kyu soochte hai aur na aap kamzoor hai aur na main jo hum ye sab deal nahin kar sakte"

Sameer smiled her & hugged her saying "haan main jaanta hoon isliye to aaj hum kush hai"

Aisha smiled & parted the hug saying "sameer chaliye ab mujhe neend aa rahi hai"

Sameer naughtily tighten his grip around her & asked "itni jaldi hai soone ki hun?"

Aisha giggled & said "haan kyuki mujhe bahut neend aa rahi hai" with that she pushed sameer & ran towards the bed but sameer grabbed her between her arms & said "you know this what I love about you "

Aisha said giggling "accha par aap to kehte ki aapko sabse pyaara aapka kaam hai?"

Sameer said pulling her closer "wo apni jagah hai aur tum apni jagah samjhi" & placed a kiss on her neck.

Aisha said giggling "accha yadi kabhi main hi jaane anjaane main hi aapke aur aapke us pyaar ke beech aa jaau to kya karenge?"

Sameer immediately loose his hold on her & became serious saying "aisha please aaj keh diya hai dubaara mat kehna ek baar jhel chukka hoon main ye sab dubaara shayad nahin jhel paaunga "

Aisha seeing sameer serious said hugging him "please sameer I am sorry maine to bas I didn't mean to hurt you at all"

Sameer replied hugging her back "I know aisha par ab to is tareeke ke mazaak se bhi darr lagta hai" after a while Sameer became normal both husband & wife spend some good romantic moments & then drifted to sleep.

Next morning after following their daily routine both reached office on time & wished arjun & riya on their 6th anniversary. All arranged small celebration in the office caf & after a while started with normal day. There was no critical case so all winded up the work quickly & started to prepare for party in the evening.

In the evening sameer & aisha went to aishas place after picking an apt gift for arjun & riya. Here by the time they reached aishas home Avinaash & avantika were ready too . All four were chatting when anu & aarav too entered the house.

Anu said chriply "hi di Hi jiju kaise hoo? Aur meri gudiya bhi aayi hai"

She said hugging aisha & aarohi" Aarohi said cutely "Maasi aap bahut acche lag rahe hoo pal inte dino baad mile"

Anu said "meri gudiya wo kya hai na aapke mausa ji aur main zara bahar gaye the ghoomne is liye"

Aarav came & took blessings from avantika & Avinash & wished sameer & aisha too saying "di kaise hai aap aur sameer jiju aap kaise hai"

Sameer said "haan hum theek hai aur saali sahiba honey moon se lautne ke baad to rangat hi badal gayi lagta hai chand ki goud main bahut saara shehed (honey) khaaya hai"& winks at her.

Anu said sweetly "Kya jiju khahe ka honey aur kahhae ka moon Moon to jaake baadloo main chip gaya aur honey ko kitaaboo ki deemak khaa gayi" hearing this all started laughing

Sameer asked pointing at aarav "kyu saali sahiba hamare is dushman ne aapka accha khayaal nahin rakha tha kya ? ab mujhko chood ke iske peeche bhaagne ka fal to milna chaahiye na"

Avinash said laughing "tum jija saali ka khatam ho gaya hoo to chale wahah arjun aur riya wait kar rahe hoonge" With that every one walked out of the house to enjoy the party.

After half an hour they reached the house of arjun & riya . They welcomed all of them & all handed gifts & regards to them.

When sameer forwarded the gift to arjun arjun said "tu na meri party main mat aaya kar tujhe pata hai na main koi gift nahin leta "

Sameer said cheekly "accha to kya cash leta hai agli baar wahi launga " aisha & riya giggled at the love between the friends.

Finally party started all enjoyed themselves. Party was on full swing & all were in mood to get rid of all worries. After enjoying the party all took leave back home .

Sameer & aisha after a drive reached home totally exhausted but what they saw after retuning back horrified them guards were dead & the entire house was scattered. Aarohi too got scared & asked her mother "mummy ye sab kaise ho gaya? "









So how was it guys please drop in your comments as I write for you guys so please do let me know all your bashing, feedback & suggestions are more than welcome excuse for typing & formatting errors love you all


Regards Goldie 😊😊

Edited by --GOLD-- - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#23
Res//unres
YAY!!!!!!!
Me first🥳🥳
Awesome update
Loved it
Loved Raesha
Someone ransacked their home😲😲
Ab kya hoga????
Waiting for the next part
Continue soon
Edited by skrafty - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#24
Awesome .,.superb start
Loved it
waiting for the next part
continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#25
Superb chapter
loved it too much
U describe each And every
emotion so lovely
that whybi like your
all stories...
sam ayesha vese bi mere
fav hai... love their moments
their relations trust..jjust
beautiful
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HAPPY REPUBLIC DAY 🤗
A perfect day 4 stat this story 👍🏼 and about the update,AWESOME ,INTERESTING,PERFECT,THRILLING,SCARY and i love it 😳


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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow a new story and that to sasha yipeee...finally you write on sasha...i was really missing and waiting for sasha/ariya stuff from you...Wow dear...It's awesome, blossom, amazing, fantastic, fabulous, super duper, blockbuster, rocking outstanding, freaking, breathtaking and mind blowing update...Just loved it...Awesome...Lovely...Do continue soon...Thanks for the pm...and happy republic day...sorry like button is not working
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Amazing update
What confidential file sameer is hiding from Aisha &etc team?
What happened at sam's house?
Cont.soon
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Awwwsssmmm Update
Loved It
Supperbbb...
Amazing...
What file Sam was hidding from Ayesha...??? Why...???
Loved Sam-Ayesha moments
Cont Sooon
Waiting for next part
Plz PM me
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ahan new ff.. awesome n the title is perfect goldi..
lived the prologue n first..
very very very beautifully written...
aww that two cute little gals arohi n ridhima too cute.. loved them
thanks for the pm
cont soon

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