FF: TUJH PE DIL QURBAAN - II [COMPLETED]

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hi Guys I am back with a new idea of mine to torture you all
. Its been a long time I wanted to write on SASHA my favorite 😳 isliye mann machal raha tha so I planned this story & concept 😆. It is the extension of my story "TUJH PE DIL QURBAAN" you can call it season II of that. It starts from where I ended this story. This story is very close to me so I hope ye aatyachar bhi aap loog jheel lenge 🤔 Hope you all will like this concept & support me. I will post the parts soon & please give your feedback on CS & Prologue given below.





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TUJH PE DIL QURBAAN - II

PROLOGUE


Life is full of test & challenges. There are some or the other challenges that we face in our daily life as these are spice of life It makes a person more stronger, firm & also intelligent enough to deal with things.


Life tests your character, patience & also your will power in many ways & through various situations & people who maintain their character, honesty & patience in the hardships of life are true winners.


There is a saying that "God help those who help themselves" & at the time of such challenges & hardships it's only you can help yourself through your power, faith & your inner conscious.


People who work for defense & Nation are examples to common people that how can they overcome challenges maintaining their cool.

At times God does not only test your character, honesty & patience but also your Love. Love for your Nation, Love for your own people & love for your family & if you have that trust on your love & on your family the bond becomes stronger than before.


At times it's difficult to face test when it hammers on your personal life & emotions as a person can bear everything but becomes weak when person sees his loved ones suffering that too because of the reason that they are connected to you.

At times life take unusual turns al-thou these turns are quite painful & unexpected but they are really learning lessons & after when everything is sorted out they give us a feel of teaching that trust & true love can make anything possible.


Even at the time of crisis your love for our nation & your loved ones give you all the support to bear the pain & such people can pass every test or any complication in their life. So let's see how life plays a game of trust & love & what will be the end of this game.

ISHQ KA JAZBA SABSE PYAARA ISPE NISSAR DIL AUR JAAN

ISHQ YADI WATANSE HO TO BAD JAATI HAI ISHQ KI SHAAN

AYE SARZEEMENE MERE WATAN KI TUJH PE MERA DIL QURBAAN

TERE SAAYE MAIN SUKOON AUR IN LABO PE TERA NAAM

TERE PAANAH HI MAIN GUZRE IS ZINDIGI KE LAMHE TAMMAM

HAR KUSHI GUM FARZ AUR MOHABAAT JUDE HAI TUJHSE

AUR JUDE HAI HAR AANSU AUR MUSKAAN

AYE SARZEEMENE MERE WATAN KI TUJH PE MERA DIL QURBAAN

TUJHKO JO AAYE CHOOKAR UN HAWAAO KO SALAAM

MERE ZEHEN MAIN AAJ TAK SABSE UCCHA HAI TERA MUKAAM

GAR TUJH PE MARE TO MAUT ZINDIGI SE KAM NAHIN

WATAN PE MITNE WAALO KA HAMESHA REHTA HAI BAAKI NISHAAN

AYE SARZEEMENE MERE WATAN KI TUJH PE MERA DIL QURBAAN

ISHQ KA JAZBA SABSE PYAARA ISPE NISSAR DIL AUR JAAN

ISHQ YADI WATANSE HO TO BAD JAATI HAI ISHQ KI SHAAN

AYE SARZEEMENE MERE WATAN KI TUJH PE MERA DIL QURBAAN

Characterization: - The characters are:

ACP Sameer Rathod - Chief of ETF strict but composed, sweet natured n good at heart has a dreadful past which made him lose confidence in love, affection n emotions. His duty is his life n he is orphan lost his parents at very early age. Married to Aisha now & loves her a lot



ACP Arjun Rawte - 2ND in command of ETF married to riya, best friend of Sameer but strict at work




Riya Arjun rawte - Research specialist of ETF Wife of arjun n treats sameer as her brother n wants to see him happy loves her husband arjun a lot n best friend of shree ,liza n chotu



Liza Dcruz - Doctor n forensic expert of ETF a bubbly girl with a smart brain.




Shreekant Sen - Technical expert of ETF n sweet natured boy



Chandrakant Patil - Muscle man n Commando of ETF n sweet nature soft hearted person.



Aisha Sameer Rathod - A strong girl from a middle class family in Mumbai sweet bubbly & full of life helps everyone n has a very strong believe in patriotism n humanity married to sameer & loves her family a lot




Avinash kapoor & Avantika kapoor - Father & Mother of Aisha father is a retired bank manager a simple n good person at heart & Mother of Aisha is sweet house wife loves her family



Aarav Malhotra & Annanya Malhotra - Younger sister of aisha & her husband they got married recently Aarav is a business man & anannya helps her husband




Aarohi Rathod : cute daughter of sameer & aisha she is pampered by all




Ridhima Rawte : cute daughter of Arjun & riya she Is pampered by all




Saleem Quresshi : An undercover specialist who works for his nation.




I will add more characters if required as the story progresses. 😊


So how was it hope u all like it & wait for story to unfold 😊




Edited by --GOLD-- - 10 years ago
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CS N PROLOGUE -- PAGE 1


PART 1 ---- PAGE 4
PART 2 ---- PAGE 13
PART 3 ---- PAGE 20
PART 4 ---- PAGE 27
PART 5 ---- PAGE 33
PART 6 ---- PAGE 39
PART 7 ---- PAGE 45
PART 8 ---- PAGE 49
PART 9 ---- PAGE 56
PART 10 ---- PAGE 63
PART 11 ---- PAGE 70
PART 12 ---- PAGE 76
PART 13 ---- PAGE 83
PART 14 ---- PAGE 91
PART 15 ---- PAGE 97
PART 16 ---- PAGE 104






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Posted: 10 years ago
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NOTE : Guys I will update this FF one or twice in a week depending upon my work & ur response too If u don't find the prologue apt n I have less comments I will stop right here n will not update the parts further I think itna attyachaar kaafi hoga 🤔so please let me know that weather I should continue or not 😊 & If u guys liked it please let me know through your comments & wait for this story to unfold.

One more thing those who have missed the season 1 of this FF I am giving the link you all can have a look & read the season 1 & let me know your views 😳









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Posted: 10 years ago
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Res//unres
Yay!!!!!!
Me first🥳🥳
Awesome prologue
Loved it
Waiting for the first part
Continue soon
Edited by skrafty - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome di
Please do continue soon
Eagerly waiting to read more
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Posted: 10 years ago
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plz continue this story & plz plz send me pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome concept
Love it
Cont soon
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Awwwsssmmm Prologue n CS
Interesting concept
Continue Soon
Waiting for frist part

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Posted: 10 years ago
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beautiful n interesting concept
continue soon

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