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Posted: 10 years ago
#81
Honestly, I was little disappointed when you discontinued Shayad.. n started it all over again in revamped version but I know I am very much glad that you did it or else we wouldn't have got the opportunity to read this shade of Arjun.😛☺️
'ACP Arjun' of your stories are always unique.
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You didn't forget Ayush.🥳
Thank you very much for adding this little champ..🤗
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Have already said much about Radhika-Arjun-Sam relationship in Shayad's thread, I don't have anything new to add.😳
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The little FB of Arjun & Radhika was very sweet.
It bought a huge smile on my face😃
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I don't know if it was intentional or a loophole but it sounded really weird that Mr.Rathod didn't want a working woman as his daughter in law while his own daughter was a working woman & used to live & work in a different city alone far from her family.




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Posted: 10 years ago
#82
just superb
amazing update
thanks 4 pm n continue soonish
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Posted: 10 years ago
#83
WOW...superb update!!
Loved it!!😊
So sorry 4 the late comment!!
Continue soon n thanks 4 the pm!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Reserved for replies..
*Hello... Yep.. I am late.. 😛
Struggling with a strep infection and horrible net speed.. Anyhow.. I didn't want to leave this post reserved.. 😳

@ Rituuu.. Meri soul sautan! You do know I wouldn't be here if not for u guys.. Hai na.. Arakshi ke loouve se bahar nikalne hi nahi deti tum! 😉❤️
Arre bachna kaun chahta hai? 😛
Lol.. and then u blame me.. Main bhool gayi thi... *thud* Smokey white shirt... *I should stop.. Cold meds and drooling! Not good..* 😆😆
Seems nahi.. London transport IS cheaper than ours at times.. atleast it's worth every penny spent!
.😡 Chor.. Lucchhe.. Grrr..
🤣 Anupam Kher.. *Baaharon phool barsaao..* 😆😆 O btw.. Tomorrow on Set Max..What say? 😛 *Our parents will keeel us!* 😆😆

Aww.. yep.. Radhika.. The only reason why i couldn't leave this fic half-way.. Loved Daljeet soo much.. And here too.. 😳
Eh! Na na.. now u know right.. Sameer never misunderstood them.. Well, I shouldn't have added that line.. *facepalm* 😆

Ayush is a real cutie-pie.. Wait till u read more.. You'll love him! 😳
Nooo.. Woh SS ka raam jaane kya hoga... I'm having a terrible block atm.. Someday, I might just derive inspiration from 'you-know-where'.. *Dreamy* 😉
Awwie... Thank u soo much! <3 *tight sautan wala hug* Really appreciate u taking out the time to comment.. Woh bhi itna bada wala.. 😊 ❤️ 🤗

As for my erratic sleep schedules.. Grrr.. *It's called khudke pair pe axe maarna*


@ Lol.. Yep K.. It's a sign.. Pack your bags and come off! 😉 Socho toh kitna mazza aayega.. Marine drive se Gundi ko dhakka de denge *Looks around.. Husssh!*
Awwie.. thank you soo much for making those characters your own.. 🤗

Errm yep.. And you'll know more soon.. It's not the ishqwala love that haunts him.. It's the guilt that he couldn't save Roshni and couldn't control the mess that happened later.. It's more of the loneliness that crumbles him..
But... There's always a ray of hope na.. Aur idhar toh kitne saare hain.. 😉
Lool.. K.. don't talk abt food.. You really make me wanna throw my ghaas-phoos out of the window! *facepalm*


@ Nethravathi : Hey.. It's okay.. You don't have to apologise.. What matters is that you're here.. 😊
Nopes.. No Ayesha here.. I had started this fic long back when Ayesha hadn't been introduced.. And I really wanted Arjun and Rathore to be related.. 😳
Very soon.. Misunderstanding door hogi.. But best buddies hain na.. Ek se ziddi.. 😛
Yep! Coz they're a family.. And u may be mad at your family, u never stop loving or caring for them, na..
Thanks so much.. Lots more waiting to happen.. 😊

@ _Nikita_ : Thank u soo much.. 😊
yep! They doo.. Their relationships are really very old to break that easily..
Glad u like it.. More coming up..

@ NainaSM : Arre koi nahi.. 😳
It isn't.. And so they need someone to open their eyes.. Isliye toh Mrs. Rathore coming soon.. 😉 And someone else too..
Thanks 😃


@ Asyalover : Thank you.. 😃


@ smanchik : Pehle toh, don't call yourself a fan... Main koi celebrity hoon kya.. *laughs* 😉
Really glad you're here.. Thanks!


@ Devangana : Thanks.. 😃 Lots more coming up!


@ drunkiiebabe : Thank you.. 😃


@ Farheen : Pehle toh hass lene do.. FARHEEN.. 😆😆😆
Hey Bhagwan.. You keep your Piya2 jap out of here.. Samjhi.. ya samjhaun? *Evil grin*
But haaan.. KKHH milne ke full chances, hain.. 😉
See.. Main tumse kitnaaa saaraaa louuve karti hoon... 🤗 *Crushes*


@ _Shivani_ : Thanks a lot dear.. 😃


@ Armagadon : Hey Shree.. Pehle toh thank you soo much jee..
Aree.. Kaahe ke woh din.. I'm a geneticist. A medical researcher, to be precise, soon to register for a PhD.. Toh humare liye.. Exams and books kabhi 'woh din' nahi honge.. 😛😆😆

Lol.. WIcked question, ha.. Yep, I do have a Sasuma.. But fortunately, I don't have a hubby yet.. Filhaal fiance hai..
Bhaisahab gave up long back trying to sudhrofy me.. *Wicked grin* He knows better than to be a kabab mein haddi between me and my virtual louuves.. 😛
Oh and haan.. He's read some of those..😆 Even the uncensored stuff that isn't here.. 😆😆 but kya faayda!
Like I said, mere aur Arjunwa ke beech no haddi ke liye jagah at all.. 😉


Aah! About Arakshi.. You couldn't have put it any more perfectly.. Yep.. It's one of the reasons for the revamp.. I wanted to try a hand at something I haven't done so far..
Kya? Watch out.. 😉
Sakshi is already into the picture.. The title should say it all.. Samajh jaaoi, once u read the next one.. 😛
Oh cool.. Radhe it is then.. I have a friend by the same name too.. *Hi-5!*
As for why Sameer left Radhika, it;s the usual.. Tragedy strikes and trust wavers and then men act in the most irrational ways possible.. Wahi hua..


Awwwie.. That quote says it all.. Soo true! And if you are a big sister or have one, you'll know how life is.. Little brothers are always our first loves!

Hahaha.. That baby is sooo cute.. <3
Thank u soo much, my dear..
Glad you're following it..
Those words mean a lot, even if I don't say much.. 😃


@ misakiscarlet : No no.. Sameer doesn't doubt it one bit.. You'll know more when u read the next..
Thanks soo much.. Yep, I can't wait for all of them to be in frame either.. Very soon, hopefully! 😃


@ anitasharma : Thank u soo much.. 😃


@ sairam175 : Thank u so much.. Yep.. More answers in the next chapters..
Ayush is Liza's nephew who lives with her.. That cutie has a back story too..
Sameer blames Radhika for the same reason why he blames Arjun.. Actually, he's just too messed up with emotions..
As for Sakshi.. Yep.. More in the next one..
Aargh! I understand it's really confusing for now.. Will sort things out one by one.. 😃


@ yams.s : Oh yesh! I didn't want to do it willingly, to be honest.. But I needed to do away with a lot of unfinished and stagnant tracks, which wasn't possible with Version 1.. Hence the revamp!
Oh and I thought of something very different from Arjun-Sia for Arakshi.. And hence Sakshi.. And Arjun will be veryy different here as well..

Yep! I hope you do.. Thank you.. 😃


@ Areesha566 : Hey.. Thank you.. 😃
Firstly, there was no reason for 'shaq'.. No one really doubted Arjun and Radhika's relationship.. They had different reasons..
As for Sameer's reasons, he had his own insecurities.. You shall know soon.. Bechara was caught between his family members..


@ rajeeviansonai : Thanks dear.. 😃


MORE SOONISH!!







Edited by Fantasia_junkie - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#85
For moiii 😃
Unres!

Pshhh brace yourself for an insanely crazy comment... I blame the first line of the update🤣
Ab bhugto!

I started laughing reading the first line.. LOOOLL🤣 that's what triggered the scene in Phir Milenge... and here I am typing my comment after reading the very first line and laughing out loud. Hold on.. hotwa moment hai, thoda heartbeat kam ho jane do. *dhak dhak*

*Loooud sigh*

*Thud*

*Slaps herself*

Ahem! Back. No wait.. not done yet *dreamy*

Read one paragraph and still dreaming.

Eeeshhh SUNSET! Ho gaya mera swaha! One moment please.

Bass... main ek saal tak padhti rahungi and phir toh ho gaya ROFL

"The crimson hues were his favourite; the other inks of violet and black had been hers. And together, they would create a strong palette of colors across the sky, casting a warm shadow before the darkness could engulf it all."

Sighhh.🤪

Waaait... covered in white sheets? What happened then?😕

"But, there was another one that he could save." <- Another one? Who? Am I just being tooo interrogative today? 😛

Avniii.. raat ko Oreo ice cream mention karte hue sharam nahi ayi? Mujhe chahiye!! Why am I dieting.. Arrrghhh. Anyway, back to Ayush. He's such a cutie.. I love him already ❤️

Dark chocolate chips 😭

Flashbackkk! *Wipes dark chocolate out of her mind*

Chotu Arjun is soo adorable! I want to pinch his cheeks ... I am awwing at him right now LOL😆😆

"Fiensh". AWWW!😳😳😳

I love how u described Arjun and Radhika's relationship over the years.. so beautiful, so pure and yet.. it doesn't make sense why Sam would have misunderstood them. 😕 I am telling you, Radhika and Arjun are my new love hehee ❤️

Sooo he starts thinking about someone else...

Ahem... is he thinking about Sakshi? The hopeless romantic in me rises 🤪

"And hence, it troubled him and often gave him sleepless nights when he couldn't figure out why she had done what she did, and then disappeared from their lives like the passing breeze which ruffled up fallen leaves from the earth." <- Beautiful comparison!

I was right I was right! I swear I didn't read to the end when I wrote the above 😛

Eeeshhh the last line of the first part gave me goosebumps! My heart just started beating so fast.. This is becoming a super long comment and I haven't even started the next part yet .. Mera kya hoga mummyyy

Wedding! Maharasthrian wedding... I can so visualise it. I am virtually at a wedding right now.. I can even hear all the sounds. You describe everything so beautifully *sigh* I know overused line tha 😛

No no no no I am reaching the end? Whaaat?

Waaait.. retina scanner? Yeh kya hai? Secret lab? Secret plan? Ab main kaise soungi? Neend kaise aayegi?😕

Waaah kya lollipop tha! I am speechless now. And I no longer know what to write. So I shall stop here hahaa. My mind is like a twister right now.

You better update soon! 😛

Love yaaa 🤗

P.S - Back to drooling over the first line. *Thud*

Edited by SeasonOfLeaves - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#86
superb awesome update
and interesting one w8ng 4 next
plz update soon n thanks 4 pm

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Posted: 10 years ago
#87
Awesome part
Arjun agree to talk to radikha
What is matter between arakshi
Fb is nice
Con soon
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
#88
superb
radhika arjun meet lovely
ayush ko dekh kar arjun ko apane bachpan ki yaad aa gayi
arjun radhika bond
flashback aur arjun past u reverd nicely
sakshi ? arjun sakshi ki shadi kab kaise ?
arani marriege huyi thi naa ?
kash radhika wapas aa jaye sam ki life me
arakshi waiting
continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#89
nicce update...so excited to knw more about arakshi
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Posted: 10 years ago
#90
lovely update
ur writing skills r gr8
continue soon

Khushi

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