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Awesome!
Sakshi's past was really sad...Glad that arjun & sakshi meet again :)
Thanks so much Jia!!🤗
Wowww
Really niceSakshi had pastWhat about arjunArakshi scene superbContinue soon
Thank youu Naina😳
Originally posted by: Armagadon
Oh Wow Ritu!!!
Before I start this I would like to give a statutory warning...STATUTORY WARNING : FIRST HALF REFER FROM WHAT I HAVE WRITTEN IN AVANTIKAJI'S STORY (I GUESS U READ THAT) AND YES... THE AUTHOR OF THIS COMMENT HAS NOW SLIGHTLY LOST HER MENTAL BALANCE DUE TO A BILLION THINGS ON HER HEAD... SO FOR NOW SHE HERSELF HAS NO IDEA WHAT SHE IS WRITING...ISKE BAAD AGAR PADHNA CHAHO... TOH SACHI MAIN... ISS BAAR BHAGVAAN VISHNU BACHAYE AAPKO 😉Hahahahaa you're too funny🤣 I love reading your comments soo it doesn't matter😆😆😆I loved it...3 words... and I know they are not enough to define how much I have loved your story... basically you see... I just simply loved it for the fact... that a new concept... really... awesome idea... and yes... trains... they have been a soft spot for me 😳Being brought up outside India ... especially near the hilly areas... I have always been attached to trains... 😳 And whenever I got the time I used to rush back to Darjeeling... and then you know how I felt whenever I got up every morning at 5 to watch the Kanchenjunga rise before me...So these trains... the mention itself brought a smile on my face...Hehehe I know what you mean! Being here I kinda miss the Indian train journeys..My dad being an avid traveller loved to whisk us away even when in India during breaks (no matter how short they were😆) So yeah, I've literally been everywhere except north-east and of course, Kashmir (such a dream to go there though😳)I'm rambling too😆I used to live in Kolkata so Darjeeling was nearby😳Wait am I rambling! (Ritu's mind : Hmm... when will she comment on my story 😕) lol... I am terrible at mind reading... you probably wouldn't be thinking that I am semi schizophrenic?*looking at your almost nodding..*wait... you don't think that... ahem... do you?Nooo🤣Oh oh...So me coming to your story!Sakshi... her part was beautifully written... for the fun of it I thought to start dissecting your story and write about it's literary blah blah blah...Lol... I would and could never do that... your stories are just like a snowflake... one wouldn't want to touch it... just watch at the beautiful little snowflake softly settle on your fingertip... do nothing... just watch... or a better example...Your Eyewaala story... eesh... kya naam tha... kya naam de diya... yeh kamaal mere haathon main hi hai! lol... waha pe... when Arjun completes Sakshi's last wish... the butterfly... her reactions... yep... that is exactly how I feel while reading your stories...OH MY!☺️Itni tareeefff...thanks sooo much Shree! That really touched my heart❤️And so back to your story... loved it... truly... Sakshi's past... really... well written... wow... actually I liked what you have picked up... not everywhere have I read this is fiction you know... Rishab of just having used Sakshi... that was... ouch...thanks for the 101 idea to tell my parents why I ain't falling in love... nor getting married... aka... read Rishab Mathur! What if my hubby ends up to be one like that *eeh*Haha I say that to my Maa too! 😆😆😆Now jokes apart... her reactions... beautifully written... and Arjun's reaction... even better... oh wow... and the last part.. back to dreamy world...Yaar sach main... tum logo ki story main na... LSD hai kya? Lysergic Drug? It manages to make me drift off into an imaginary land!Don't know about mine but Avni ki stories mein deffo hai🤪☺️Well all the more helps me in my scripting and directing work!Loads of luv,~ U do know who I am 😉P.S : I tried to read ur story again and thought of doing line by line commenting... but then I realized that one good hour would by then! 😆 *counting words* *haila! again above 100!*
Awww thanks sooo much for all those nice words Shree! You're a bengali right?Silly me never asked😆
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