Arakshi TS - Train of Coincidences - Epilogue pg 9

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@Arakshiya_58

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Posted: 10 years ago

#41

First a big sorry for not commenting on first chapter...dont know how i forget...idiot gausi...😡 😡

coming to story...
again an amazing as welll as wonderfulll creation...
love it soo much...
from starting to end its superbbb...
there last scene of part is just awwssmmm...
reaaly magical one again...
may i ask u to con. this please...please...please...

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Snehajain

@Snehajain

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Posted: 10 years ago

#42

Awesome update...

Sakshi never went Mumbai...

Arakshi's simple convo in train was very impactfull...😃😃😃

Both felt different when Sakshi left the train...😃😃😃

Arjun became bhoot...😆😆😆

Again an impactful convo between them...😃😃😃

Sakshi learnt to trust...atleast for this journey...😃😃😃

Thanks for PM...

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misakiscarlet

@misakiscarlet

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Posted: 10 years ago

#43

amazing..
loved it..
the way u wrote it i could.imagine it all over..
at last sakshi is able is trust him.. loved their convo.
thnx for pm

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neeraja

@life93

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Posted: 10 years ago

#44

hi ritu🤗

take a bow lady👏...oh my dremland queen 😛❤️

again ! haye arjun and sakshi conversation ! arjun ka sakhsi o tukur tukur dekhna barish me

for u ...

and then co incidence kahun write ki qaramat😉...the portayal of sakshi's home in power cut i can imagine

and ten bhoot ishh arjun ki entry and their sugary sweet convo loved it !!

and hey !!😲

did he propose her ???

and i was like yahooo !!!!

but ab itna achha comment hai toh epilogue ??

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anitasharma

@anitasharma

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Posted: 10 years ago

#45

Lovely update
their train journey was so beautiful

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fly.high

@fly.high

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Posted: 10 years ago

#46

the last and final part of
this!

how dare u say this
this ws so beautiful and magical

pls ritu continue this story

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Ritu

@SeasonOfLeaves

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Posted: 10 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: life93
hi ritu🤗

take a bow lady👏...oh my dremland queen 😛❤️

again ! haye arjun and sakshi conversation ! arjun ka sakhsi o tukur tukur dekhna barish me

for u ...

and then co incidence kahun write ki qaramat😉...the portayal of sakshi's home in power cut i can imagine

and ten bhoot ishh arjun ki entry and their sugary sweet convo loved it !!

and hey !!😲

did he propose her ???

and i was like yahooo !!!!

but ab itna achha comment hai toh epilogue ??

Awwiee thank youu Neeru🤗😳

Your comment makes me miss Bharatee here She uses Pooh bear emos na

Anywaay, I know she is busy .. coming back to this! Yep.. kind of he did😉

LOL you really want an epilogue? Or another part?😲

I did have another part in mind..let's see if I can write it for you😳

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Ritu

@SeasonOfLeaves

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Posted: 10 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: fly.high
the last and final part of
this!

how dare u say this
this ws so beautiful and magical

pls ritu continue this story

You're here after sooo long!

Thanks sooo much Aisha! You really liked it that much?☺️

I will try to if i can 😳

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Ritu

@SeasonOfLeaves

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Posted: 10 years ago

#49

Originally posted by: Arakshiya_58
First a big sorry for not commenting on first chapter...dont know how i forget...idiot gausi...😡 😡

coming to story...
again an amazing as welll as wonderfulll creation...
love it soo much...
from starting to end its superbbb...
there last scene of part is just awwssmmm...
reaaly magical one again...
may i ask u to con. this please...please...please...

Thank you sooo much Gausiyaa🤗

It's okay rey..don't beat yourself up for it😆 I will try to write another part😳