Arakshi TS - Train of Coincidences - Epilogue pg 9

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IArmageddonI

@IArmageddonI

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Posted: 11 years ago

#11

Oh Wow Ritu!!!

Before I start this I would like to give a statutory warning...

STATUTORY WARNING : FIRST HALF REFER FROM WHAT I HAVE WRITTEN IN AVANTIKAJI'S STORY (I GUESS U READ THAT) AND YES... THE AUTHOR OF THIS COMMENT HAS NOW SLIGHTLY LOST HER MENTAL BALANCE DUE TO A BILLION THINGS ON HER HEAD... SO FOR NOW SHE HERSELF HAS NO IDEA WHAT SHE IS WRITING...

ISKE BAAD AGAR PADHNA CHAHO... TOH SACHI MAIN... ISS BAAR BHAGVAAN VISHNU BACHAYE AAPKO 😉

I loved it...

3 words... and I know they are not enough to define how much I have loved your story... basically you see... I just simply loved it for the fact... that a new concept... really... awesome idea... and yes... trains... they have been a soft spot for me 😳

Being brought up outside India ... especially near the hilly areas... I have always been attached to trains... 😳 And whenever I got the time I used to rush back to Darjeeling... and then you know how I felt whenever I got up every morning at 5 to watch the Kanchenjunga rise before me...

So these trains... the mention itself brought a smile on my face...

Wait am I rambling! (Ritu's mind : Hmm... when will she comment on my story 😕) lol... I am terrible at mind reading... you probably wouldn't be thinking that I am semi schizophrenic?

*looking at your almost nodding..*

wait... you don't think that... ahem... do you?

Oh oh...

So me coming to your story!

Sakshi... her part was beautifully written... for the fun of it I thought to start dissecting your story and write about it's literary blah blah blah...

Lol... I would and could never do that... your stories are just like a snowflake... one wouldn't want to touch it... just watch at the beautiful little snowflake softly settle on your fingertip... do nothing... just watch... or a better example...

Your Eyewaala story... eesh... kya naam tha... kya naam de diya... yeh kamaal mere haathon main hi hai! lol... waha pe... when Arjun completes Sakshi's last wish... the butterfly... her reactions... yep... that is exactly how I feel while reading your stories...

And so back to your story... loved it... truly... Sakshi's past... really... well written... wow... actually I liked what you have picked up... not everywhere have I read this is fiction you know... Rishab of just having used Sakshi... that was... ouch...

thanks for the 101 idea to tell my parents why I ain't falling in love... nor getting married... aka... read Rishab Mathur! What if my hubby ends up to be one like that *eeh*

Now jokes apart... her reactions... beautifully written... and Arjun's reaction... even better... oh wow... and the last part.. back to dreamy world...

Yaar sach main... tum logo ki story main na... LSD hai kya? Lysergic Drug? It manages to make me drift off into an imaginary land!

Well all the more helps me in my scripting and directing work!

Loads of luv,

~ U do know who I am 😉

P.S : I tried to read ur story again and thought of doing line by line commenting... but then I realized that one good hour would by then! 😆 *counting words* *haila! again above 100!*

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sisodia_shefali

@sisodia_shefali

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#12

u r totally in love with rains right 😃
that kalka express is a lovely rain going through mountains among beautiful clouds lush green forest what u say is hasin wadiya
so first time when sakshi arjun meet was when he came to arrest her cheater husband who married her only to get access to bank 😡😡
poor sakshi she thought that he really did loved him but was hurt and broken to know
his reality
arjun felt the pain sakshi felt and he wanted to comfort her
now after a yr they r again in train together and both remember each other
rain broke the ice btw them 😊
so a train which took away sakshi's love will give it back to her in form of arjun 😊
thanks for pm

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_shadesnature_

@_shadesnature_

Stunner

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Posted: 11 years ago

#13

Di read later but first tell me who made this fanatastic banner

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Ritu

@SeasonOfLeaves

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: NATURESHIVANI
Di read later but first tell me who made this fanatastic banner

Sure Prakriti 😳

Haha I did 😉..wrote my name in the corner but it became really light so it's barely visible😛

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_shadesnature_

@_shadesnature_

Stunner

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Posted: 11 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: SeasonOfLeaves

Sure Prakriti 😳
Haha I did 😉..wrote my name in the corner but it became really light so it's barely visible😛

Oh god it's one of the best banner that I have seen on this forum 👏

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Areesha

@Areesha566

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#16

poor sakshi

beautiful part

every emotion was written beautifuly

waiting for 2nd part

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Ritu

@SeasonOfLeaves

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Posted: 11 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: NATURESHIVANI

Oh god it's one of the best banner that I have seen on this forum 👏

Aww thank youu..that means a lot😳

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_shadesnature_

@_shadesnature_

Stunner

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Posted: 11 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: SeasonOfLeaves

Aww thank youu..that means a lot😳

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Farheen Shaikh

@ll-Farheen-ll

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#19

Rituuu Ye hug mera original naam likhne k liye .Dekha how it feels to real your real name unlike the others😆😆😆

Rishabh

Saakshi

They say,Your soul mate is the person who mends your broken heart, by simply giving you, Theirs.

Ritu 😛

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Swara85

@Swara85

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#20

Wow...!!Nature is my weakness, 😳the way you have brought it out in the
scenes was awesome..I was totally into it, felt so real.
It was amazing..
Arakshi's first meet to the meet after a year..from her happy being to she getting cheated..from her bubbly, happy self to her pain, hurt, broken
self..Everything was so real, you have portrayed every emotion well.
Hate her husband..😡
Loved every bit of the update..🤗
Cont soon.
P.S: Superb banner..
P.P.S: What's your name..?

Edited by Swara85 - 11 years ago