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Before giving a critical appreciation for the last part of the quirky story,I request the kind author to reveal who is your Muse?? 😛 I am in love with your selection of ideas,words,settings and not to forget pictures.I saw sparkles and heard firecrackers all round the story.My sister wondered what made me blush and at times gape in awe gluing my eyes on the petite mobile screen.😃
The passages are so neatly conceptualized and nothing felt out of context.Choice of partners are really outstanding.The themes of the story are a colourful tapestry studded with highly suggestive and picturesque images.The use of precise,lucid,clear language adds to the glint of the story.All your stories are swathes of love influence punctuated by exceptional ideas of social relevance.What you all need is a good editor for your works and all more is appreciation for such a surge of writing.
With wishes.Keep writing.
P.S.:yours works speak to me during long solitary walks and in seclusion amidst the swarming crowd.😊😊
Cricket
Ye Hai Mohabbatein
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