Arakshi SS : Unchahi Arzoo... *Last Update - End* Pg 34 - Page 13

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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome updates
ch-1
feeling bad for sakshi
she left her education
love the way you described arakshi's emotions
ch-2
OMG arjun is married
sakshi is maid in arjun's house
that sonia😡😡
waiting for the next part
loved it
thanx for the pm
cont soon😊


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Posted: 11 years ago
amazing story.
read it now.
loved it.
plz cont soon.
sorry for late comment.
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Posted: 11 years ago
@ Aditiarakshi : Glad you are loving the story 😃

@ Sweetpari4u97 : Thanks 😳

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Posted: 11 years ago
okay i am late to comment again..

but i did read both the parts...and they were intense..beautifully blended fbs and present..

the pain, the sadness and the hesistance,...everything blended in a color of their inner feelings..lovely..

i have a hint about this background..but not sure yet..will wait for u to unfold solwly..😳

please do continue soon...thanks for the pm...

and sorry for this late comment..


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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: rimi_invisible

okay i am late to comment again..

but i did read both the parts...and they were intense..beautifully blended fbs and present..

the pain, the sadness and the hesistance,...everything blended in a color of their inner feelings..lovely..

i have a hint about this background..but not sure yet..will wait for u to unfold slowly..😳

please do continue soon...thanks for the pm...

and sorry for this late comment..



Oh wow this is a beautiful surprise...

As in I didn't expect you to read this!

Please don't ask an apology for being late... *hug*

Even better... I am glad that you loved it... am posting the next chapter in a few minutes... do stay tuned...

Love,

Shree...

(Btw... remember the story which I got inspired by KTK... jald that is coming... matlab next year... hehe... can't thank you enough for that! I made the banner... will send it... do tell me how it is😳)
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Posted: 11 years ago
REMOVED DUE TO PLAIGIARISM

Only selected loyal readers shall be sent a pm of my blog.

Pls pm me for blog link. Any shy silent reader... yet loyal.. you can scrap/pm me

Regards,

Armageddon


But this story won't end...

Not at all... 😉

Par yeh safar yaha nahi... bas kahi aur...
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Posted: 11 years ago
u make me cry dear..really majburi insaan se kya kya karva sakti hai...poor sakshi she is great..love the bro sis moment...rahul is so cute...that bl*** bi*** sonia...she is lady how can she talk like that...arjun respect sakshi a lot..but he also have his reasons...love sam peheli nazr mai latto...and ayesha s way of dealing this case was superb...!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Heart wrenching update.
U totally made me cry..
It was superbly written.
Just touched my heart..
Everything has been described beautifully..
Every emotions, hurt, anguish..
U portrayed Sakshi's state beautifully..
Li'le Rahul is so sweet!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Sonia aarrgghhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I so wish to kill her..
Loved the way Ayesha handled Sakshi.
Hmm now Dr. Ayesha will give them some talk..
It's superbb...
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Posted: 11 years ago

lovely update shree...

a lot of revelation..i wasnt expecting it so soon...but it was something i had guessed in the first update itself..😊

how and why did arjun get married to sonia in the first place?? i understand sonia is there for money but how did arjun fall prey to the whole stuff??

moreover...giving up the property isnt a better choice than playing with a teenage girl's emotions and life..and her virginity too??

well itna sochungi to story kaise hoga...nways potray of sakshi's helplessness was a cliche..the typical hindi film wala...remember 3 idiots and its bindi??😆😆

waiting for the turns in the story...continue soon...

finally i am early in one of your story...😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
super duper mindblowing update...
wow...you have portreayed each charecters emotions correctly...
poor sakshi she agreed to be a surrogate mother sake of her family...
that b***h sonia... hate her... what an attitude...
and omg Aisha kapoor is a doctor...
very mature and calm charecter...
arjun cared for sakshi... very beautiful bonding between them
love their relation...
its not love but still it touches the heart...
a well written update...
one of the best... each charecter's emotions and view...
no words for it

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