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Posted: 10 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: Sakshithegreat

Thanks guys I will be more descriptive next time and thanks for your comments
And arakshiya58 you can call me jaan I don't mind will update hopefully today


skill...waiting...hurry up... 😃 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
#22

Originally posted by: Armagadon


@ Princy : Arrey tujhe kya bataun? Eeshu ko hasi isliye aa rahi hai kyunki *ahem* kehte hai ki jab ladkiyan aise hi haste hai without any reason na... tab... ek signal hota hai ki woh.. *ahem* pyaar main pad gayi hai! *Mubaaraka*

Pyar ki dli tu peetegi mujhse!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#23
awesome update
love dress selection
loved it
thanx for the pm
cont soon😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#24
I know it has been a really long time since I updated so I am
sorry. Here goes Part 2. Comment and please hit the like button.

Part 2
"Sakshi. Sakshi" Arjun called while spraying water in her face.
Sakshi slowly opens her eyes. She sees herself really close to
Arjun and quickly gets up.
Sakshi: Aap log yaha kya kar rahe hai. Mera pura kiya dara pe
paani fer di.
Arjun: Oh excuse me. Hume bhi koyi shauq nahi hai aapke kaam
me dakal andazi kar ni
Sakshi: Oh really. Toh phir kyu aye hai aap yaha pe
Sameer sensed the fight starting between them.
Sameer: Voh Commisioner sahib nai hume yaha bejaa. Aapki
jaan ko katra thi isliye.
Sakshi: Yeh commisioner sahib bhi na. Ab kya kaam assign karega
mujhe. Oh god

The team was just standing there watching this discussion. Sakshi's
phone started ringing. It was near Arjun's feet. Arjun was about to
pick it up when Sakshi quickly came and got it.
"Strange" Arjun thought
Sakshi saw the caller ID and got scared. Nobody noticed except
the sharp ACP. She quickly hung up. Then it ringed again.
Aisha: Sakshi tumhara phone baj raha hai.
Sakshi: Jaanti hu voh stupid ads ke liye call kar rahe hai. Nothing
important

Then the commisioner comes there.
Sakshi: Commisioner uncle. Aap ETF officers ko kyu yaha bulaya. Main thodi
itni asani se maroongi.
Commisioner: Iske do vajeh hai. Pehle ki tumhari jaan jane vali thi aur doosra kyu
ki mujhe ek important announcement kar na hai
He turns to the team
Commisioner: Abh tak to aap log Sakshi ko jaan gaye honga. Vo ek crime reporter
hai. One of the best ones in the country.
Arjun: Voh toh lag hi raha hai he said in a mocking way
Sakshi: Haw very funny.
Chotu and Shree had a laugh.
Commisioner: So as I said she is the best. Isliye vo aapki team join karegi. Aap logo
ko help karegi case mein aur aap logo ke kaam ko duniya taak pouchayi gi.
Arjun: But sir hume ek journalist ki zaroorat nahi hai.
Commisioner: Maine apna faisla keh diya. Mein aap logo se poonch nahi raha tha
bataa raha tha.
Sakshi mumbled: Oh god ab is Akdu ko bhi jelna padega.
The whole team heard it and gave a small chuckle.

Several months passed by since Sakshi joined ETF. Sakshi, Shree, Liza, Aisha and
Chotu have become great friends. Sakshi and Sameer are like brother and sisters.
Sakshi and Arjun dislike each other. Always fight with each other. One day they got
a case
Sameer: Team we have a case. Ek puri family ka murder hogaya. Unki beti College se akar
apni puri parivaar ko dekh kar toot gayi hai. We have to find the killer soon.
Sakshi was really sad.
Sakshi: Mein abhi aati hoon.
She goes to the bathroom and starts crying. She cries her whole heart out. Then she gets
a call
Sakshi: Hello
Other Person:*************************************
Sakshi: Please don't hurt her. Aap jo chate hai vo main karoongi
Arjun is passing by when he hears Sakshi talking
Sakshi: Please don't hurt her. Vo meri zindagi hain. Uske bina mein maar jaungi.
Other Person:*****************************************************
Sakshi: Ok main aapko badh me phone karoongi okay.
She hangs up the phone and Arjun is still listening
Sakshi: Yeh saab meri vajeh sai ho raha hai. Mujhe use kisi bhi halat me bachana
hoga.
Arjun thinks: Yeh Sakshi roh kyu rahi hai aur kise bachane ki baat kar rahi hai
He quickly hides before Sakshi comes out. Sakshi quickly fixes her makeup and goes to
the conference room
Arjun: Pata lagana pare ga ki Sakshi kiske baare mein baat kar rahi thi.

They go to the crime scene and investigate. The daughter's name is Payal. They go to
meet her.
Payal: Mein college mein thi. Jab mein vapas aayi to maine dekha khi
She starts crying
Aisha: Don't worry. Hum us katil ko zaroor pakad lenge.
Arjun: Shree uss family ke har ek member ki call records check karo. Hume zaroor
koyi surag milega.
Everyone left the house but Sakshi stayed back. Arjun forgot his phone so he goes back in,
Sakshi: Payal don't worry. Hum usse doond lenge.
Payal: Mam aap to usko pakar lenge par phir mera kya hoga. Mein apni family se bohot
pyaar karti thi.
Sakshi: Main bhi apni family se bohot pyaar karti thi. Par phir bhi unn logo ne mera saath
chod diya na. Ek na ek din tho aisa hona hi tha.
Sakshi's eyes welled up.
Payal: Aapki family ko kya hua.
Sakshi: Vo bohat hi lambi kahani hai. Abhi tum apna kyaal rakho. Agar tumhari family tumhe
aisa dekhengi to une kaisa lagega.
Payal wipes Sakshi's tears
Payal: Aur agar aapki family bhi aapko aisa dekhengi toh unne kaisa lagega.
Sakshi and Payal hug each other.
Sakshi: Ab mein chalti hoon. Tum apna kyaal rakhna ok
Payal: Mam thanks. Aapse baat karke mujhe bohot accha laga.
Sakshi: Your welcome. Bye. Aur agar kuch bhi zaroorat ho tho tum mujhe kisi bhi vaqt
call car sakthi ho
Sakshi then leaves but ACP Arjun has heard everything.
Arjun in his mind: Aisa kya hua hai Sakshi ki family ke saath jo vo sabse chupa rahi hai.
Pata karna padega

Okay guys sorry if it was short. Hope you liked it. Comment and hit the like button.
Silent readers please atleast hit the like button. I will probably update tomorrow. Let's
hope for the best. And my grandma has went to my country so please pray for her




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Posted: 10 years ago
#25
Finally intezaar khatam hua!!!!!!!
koi nahi...take ur time nd update...
coming to update...
Its reallly awssmmeee!!!!
yup...our sakshi as jangali bili always...hosh me aate hi fight!!!😆 😆
yiiippeee!!!Saki in ETF...and all became friendsss...
Ooops...kuch chize kabhi mahi badlati like Arakshi fight nd care...nd we always love them for that...
aww...feeling sad for sakshi...about whom she is talking on phone?????
hope arjun find her truth soon...
con.sooon jaan...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#26

Originally posted by: Arakshiya_58



OMG!!!!!congratulations...angle jaan... 😉 😉 🥳


🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
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Posted: 10 years ago
#27
Really nice update dear..

Aha... liked it...

Arjun and Sakshi's fights... yeh toh common cheez hai...

Hmm... something going around Sakshi 😕

Par humare ACP sahab thodi na miss karenge kisi baat ko...

Poor Sakshi... I feel she has suffered a lot right?

Hope Arjun would be able to decipher as to what is going around...

Just one tip dear... you really have potential... 😃 bas more clarity during the transition of scenes... and a little bit more description... that's it... apart from that your story is going really good 👍🏼

Will pray for ur grandmumma 😊

Loads of luv dear...

~ Armagadon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#28

Originally posted by: EashaYousufzai

Pyar ki dli tu peetegi mujhse!!!


*wink* pehle aap toh free ho jayo meri jaan... tab tak main bhaag chuki hogi 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
#29
Awesome update.
Really loved it.
Ur writing skill has improved..
I am loving the way u r proceeding.
COn soonz..
What happened to ur grandmom?
May Allah bless her...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#30
awesome update
wow sakshi as pholan devi, nice
what happend to sakshi's family?
Who she was talking to?
Update soon

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